Brandy

I am an aspiring writer who would love to have a book published one day.

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FANTASIC!

When I first began reading the story, I immediately thought of, "The Giver". But the story grew and changed so much. Dreaming is not allowed, so obviously she is intrigued but Jake, a Dreamer, who opens her up to a new world just by asking about his sister.
From there, she is sent an epic quest where she discovers that there is so much more going on and that even she, is not what it seems. It was an exciting read, following Cal as she finds new friends and discovers that her world is nothing like she thought. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy, adventure or just a fun story with great characters.

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wonderful

What a great take on the idea of finding your dream man. The story was very emotional with strong characters. I would recommend this story to any who wants to read a good love story. And yes, Italian food does make everything better.

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Brilliant

I kept finding myself drawn back to your story. I loved your writing style and found myself laughing more than once. It is a great mix of magic and humor. (Maybe fix the intro to chapter 9 as it is quite bold!)

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Amazing!

As someone who is a huge fan of zombies and has spent many an hour playing Fallout, I simply loved this story. It was such a great read and the characters and their struggles were well written!

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A great read

I really enjoyed the lore and the world that was created. Anyone who enjoys scifi will enjoy this story.

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Lovely

I stumbled upon this wonderful story and I am glad I did! It was a beautiful, short tale that left me wondering how many moments I missed!

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Amazing!

A wonderful tale spoken from the perspective of Elmyra as she watches her daughter struggle through heartache. As a huge Final Fantasy VII fan, I simply loved this story!

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Loved!

I absolutely loved this story! Cloud and Aeris are my favorite paring and this was everything I hoped it would be! You wove a beautiful story!

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Fantasic!

As today is Friday the 13th, I decided to read something appropriate for the day. And you did not disappoint! You wove a wonderful tale of pain and betrayal that kept me wanting to know more. But what really won me over was the ending! It was so unexpected!

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