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An interesting beginning
As with many stories like this, it has a familiarity with a wizard story but only in the framework. For my liking, it has a bit too much of a teen love story. The fighting brings it back to what I enjoy. It was a nice plot with the alpha order where I wondered if it would pull the defeat into a better ally. Alas, it went the other way, and will he join another pack or be left to survive alone. Your writing style is enjoyable to read as you did not make up words that are difficult to sound out, as with several science fiction novels. I'm looking forward to where the story goes from here.
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