Laurisa

ottawa

16//🏳️‍🌈// “Those who do not believe in magic will never find it.”//🇨🇦//♈️//🔮🕯⛓🔪🧿🎼🛹// I follow back:) tiktok: caff1ene_add1ct

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Has potential

This story has a very good plot and has the potential to be an amazing book with some good editing other than a few grammatical errors and a bit more colloquialism than necessary i think this book is captivating and brings you in from the first chapter, well done!!

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Amazing

i found this book very enjoyable and captivating for the entirety of it, i did not get bored at all this book is very well written great work!!!

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Great job!!!

This book is so captivating it kept my attention the entire time and was really enjoyable to read!

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Amazing!

This story was very interesting and captivating i loved reading it and wasn’t bored or easily distracted out of it atall!!

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amazing plot

this story is very well written and thought out i love the plot it is a very good idea. i am very intrigued to find out what happens next well done!!!

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amazing

very invested can’t wait to find out how this ends i love the plot and the structure of this story amazing job

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Great job !!!

i love the plot this story starts off strong and i found myself invested from the beginning great job

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Amazing !!!

i love this book so far and i’m so looking forward to continuing it!!!

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