Excellent but not my style
The writing was excellent. The shift between POV's perfect, the characters developed and interesting, and there were unexpected turns that made the story even better.
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However, it started off fast then slowed down throughout the book. Perhaps some would enjoy this but its not my style.
In all reality, I believe I'd the book was enlarged and split into two books (such as after what happened to Gary) then both books would be five star for me. Its just that the first part of the book was about one thing while the second Prt was about an entirely different plotline.
Again, the writing style is excellent and I'm definitely going to check out more of your books because of this fact alone. Hope I didnt offend you by this review, but as an author, I know it's the honest comments that help rather than false praise.