Britteny R Miller

Henryville, PA

Loving wife, business owner of Miller Trading Co LLC & hopeful writer.

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Pure artwork!

This is an amazing story, you have a way with word craft and words! I am also on the 10/10 'boat'! Well done!

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Hot!

Sexy, fun and totally hot as fire! Well done, five stars all the way around for this one! Beautiful words!

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Delicious!

I adored this. You are a master at word craft. As both an illustrator, and a writer... I absolutely approve of this short story. Well done all the way around!

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Elegant and well written!

This book needs a higher rating! I love your writing style; I have read many books on here and your style of writing is very elegant. I really enjoyed your characters, and found them to be very realistic. I am a 'big fan' of history and I love the time period this book is written in. So, that was a plus for me (yay)! I also enjoyed your usage of French & Spanish in the conversations between your characters. I felt it added to the realism of your characters-- Well done and keep writing! You're off to a great start!

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Very Enjoyable!

Alrighty! So, I absolutely love your usage of detail, and I especially enjoyed your different character perspectives. This, is something I have rarely ever seen, and or read. You did a beautiful job with this, and it made for a very entertaining read.

You also did a great job with your choice of words, and I was able to clearly gather the background (who/what/when/where and why)s, and thoughts of each of your characters. (Such as in chapter 6 with Lilly & Lord Hale, or in chapter 8 with Axel and Raiden).

As I have said before... I have almost never seen a story written like yours, and you did a phenomenal job!
P.S. I also adore werewolves... I actually use to pray (when I was little) in hopes of 'being turned into a werewolf'. Well done! 5 stars to you!

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Lovely detail and well written!

So, as others have said... you do a wonderful job at 'world building'! I LOVE your detail when describing places, and I feel like I am standing right there. Such as in chapter 4, "A breeze made the banners flap happily in the sunshine. It stirred Jon's light brown hair and brushed it away from his forehead as he ran across the courtyard, his leather shoes slapping against the flagstones." Damn! WELL DONE! I can feel the sunshine you are describing and I can inhale the breeze; it is splendid! I also enjoyed your dialogue and the interaction between characters.

I also agree with others... books like yours should be on the front page instead of the same romance/Twilight-esque novels. This is awesome in every way, thank you for posting and keep on writing!

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Wow!

Okay... so, I absolutely loved this story! As someone who is a huge fan of Egyptology, I fell in love with your characters, and I love the way you write. I could also tell that you did your research, and your visual descriptions were excellent. Well done!

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Unique story

I loved your details, and I really enjoy your character development--especially involving Calypso. This is well written and entertaining to read; your technical skills are on point as well. Very well done!

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Detailed and Edgy!

I have read and reviewed a lot of romance novels recently, and this one absolutely was the 'edgiest' and most beautifully detailed! I love that you included 'spoken' Italian in your dialogue; it made for a wonderful addition and made your characters more authentic! Keep writing, and I will keep reading--you are producing great work!

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Nice!

I love the relationships between your characters, this is a great piece of work! Another wonderful work on Inkitt! Keep on writing <3

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Exciting!

I adored this story. Fast paced, well written and exciting! Well done!!

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First to review!

You have a beautiful and colorful writing style! I love your usage of words; this is a wonderful piece. Please keep up the good work and write more <3

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Enjoyable!

I enjoyed your fast paced plot and enjoyable characters. You just just need a couple little technical tweaks that will improve with time. Please keep writing this is off to a good start! You have an exciting novel so far!

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I can't wait to read more!

Firstly... WHAT? There are only two chapters so far? --This story has a brilliant start; I absolutely could relate to Chris' introduction to Julian. I love how Julian's mom is the 'hot-fox'; she is a tease with the devil on her hip! --GOOD LUCK to Chris. I also enjoyed how you gave us details of his growing up, and your descriptions are excellent. You are a talented writer! I also believe writing is 'our way' of communicating what we are unable to--or not allowed to say; as someone studying psychology, I could feel this in your writing. Which is again, excellent!
One quick mini-tip... Pertaining to the usage of ellipses... I feel like you could add-in the details between them differently? I once was told by a Creative Writing Professor that, "ellipses are not necessary in creative writing/fiction, because it is up to you to weave in the details." Though--I have seen other authors use them?

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Juicy Writing Style!

First of all--you have a very, very, very lovely, and colorful writing style! IF I could rate it MORE than five stars I would!

Your story has been a treat to read and to consume! I can tell that you put a lot of heart into putting this together--and that being said, please treat it to some additional editing. This does not hinder your story, or my like of it; it is one of the few stories on inkitt that I will be returning to! Your story is wonderful; your writing is gorgeous, and it will be all that more gorgeous with some fine-tuning. A couple simple things...

"When you write dialogue, make sure to put your period within your quotes."
Unless you are "quoting something" inside a sentence--or when a quote is part of a whole sentence instead of dialogue alone.

I see that other reviewers already gave some fantastic advice, and some locations of where to submit your work for editing. Please keep writing--you are truly talented!

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Brilliant

I adore the way you write...It is full of emotion, detail, and passion. Your characters were well written, and I love your plot. I grew fond of Evelyn--she definitely does not fall into the 'stereotype' of average female characters!

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Awakening

Awesome! Your story was interesting right from the beginning! I enjoyed your concept (I'm a sucker for anything involving A.I.) and I also felt captivated by you detailed writing--both of these made for an awesome sci-fi novel!

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Very Enjoyable

This was a very enjoyable read! I have been reading a lot of books on here recently, but yours had the 'most enjoyable' flow and characters. I particularly enjoyed your character perspectives; this made for a brilliant read! Your writing style is also very 'up-beat' and fun! Keep up the good work!

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Very Lovely

I love your writing style, and your characters, plus their interactions! This will be a very lovely romance novel; I was sad to come to the end!

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Angi: the Secret Door

Keep on writing! I love your story development, it is fast paced and you present interesting characters. Your plot and ideas are original which is something I love. I enjoyed it overall, and will keep reading!

However, a quick note: you do have some sentences that need a little work, but I did not find that it "took away" from the story overall. Your writing and complexity of writing improves as I read on, and you create really interesting/realistic dialogue.

My final thought: I recommend this story to anyone who craves to read something different and unique. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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Loving it!

Okay... so first off, I adore your writing style. Your attention to detail is excellent, your grammar is excellent, and I am loving your characters. This is a beautiful work of art. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

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Uplifting

I really enjoyed this entertaining collection of poems that offer an alternative visualization of life. The author touches on perceiving an idea, and how it morphs into a character (A Feature). I felt that this was incredibly accurate, and was probably my favorite in this collection.

I also really enjoyed "Life's Sweet Taste" (the poem), once again... great visuals!

If you are someone who needs a different look at life (might need a little emotional boost), I recommend this book of poetry to you...

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I'm ready for more!

Upbeat! Nice pace! Very nice first few chapters and interesting main character. Please keep writing more

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