Starshine

Room for Imporvment.

Maybe it is just me or the time I was reading your collection at but, your pomes seamed a bit like unfished puzzle pieces. Here's some advice a mentor once gave me they told me to remember that the readers are not in my headed so they can't understand what I write unless I spell it out for them to an extent. You have a great amount of potential. The notes you left at the bottom were very helpful in understanding the pomes. I look forward to seeing more of your work and your growth as an artist. Wonderful start.

Amazing Book.

This is book will have you hooked to the very end. I love to see what happens with for here on. The relationships build subtly which is awesome. Keep writing you have talent. Also having the girl be in control is an fantastic feature of this book.

Good Story

While it starts out a little slow it has a great meaning. Your writing style really brought your characters to life and enchants the reader. The reader will not be able to put down the book to the very end.

Cool Book

I like the new spin you put on bet who will fall first. The fact that there also so cousins for a few chapters, and that the guy is the first to develop feelings along with the fact the he also is the first one to admit he loves him. Also the main characters portrayal makes her unique. I really liked it because it wasn’t cliché and the unique take on the school. Your are a fantastic writer.

Incredibel

Once aging you have completed he story with a breathtaking view and over the top plot. The charter development was amazing and well paced. The descriptions were out of this world although I forgot to say so last time. Your writing is beyond amazing. I hope to see more if your works,

Amazing Story

This is a very well developed story. It had my interest form the start. The plot was well planned and portrayed. The charter development was astounding.Seeing each charter growing individually and together at the pace that the story was set was timed so well that I reflected many times on how they had changed though each chapter, It was subtle but each character grew tremendously. This is a great read for anyone who likes supernatural,action,or romance. They are all well balanced in this story. You have done an amazing job Erin. I hope you continue to write and get published.