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A Fantastic Read

I had so much fun reading this story- it's clear you've put a lot of thought into the world, Algea herself, and the Egyptian origins. I love those gods so seeing them be put into action was fun. I also liked seeing her and Seth's interactions- a demigod and a normal human.

I do think you have some issues with overuse of description and a few grammatical errors so when you get a chance I would think about maybe going back to your earlier chapters and evaluating for flow. Keep up the good work- I look forward to seeing more!

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A Really Entertaining Read!

I had a great time reading this novel- it feels really fluid with the character interactions and I could exactly visualize what you were talking about. I am also a Percy Jackson fan, so the characters definitely felt true to their myths. The only thing I would recommend is maybe making your sentences shorter in some places but otherwise I look forward to the next installment!

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