T.P. "Pat" Jaques

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Author Jeribo's excellent piece "The Morning River" did not disappoint. For more exacting helps, see my comments at the bottom of each chapter (all but one or two). Mostly a Western with touches of Police Procedural and Mystery. I was hooked from Chapter One onward. Since there's but the one usage of our Lord's name in vain, and one swear word--begins with S, excrement--my advice would be to cut both. Have "The Morning River" be 100% clean, instead of it being relegated to, shoved over or elbowed in the general direction of the adult sections of our libraries and book stores. Also, this work would be suitable for all ages if it weren't for the one bedroom scene, which was pretty much written in a PG-13 style.

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