Brooke Banister

I am 26 years old. I love God, reading, cats, homemade meals, icecream and a cold glass of whisky. If you wrote a book that your proud of, send it my way because I want to read it!

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Just as good as the first!

I am no where close to a life like these characters, most people aren’t but I bet there are a couple out there! But this book tells a story that is realistic to some people in one way or another. And I love all the details that are put in it. I think it’s a great story and I am so excited to read more

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Emotional rollercoaster!

Great story! Fell in love with the characters! Couldn’t read it fast enough!

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Great characters!

I love the characters and the relationships! Just enough funny moments and a great amount of lovey dovey ones! Glad I am reading it!

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Love this so much!

Love it so much! Written well and just the perfect amount of details and description! So glad I came across this book!

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Not to bad

I liked the story line. I liked the characters too. A lot of details were not written and there were times where I thought I missed a chapter. A couple of things were left out too. Very simple story. The transitions from scenes weren’t as smooth either but overall not to bad of a short story. The writing itself is really good and I like how things are told and written! I jut think the transitioning could of been smoother and connecting dots could have been also. I see a lot of potential for this writer and would love to read more and see how they grow in there years of writing! Glad I gave this story a read!

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Such a good story!

I love how it is written and the characters. I love the relationship they build too. Eventually after several chapters, the writer translates when a different language is used which is super helpful! I love when writers add in different languages. I’ve learned a couple words just be reading.

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Good story!

Good story! Lots of drama and a lot happens but it’s written well. Had to keep up with characters because there was many people involved. I feel that the story could have gone in so many directions but I like how the writer finished it.

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Loved this story!

Great story. Loved the characters and the story line. I want more of Axel of sure! Can’t wait to read more of your work!

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Good story

Dang... good book. Loved the story line. Still upset about the ending.

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Overall great story line!!

I loved this story. Had me crying for minutes at the end. I feel so close to this story and I loved it all. Not many I have read end sadly. I think it’s because it brings up so much pain and suffering in my own life..... but reading story’s like this can be helpful and encouraging in ways. I’m glad I read it

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Great story!

Loved it! Excited to read more from you!! I understand the first ending but which it wasn’t like that. Did not like the second ending at all. Glad it wasn’t the only one written

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Love it!

So glad I came across this series! Love all the drama and all the cuteness that comes with it!

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Yes!!! Another great story!

I loved it! Can’t wait to read the next book! Loved there story. Loved watching squirrel grow and gain a back bone too. The details are great and I really feel like I am sitting with them when they talk!

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Awww I loved it!!!

Super cute story! I love the characters and the plot. I love the relationship between Lia and her dad. I am glad she found another girl as a friend too!! Excited to read the rest of their story!!

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I really like the story!

I love the storyline and the characters. Sometimes I thought there’s too much drama, but I think it is what helped make the plot of the story. There was a couple times that it was hard to keep up with the characters and what was going on, but not too bad!

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Pretty good!

I like the storyline and the characters. I liked all the happiness that came with it too. I’m glad there wasn’t too much drama either. I think it was written pretty well, other than just a couple mistakes. It was a good short story.

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Pretty good!

I like the characters and the story line. Your writing has a lot of potential!

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I liked it!

It was a good short story! I think it was written well for it being so short. I think there was just enough details to get to the main points.

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Amazing story!!

Really good story!! I liked how it was long. Loved the characters and the drama. I loved all the comedy!! There was times my roomates looked at me like I was crazy when I was laughing lol

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This was soooo good!!!!!!!

Great story line! It was written well. Loved the details and how it wasn’t too much. I didn’t want this book to end. Looking forward to reading the sequel!!

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Loved the story, hated the ending

Great story other than the ending. Did not like it all

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Loved it!!!!

Loved it all!!!! I love how you had the last couple chapters made!!! Very cute and good story line. I wish we got to read more little pranks that happened between them but it was good amount for a short story!

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Good story. Not what I expected

It’s a good story. I really wanted it to end differently but the ending was still good. There was a couple things that could have had a easier transition but overall cute and written well

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Cute story!!

Great story! Loved reading it! Couldn’t put it down

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Super cute!!!

So cute! A nice short story. I recommend!

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Pretty good read!

It’s a good story line! I think sometimes a little bit to dramatic but good. A lot happens through this book. I wish the different languages were translated, it might of been helpful to understand more of what’s going on. The Grammer is good, just a couple mess ups. Writing skills are well but could use better transitions

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Amazing

Great story line. I love how it was a longer book. The writing skills are amazing other than a couple mishaps but that’s normal. This is a book that I probably want to read again in the future just because I will miss the characters and the relationship. Thanks for writing such a good book for us to read!

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Cute

It’s hard to picture the characters bring 13 and 15 and everything they say and how they react but the writing is pretty well written and the storyline is cringy at times but really cute

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Loved it!

I really enjoyed reading this! Read it in less than 24 hours. Couldn’t put it down. There was times where I was laughing and my roommates gave me weird looks, moments where I almost threw my phone across the room, sometimes I thought there was too much drama and it was annoying..... but by the end, it is what made there story and brought a lot of reality to it.

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Im,excited to read more!!

The writer is asking if they should finish this book..... Hell yess!! I think your going to do a great job and going to write something that's going to be making us jump up and down continuing to want more and more!!! I can't wait to see what you come up with!

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Great story!

I love this story! Its different than other books ive read which is great, it makes this book different and shows that the writer cares about writing something special. I am excited to read the rest of the series!!

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Really good so far!

Im probably half way through the book and really like it! Better than what I expected so far. I already dont want the book to end and I am obly half way done with it. Cant go to bed until I finish it, so it will probably be a late night for me! Excited to read the rest.

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So excited to read more 😁

Ive been reading the new updates on the other website the writer has posted..... I LOVE IT!!! I cant wait for more updates!!!!!

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Good and has alot of potential

I think this book has alot of potential and has a good story line. I think that the story could have gone a little smoother connecting dots and it would of been nice to understand more of how they fell in love. They only talked maybe 1 and supposively fell in love but we dont really know why. I know at the end, more comes out from his POV, but its still kind of confusing and we don't really know alot. It ended with the idea of another sequel but this book still didn't answer alot. I am excited to see how to writer continues to grow and learn how to write, again I see alot of potential. Grammar and writing style got better at times, but it did make it a little difficult to follow and read it easily. I do love the story line in general though.

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I honestly don't know what to sau

It's a great book so far but I didn't expect it to turn into what it did. I kind of wish there was some trigger warnings. Didnt realize how much abuse was in it

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I love, love, love this book!!!

I can tell the book is getting to the end and it already makes me sad. I don't want to put my phone down and stop reading. There are parts of this book that make my heart flutter and I just want to grab Violet and shake her because I want her to see that she is worthy. I have a close friend who has had Violets thoughts/feelings before and I am glad that she was able to get council and help to believe in her self like other people do. This book is encouraging to people to be a bear and I love it!!!

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