Brynlee

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Good

I enjoyed the story. I am more a PG person.πŸ˜€

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I LOVE THIS BOOK

I really love how this starts, and the whole idea! You were a little repetitive in word usage but other than that, this should be published seven out of five stars:)

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I fricking loved it πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

I really loved this story please write another chapter πŸ’•πŸ’• also check out my book, the Unforgettables πŸ’•

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Overall interesting( prey is mentioned too many times in first paragraph tho,)

I like the idea, the characters really pop out of the pages.. ( well, screen...) And ways that you can improve on are....... Hmmm..... Let me think... I can't thing of any way! I recommend this to anyone who likes an action story.

BTW, this is ambitious, but could you check out my book? It's called the Unforgettables πŸ’•

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