martha

Hi,

I hope you're doing well! I'm excited to share that my book, "Everything We Build", is now out, and I'd love for you to be one of its early readers.

If you have time to read it, I'd be so grateful if you could leave an honest review afterward. Even a couple of sentences makes a big difference in helping new readers find it.



Here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1908334


Thank you so much for your support. It truly means a lot to me. And I'd love to hear your thoughts either way!

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.
Thank you for taking the time to read Perspective. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

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Hey @martha -I've just left you a review! I really liked your three-chapter story—you got me completely hooked on the mystery!!! I truly think you should keep writing, as this story deserves to be expanded. :) I hope you can check out my story, 'The View,' too. Let me know what you think! Take care. ~Ann Oh~✌🏾

Hi!!
Was away for some quick vacations
Thank you sooo much for following me!

Thanks for the follow love

Hi✨
what do you think about doing a read and review swap?

Hi martha,


Thank you for following. Hope you enjoy the stories. And do review them.


Happy Reading

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