Brenda H Machala

Houston, Texas

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Daedalus Reunion

I thought that this story was interesting and well written. The fact that she made some kind of peace with her father was great. She was out looking for her missing brother, Ben. However, I think it ended a little too soon because I wonder if Cate ever found Ben. But saying that, it probably was not the main plot of the story. I loved the use of the other people in the story.
Saying that she is her father's daughter is something that I can relate to. Seeing him age was hard on her but she seemed not to let that effect her. I would recommend this story for all to read.
Brenda H. Machala

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