Alrighty! So, I absolutely love your usage of detail, and I especially enjoyed your different character perspectives. This, is something I have rarely ever seen, and or read. You did a beautiful job with this, and it made for a very entertaining read.
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You also did a great job with your choice of words, and I was able to clearly gather the background (who/what/when/where and why)s, and thoughts of each of your characters. (Such as in chapter 6 with Lilly & Lord Hale, or in chapter 8 with Axel and Raiden).
As I have said before... I have almost never seen a story written like yours, and you did a phenomenal job!
P.S. I also adore werewolves... I actually use to pray (when I was little) in hopes of 'being turned into a werewolf'. Well done! 5 stars to you!