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Amazed

This story is quite unlike most stories I read. The plot is set in fictional world with fictional creatures yet brings the true hardships of life into play. The pace is also realistic.This is amazing yet balanced story between real life and fiction. Over all this is an awesome read and will in some places leave you crying.Please countinue this wonderful story.

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Good

The story has good potential and you can read it. by editing it and adding more structure to the plot it would advance the story and make it better. Also by focusing on fewer points of view and building the backstory, it will draw the reader in better. I like the potential this story has and every writer grows as they write. I would love to read more.

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Amazing Book.

This is book will have you hooked to the very end. I love to see what happens with for here on. The relationships build subtly which is awesome. Keep writing you have talent. Also having the girl be in control is an fantastic feature of this book.

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Good Story

While it starts out a little slow it has a great meaning. Your writing style really brought your characters to life and enchants the reader. The reader will not be able to put down the book to the very end.

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Cool Book

I like the new spin you put on bet who will fall first. The fact that there also so cousins for a few chapters, and that the guy is the first to develop feelings along with the fact the he also is the first one to admit he loves him. Also the main characters portrayal makes her unique. I really liked it because it wasn’t cliché and the unique take on the school. Your are a fantastic writer.

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Fantastic

This story has the best plot I have seen in awhile. Especially for this genre. I love that you blend all the mythical creatures together ,and make every one aware of the mythical creatures and one of them. The only thing about the story that I questioned was Sams age. Your work is fantastic and I hope you complete it. I am really looking forward to finishing this story.

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Incredibel

Once aging you have completed he story with a breathtaking view and over the top plot. The charter development was amazing and well paced. The descriptions were out of this world although I forgot to say so last time. Your writing is beyond amazing. I hope to see more if your works,

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Amazing Story

This is a very well developed story. It had my interest form the start. The plot was well planned and portrayed. The charter development was astounding.Seeing each charter growing individually and together at the pace that the story was set was timed so well that I reflected many times on how they had changed though each chapter, It was subtle but each character grew tremendously. This is a great read for anyone who likes supernatural,action,or romance. They are all well balanced in this story. You have done an amazing job Erin. I hope you continue to write and get published.

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