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Kadero

Grwat book.. Definitely keeping me enthralled. Still trying to figure out what is going on!! Great suspence and very well written!

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Kadero

Wow..very in depth. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Intricate build up! Great description of the characters! Keep writing for sure!!

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Kadero

So far very interesting. Im caught up in it waiting on a build up of a story. Good start, definatly descriptive and good explanation of the characters. A lot of mystery shrouding each different character. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out...

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Kadero

Interesting twist. Im very into the story...

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Kadero

another amazing twist!! Bravo...excellent read!!

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Kadero

Great books..very well written. Excellent plot with twists and turns.

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Kadero

Great start. Interesting twist..reading and sucked into the book..love it!

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Kadero

Love this book!! Definate twist on a done story genre..love it!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

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Kadero

Starting out interesting..we will see how it goes...how many more people will Tommy kill?? He doesn't even notice those he killed or feel bad for taking their lives..starting out young!! Big family and an unnoticed child is starting out to be trouble!!

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Kadero

Great story. Very well written..allows you to connect to all the characters. Cant wait to see the putcome!

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Kadero

Very twisted crazy story. Im hooked!! Bring this cult down! Cheering for the sinners!!

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Kadero

So far very interesting. Good buildup of the story. Interested in seeing how it plays out...

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Kadero

Great book..a few errors but otherwise well written. Very interested in seeing where this progresses to!

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Kadero

Great story. Intricate fight scenes and interesting plot. Cant wait for more chapters!! Very curious to see how this progresses.

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Kadero

Interesting...instead of wolves, dragons! Prefer the dragon part i believe. Very upset over Rhett..disturbing how he is prisoner in the dragon realm...

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Kadero

Very interesting. Intrigued by this angel world and the diff types of angels. Looking foward to the rest of the story

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Kadero

Great 2nd book..awesome follow up. The saga continues..im hooked!!

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Kadero

Great book. Enjoying reading this..great twist of the afterlife and death. Hope Narissa drops her anger soon...great characters! Im rooting for her!

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Kadero

Interesting..im intrigued. A bit out there..are they in high school still? I assume so..awful young for such craziness!!

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Kadero

Interesting seeing into this underword! Some errors but nothing that editing cant fix. Plot so far has me intrigued..

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Kadero

Great tone to the story. Excellant point of view. Interesting so far. A lot of errors and misused words but nothing that editing cant fix!!

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Kadero

Great second book. Glad to have a continuance to the first novel. Interested in what happens and how the red dragon is defeated

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Awsome!! That answers so much!! Love it!! I cant wait until the next chapters!! This chapter puts the entire book in perspective..now i can understand each characters point of view. The simple explanations of their backgrounds, even just a glimpse, helps a great deal!!

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Kadero

Great story. Very interested to be filled in on what magic Piper has. What exactly is being led up to...im in suspense..good job!

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Kadero

Building up to be very interesting...

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Kadero

This story is great!! Love the twist with the cat and the dragon always naked and both poin of views of the glitter witch and fire witch. Very amusing! Very well written..easily thrown into their very unorthodox world!

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Kadero

Very interesting so far...

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Kadero

Im intrigued to see where this is going

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Kadero

Great book. Amazing imagination!! Love it!

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Kadero

Great book..very well done

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Kaderi

Great books!! Love the story!!

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Kadero

Awsome! Love it so far!!

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Kadaro

Awsome! Very intricate and complex..loved it!

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Kadero

Great story!!

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Kadero

Interesting..

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Kadero

Excellent..great explanation of the different realms

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Kadero

So far pretty good. Great plot..would never happen in the real world!!😂 a few errors and incorrect use of he and she..but you can still understand it.

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Kadero

Interesting so far. Twist of different worlds..both worlds having trouble combining...

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Kadero

So far pretty good. I do like her special powers..she is a bad ass! Hopefully it eont fall flat at the end...

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Kadero

So far good story..many twists..we will see how it comes along!

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Kadero

Wow..amazing writing. Very impressed!! As far as whos kid..cant be Ehren..she was throwing up before they did it. As far as it being Maddox..wouldnt Zane have smelled her pregnancy when he got her free??? Hmm..cant wait to get an update!! So far this is the best book i have read on this app. Very well done!

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Kadero

Interesting so far. Great mix into this realm

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Kadero

Building up great so far...slenderman..lol lets see how this goes...

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Some crammer and punctuation errors but so far story is building. Kids playing in the adult world..lol I am hoping it ends with as much build as the beginning...

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Kadero

Good so far, building a great start so far..so many questions!

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Kadero

Beginning was a bit rushed but the story is getting good now...hope it keeps up!!

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Kadero

A bit too early to tell. So far descent set up for the story..we will see...

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Kadero

So far it is a good start. Building up to a hopefully good story!!

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Kadero

Good build up. Interesting twist that her ghost buddy killed her Dad. Her flipping on him I'm sure will cause more crazy damage. Terrible place Ryder got thrown in.. Will we find out exactly what got her put in such an awful place? Interested in finding out.. Good descriptions. A few mistakes almost like the story was not proof read. We will see where this plot takes us. Is she super nuts? She does have a ghost buddy.. Or did.
The place sounds like it should have been shut down years ago. Filthy and un kept. Why is the place still open?
20 yrs later and they have a patients electrocution covered up? Strange.. No family to care about the kid? What's up with sis? She hates her bro that much that she didn't look into what happened to him? Crappy family.. What needs enemies with family like that??
I really do not like writing this much.. Rather just enjoy the story.

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Kadero

Crazy..could actually happen...damn government...

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Kadero

Great so far. A lot of steamy sex scenes..hope the fight scences are just as good! Plot is building for sure...

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Brandy

So far..filled with suspence. I too suspected the wife..all eyes were on the husband but no one considered her. In the begimning they emphasized it was a he or she...

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Kadero

Interesting..kept me intrigued
I did not enjoy the recaps..or the ending, very disheartening! No happy ending here! Would like to read more of the authors work

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