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Love it!

I first became aware of this story on Webtoons. However I found my curiosity needed to know what happens next faster then the updates were showing. This story did not disappoint! I loved the world you created and the character developments. There were no shortcomings to the mystery that pulled me in. Can’t wait to dive in to the next book!

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Fabulous!

This story is absolutely fabulous! The interactions between the characters are enjoyable and the use of two perspectives allows the reader to see there is definitely more things hidden in the shadows then it seems. I also love the subtle foreshadowing of issues yet to come. It leaves me giddy for more. My only grip is the grammar. There is too much use of the word “I.” Which, in my opinion, pulls the reader out of the story often. Try going back and reword the sentences that has the back to back repetition. You may find it will help the flow of your writing. Love the plot! Can’t wait to see how the story develops further.

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