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Kadero

Great start. Interesting twist..reading and sucked into the book..love it!

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Kadero

Very well written, enjoyed the story!

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Kadero

Oh my!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Great story..creepy...

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Kadero

Good story, well written. I enjoyed the read!

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Kadero

Love it! Well written, great story..I'm intrigued to read the next book!!

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Kadero

Love it! Great twist on all the known fairy tales!!

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Kadero

Excellent story, well written. I enjoyed every chapter!

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Kadero

Awesome story! Very well written. I enjoyed every page!

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Kadero

Loved it. Enjoyed the reboots! Great imagination!

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Kadero

Great storyline!! I hope there is more to come...

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Kadero

Very interesting..what a twist!! Loved how through the entire story glimpses of the end were included..well done!!

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Kadero

Excellent book..exciting and well constructed characters..easy to fall into the story. Enjoyed how even the females were bad asses!!

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Kadero

Grwat book.. Definitely keeping me enthralled. Still trying to figure out what is going on!! Great suspence and very well written!

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Kadero

Awsome!! That answers so much!! Love it!! I cant wait until the next chapters!! This chapter puts the entire book in perspective..now i can understand each characters point of view. The simple explanations of their backgrounds, even just a glimpse, helps a great deal!!

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Kadero

Interesting twist. Im very into the story...

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Kadero

another amazing twist!! Bravo...excellent read!!

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Kadero

Great books..very well written. Excellent plot with twists and turns.

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Kadero

A bit too early to tell. So far descent set up for the story..we will see...

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Kadero

Starting out interesting..we will see how it goes...how many more people will Tommy kill?? He doesn't even notice those he killed or feel bad for taking their lives..starting out young!! Big family and an unnoticed child is starting out to be trouble!!

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Kadero

Incredible!! Loved this story! Can't wait for book 2!

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Kadero

Interesting..I enjoyed reading, curious what's going to happen...

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Kadero

Great story, hope another book is coming...

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Kadero

Wow...that certainly turned! Loved it!!

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Kadero

Amazing! Loved this story. All the ties of the secrets and conspiracies floating around today was perfectly done. Definitely makes you re look at what's going on in the world now. Could this story be a true account of what is to happen?! Horrifyingly possible!!! Very talented writing!

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Kadero

Great story..very sad not to have another story to read!

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Kadero

Interesting... enjoyed the story!

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Kadero

A great feel good story. What a great Dad!! Enjoyed the story..thanks!

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Kadero

Beautiful story! I enjoyed reading it! Thank you!

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Kadero

Great story but a lot of incorrect words, misspelled such as God instead of dog๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ still enjoyed the story interesting plot!

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Kadero

Great story, enjoyed reading it..Thanks!

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Kadero

Very well written, great story! Enjoyed this story!

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Kadero

Great story..I enjoyed reading it.. Thx!!

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Kadero

Well written, great explanation of the victims feelings and trials. Great uplifting story for those who have been abused. Well done!

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Kadero

Loved this amazing adventure!! I'm hopeful for a third book!

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Kadero

Enjoyed reading this book! Well written, flowed very nicely! Thank you!

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Kadero

Very well written and a great thrilling story! Very much enjoyed your story!

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Kadero

Loved it!! Amazing writing, very complex characters, this story would make an amazing movie!

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Kadero

Excellent read! Loved the story..fine line between love and hate!!!

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Kadero

Great story!!

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Kadero

Great follow up.. enjoyed reading again

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Kadero

Excellent story, well written. Enjoyed every page!

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Kadero

Amazing story..well written. I enjoyed every page!!

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Kadero

Great book! Your writing is great! You form the story very well..thank you for the enjoyable read!

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Kadero

Great 2nd book.. obvious she knew the stalker early on but still very well put together. Your a talented writer! Thank you again for the 2nd book!

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Kadero

Well written! Very enjoyable! Thank you!

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Kadero

Great story!! Well written

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Kadero

๐Ÿค” interesting..well written... heartbreaking end.....

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Kadero

Love it..can't wait for updates!!

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Kadero

Loved it! Well written very enjoyable

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Kadero

Ahhhhh...what did she choose?!
Enjoyed the book..wish the kids were a tad bit older to fit better with the sex scenes..but sirah sirah!!

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Kadero

Loved it! Great writing..only thing I didn't like was the characters over using "Erm..."๐Ÿ™„

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Kadero

Great story..enjoyed this trilogy!

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Kadero

Great second story..very much enjoyed!!

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Kadero

Well written, enjoyed reading this story!

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Kadero

Great story.. couldn't put it down..such a tragedy๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Kadero

Enjoyed the story, well written. Ends like this?!

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Kadero

Good story..but it is a bit choppy. Doesn't flow as well as it could

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Kadero

Another great story! Thank you!

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Kadero

Great story..I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Kadero

Very enjoyable...great imagination and we'll written

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Kadero

Hmm..another book? Don't leave me hanging ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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Kadero

Hmmm.. interesting...a second book??!!

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Kadero

Amazing story. Written very well. Very intricate and imaginative. I enjoy your writing style

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Kadero

Great story..I enjoyed it!!

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Kadero

Great follow up.. possible continuation hinted at the end?!!๐Ÿค”

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Kadero

Great read! Can't wait for book 2!

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Kadero

Interesting..good read!

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Kadero

Great story!! Excellent author!

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Kadero

Wow...this book took a wild turn I could never have guessed. well done!

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Kadero

Well done..quite a few twist..it could happen to any of us...depressing thought....

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Kadero

Excellent story..very well written. I felt as if I was there in the middle of this crazy mess!!

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Kadero

Excellent story. Very well done and a very emotional rollercoaster that is an unfortunate reality to many. I enjoyed reading this, thank you.

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Kadero

Great story..great mix of horror and lessons, a lesson told already but very refreshing approach..and still flooded the story with religion.

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Kadero

Great story. Very well written..very descriptive. Kept me enthralled to the end!

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Kadero

Great story! I hope you have more coming!

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Kadero

Excellent story, very well done. But a bit confusing switching between first and last names..

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Kadero

Hmmm...very interesting. Well done story very fulfilling.

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Kadero

Great book
Well written, kept me on the edge of my seat! Loved it!

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Kadero

Again.. excellent writing. I was disappointed before I started reading because it was only 15 pages..but great read!! I wish you had more writings on here...๐Ÿ˜ข

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Kadero

Very excellent book. Very well written. Great plot, kept me hooked till the end. Great twist having the wife be the initial killer. Loved it!

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Kadero

Nice story...I assumed the affair when mason mentioned the noisey stair. I would suggest either changing the type of purse or the girlfriends last name..both Burberry...hmmm.

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Kadero

Interesting twist of a flood and with mermaids!

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Kadero

Very well written. Enjoyed the twists and turns!

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Kadero

Loved this story. Very well written!!

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Kadero

Good story but a bit confusing. Switching from different first person's abruptly..I had to reread parts to be sure which characters perspective we were looking through. A bit of a rushed plot as well but story has potential!

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Kadero

Intriguing... interested to see how this story will play out..I hope you have a follow up book!

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Kadero

Very interesting..events happen very quickly...ready for the next book...I'm left hanging!!

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Kafero

Excellent story!! Very well done! Characters were very well developed!

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Kadero

Great story..I hope there is more to come. Great twist on the already done "apocalypse". A few chapters with a lot of spelling mistakes that made it hard to follow the story..but a bit of editing for an easy fix!

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Kadero

Enjoying the story....need the rest!!!๐Ÿ™„

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Kadero

Very interesting and quite twisted!! Bravo!

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Kadero

Very well done...i enjoyed this story and the intricacies of the computer and technology world intertwined in it. Excellent job.

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Kadero

Wow..loved it! Twusted all the way to the end. Very imaginative!!

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Kadero

Great writing..im hooked. Very twisted. Im sure many up and coming author's can relate!

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Kadero

Awesome..i am hoping there is a continuance. Different twist on the zombie apocolypse!!

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Kadero

Great story. Very well written..allows you to connect to all the characters. Cant wait to see the putcome!

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Kadero

Very twisted crazy story. Im hooked!! Bring this cult down! Cheering for the sinners!!

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Kadero

So far very interesting. Good buildup of the story. Interested in seeing how it plays out...

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Kadero

Great book..a few errors but otherwise well written. Very interested in seeing where this progresses to!

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Kadero

Great story. Intricate fight scenes and interesting plot. Cant wait for more chapters!! Very curious to see how this progresses.

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Kadero

Interesting...instead of wolves, dragons! Prefer the dragon part i believe. Very upset over Rhett..disturbing how he is prisoner in the dragon realm...

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Kadero

Very interesting. Intrigued by this angel world and the diff types of angels. Looking foward to the rest of the story

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Kadero

Great 2nd book..awesome follow up. The saga continues..im hooked!!

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Kadero

Great book. Enjoying reading this..great twist of the afterlife and death. Hope Narissa drops her anger soon...great characters! Im rooting for her!

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Kadero

Interesting..im intrigued. A bit out there..are they in high school still? I assume so..awful young for such craziness!!

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Kadero

Interesting seeing into this underword! Some errors but nothing that editing cant fix. Plot so far has me intrigued..

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Kadero

Great tone to the story. Excellant point of view. Interesting so far. A lot of errors and misused words but nothing that editing cant fix!!

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Kadero

Great story. Very interested to be filled in on what magic Piper has. What exactly is being led up to...im in suspense..good job!

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Kadero

Building up to be very interesting...

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Kadero

This story is great!! Love the twist with the cat and the dragon always naked and both poin of views of the glitter witch and fire witch. Very amusing! Very well written..easily thrown into their very unorthodox world!

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Kadero

Very interesting so far...

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Kadero

Im intrigued to see where this is going

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Kadero

Great book. Amazing imagination!! Love it!

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Kadero

Great book..very well done

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Kaderi

Great books!! Love the story!!

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Kadero

Awsome! Love it so far!!

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Kadaro

Awsome! Very intricate and complex..loved it!

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Kadero

Great story!!

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Kadero

Excellent..great explanation of the different realms

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Kadero

So far pretty good. Great plot..would never happen in the real world!!๐Ÿ˜‚ a few errors and incorrect use of he and she..but you can still understand it.

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Kadero

So far pretty good. I do like her special powers..she is a bad ass! Hopefully it eont fall flat at the end...

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Kadero

Wow..amazing writing. Very impressed!! As far as whos kid..cant be Ehren..she was throwing up before they did it. As far as it being Maddox..wouldnt Zane have smelled her pregnancy when he got her free??? Hmm..cant wait to get an update!! So far this is the best book i have read on this app. Very well done!

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Kadero

Building up great so far...slenderman..lol lets see how this goes...

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Kadero

Some crammer and punctuation errors but so far story is building. Kids playing in the adult world..lol I am hoping it ends with as much build as the beginning...

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Kadero

Good so far, building a great start so far..so many questions!

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Kadero

Beginning was a bit rushed but the story is getting good now...hope it keeps up!!

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Kadero

So far it is a good start. Building up to a hopefully good story!!

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Kadero

Good build up. Interesting twist that her ghost buddy killed her Dad. Her flipping on him I'm sure will cause more crazy damage. Terrible place Ryder got thrown in.. Will we find out exactly what got her put in such an awful place? Interested in finding out.. Good descriptions. A few mistakes almost like the story was not proof read. We will see where this plot takes us. Is she super nuts? She does have a ghost buddy.. Or did.
The place sounds like it should have been shut down years ago. Filthy and un kept. Why is the place still open?
20 yrs later and they have a patients electrocution covered up? Strange.. No family to care about the kid? What's up with sis? She hates her bro that much that she didn't look into what happened to him? Crappy family.. What needs enemies with family like that??
I really do not like writing this much.. Rather just enjoy the story.

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Kadero

Crazy..could actually happen...damn government...

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Kadero

Great so far. A lot of steamy sex scenes..hope the fight scences are just as good! Plot is building for sure...

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Brandy

So far..filled with suspence. I too suspected the wife..all eyes were on the husband but no one considered her. In the begimning they emphasized it was a he or she...

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Kadero

Interesting..kept me intrigued
I did not enjoy the recaps..or the ending, very disheartening! No happy ending here! Would like to read more of the authors work

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Kadero

Interesting so far. Great mix into this realm

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