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Riptide

Riptide is the story of a gifted young student who suffers an accident that puts her life in danger.

The treatment saves her life and grants her superpowers.

During the treatment the writer refers to a doss instead of a dose, but does it so frequently one wonders if it was written this way on purpose.

Tusitala is a very talented writer that, in my opinion, needs a bit more time and practice to make her writing and storytelling shine! But, then again, don't we all?

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B.R.A.I.N

Wow! I'm allowed to write a review about my own novel? That's a first! Anything good that I say will sound obnoxious and anything bad would be the equivalent of shooting myself in the foot 😊. Perhaps I will just say three words in sanscrit: sat, cit, ananda. According to Vedic philosophy, these three words describe the original constitution and birthright of each and every one of us. We are eternal, full of knowledge, and full of bliss. If you wish to find out more you will have to read my novel from beginning to end. And please don't forget to let me know what you think.

May your journey through life be happy and peaceful. All the best!

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Poems for and from my stories

I like the poems.

Especially the first one, reflecting the words of a departed sister. There are some minor grammatical mistakes.

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