Brooke

well done

great start! I can't exactly speak much to the plot as you are only 4 chapters in but its a solid begging. I would love to see more description and action rather than mostly dialog but other than that enjoyed the read. Best of luck continuing your book. Ill be sure to check back in when you post more .

Great start!

Amazing start to your book! I love your style and look forwards finding out more about the characters and how their story unfolds. Hard to say more than that with only one chapter, but its a strong start!

amazing!

I don't typically read westerns but I love this authors style and the way there's a perfect balance in dialog and description! I can easily imagine the scene and I love how the plot progresses just a little bit more with each chapter while still holding enough mystery about what the story is really about to hold your attention. I love the atmosphere the author creates at the Double Shot and the Mystery around the character Bill. Over all very well written and very enjoyable!

Ray of Sunshine

Well done! I love the play on words with their names! As you have mentioned english is not your first language so I do commend you on your bravery in telling your story. I would love to see more depth of the characters, and really dig into what makes them tick and why they are the way they are. Best of luck though in finishing the story!