Britteny R Miller

Pure artwork!

This is an amazing story, you have a way with word craft and words! I am also on the 10/10 'boat'! Well done!

Delicious!

I adored this. You are a master at word craft. As both an illustrator, and a writer... I absolutely approve of this short story. Well done all the way around!

Very Enjoyable!

Alrighty! So, I absolutely love your usage of detail, and I especially enjoyed your different character perspectives. This, is something I have rarely ever seen, and or read. You did a beautiful job with this, and it made for a very entertaining read.

You also did a great job with your choice of words, and I was able to clearly gather the background (who/what/when/where and why)s, and thoughts of each of your characters. (Such as in chapter 6 with Lilly & Lord Hale, or in chapter 8 with Axel and Raiden).

As I have said before... I have almost never seen a story written like yours, and you did a phenomenal job!
P.S. I also adore werewolves... I actually use to pray (when I was little) in hopes of 'being turned into a werewolf'. Well done! 5 stars to you!

Wow!

Okay... so, I absolutely loved this story! As someone who is a huge fan of Egyptology, I fell in love with your characters, and I love the way you write. I could also tell that you did your research, and your visual descriptions were excellent. Well done!

Detailed and Edgy!

I have read and reviewed a lot of romance novels recently, and this one absolutely was the 'edgiest' and most beautifully detailed! I love that you included 'spoken' Italian in your dialogue; it made for a wonderful addition and made your characters more authentic! Keep writing, and I will keep reading--you are producing great work!

Nice!

I love the relationships between your characters, this is a great piece of work! Another wonderful work on Inkitt! Keep on writing <3

Exciting!

I adored this story. Fast paced, well written and exciting! Well done!!

First to review!

You have a beautiful and colorful writing style! I love your usage of words; this is a wonderful piece. Please keep up the good work and write more <3

I can't wait to read more!

Firstly... WHAT? There are only two chapters so far? --This story has a brilliant start; I absolutely could relate to Chris' introduction to Julian. I love how Julian's mom is the 'hot-fox'; she is a tease with the devil on her hip! --GOOD LUCK to Chris. I also enjoyed how you gave us details of his growing up, and your descriptions are excellent. You are a talented writer! I also believe writing is 'our way' of communicating what we are unable to--or not allowed to say; as someone studying psychology, I could feel this in your writing. Which is again, excellent!
One quick mini-tip... Pertaining to the usage of ellipses... I feel like you could add-in the details between them differently? I once was told by a Creative Writing Professor that, "ellipses are not necessary in creative writing/fiction, because it is up to you to weave in the details." Though--I have seen other authors use them?

Juicy Writing Style!

First of all--you have a very, very, very lovely, and colorful writing style! IF I could rate it MORE than five stars I would!

Your story has been a treat to read and to consume! I can tell that you put a lot of heart into putting this together--and that being said, please treat it to some additional editing. This does not hinder your story, or my like of it; it is one of the few stories on inkitt that I will be returning to! Your story is wonderful; your writing is gorgeous, and it will be all that more gorgeous with some fine-tuning. A couple simple things...

"When you write dialogue, make sure to put your period within your quotes."
Unless you are "quoting something" inside a sentence--or when a quote is part of a whole sentence instead of dialogue alone.

I see that other reviewers already gave some fantastic advice, and some locations of where to submit your work for editing. Please keep writing--you are truly talented!

Brilliant

I adore the way you write...It is full of emotion, detail, and passion. Your characters were well written, and I love your plot. I grew fond of Evelyn--she definitely does not fall into the 'stereotype' of average female characters!

Awakening

Awesome! Your story was interesting right from the beginning! I enjoyed your concept (I'm a sucker for anything involving A.I.) and I also felt captivated by you detailed writing--both of these made for an awesome sci-fi novel!

Very Lovely

I love your writing style, and your characters, plus their interactions! This will be a very lovely romance novel; I was sad to come to the end!

Angi: the Secret Door

Keep on writing! I love your story development, it is fast paced and you present interesting characters. Your plot and ideas are original which is something I love. I enjoyed it overall, and will keep reading!

However, a quick note: you do have some sentences that need a little work, but I did not find that it "took away" from the story overall. Your writing and complexity of writing improves as I read on, and you create really interesting/realistic dialogue.

My final thought: I recommend this story to anyone who craves to read something different and unique. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Loving it!

Okay... so first off, I adore your writing style. Your attention to detail is excellent, your grammar is excellent, and I am loving your characters. This is a beautiful work of art. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

Uplifting

I really enjoyed this entertaining collection of poems that offer an alternative visualization of life. The author touches on perceiving an idea, and how it morphs into a character (A Feature). I felt that this was incredibly accurate, and was probably my favorite in this collection.

I also really enjoyed "Life's Sweet Taste" (the poem), once again... great visuals!

If you are someone who needs a different look at life (might need a little emotional boost), I recommend this book of poetry to you...

I'm ready for more!

Upbeat! Nice pace! Very nice first few chapters and interesting main character. Please keep writing more