Brye

"We all fear the darkness because we fear the unknown. But it draws me in, because I am fearless." Check out my Wattpad profile: JoLeo21

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Alpha's Bestfriend

This story's plot is easy to follow and enticing. The author sets up a good story for people who enjoy this genre of writing. With a little more editing and focus on grammar, this could be better in the writing-structure-area (as for understanding the point of view, stay in either first person and don't switch from first to second, because that makes it easier to read). I think the characters were interesting and the background on them made sense. I can understand how much work the author put into this, and for that and the story, I think people should give it a try. I enjoyed it myself, and I think other readers will too.

I hope this review helped :)
-Brye

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