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Riptide

Riptide is the story of a gifted young student who suffers an accident that puts her life in danger.

The treatment saves her life and grants her superpowers.

During the treatment the writer refers to a doss instead of a dose, but does it so frequently one wonders if it was written this way on purpose.

Tusitala is a very talented writer that, in my opinion, needs a bit more time and practice to make her writing and storytelling shine! But, then again, don't we all?

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Poems for and from my stories

I like the poems.

Especially the first one, reflecting the words of a departed sister. There are some minor grammatical mistakes.

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