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I was sucked in...

...by this world. The world building is fascinating and very well done! Everything about this world left me hungry for more detail about the Outside and beyond!

Sometimes however it can get a little confusing as there is a lot of head hopping and POVs will switch without warning, so sometimes I had to go back and reread a paragraph or two to ensure whose perspective I was experiencing.

Generally though, a solid and intriguing story. The characters interact believably and consistently and the chapters are a very nice length and don't feel cluttered or overstuffed.

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What a wonderful world

I love the world that the author has built here. It feels very vivid and sprawling. I got the rules of magic pretty swift as a testament to the world building.

Skye took me a bit of time to get to know, and I think that's entirely the point: she's cold, weird and awkward, resorting to violence rather than conversation to the point it feels like bullying sometimes. I wasn't rooting for her until a pivotal moment and I see her human side, and it was a pleasure to read.

I'm curious to see where this story will go! It's built itself a solid start.

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Burning strong, but needs a little fuel

This book has oodles of promise, but it takes a while for things to get going. At the start it's a little tricky keeping up with all the characters at first but they all definitely have their own personalities as the story goes in. I love isekai stories and the world built here sounds fascinating, I hope we see more of it soon! Equally, I also like the interplay between the characters and I get the feeling that all together they create one protagonist between them.

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Werewolves, alphas and betas, oh my!

There is some great promise in this story, and I'll be interested to see where it goes.

The author should be careful of reading and checking their chapters before they hit publish as there are a couple of spelling and grammar errors easily ironed out.

All in all, a good if slightly rushed start with some interesting characters and a good spin on a traditional werewolf story.

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A great start!

A few pacing problems here and there, but a very interesting start to this story. I was hoping that three chapters + prologue would clue me in a bit more but this story is definitely a slow burn and takes its time to let events happen naturally.

I was intrigued by the world building and how passing on of abilities and statuses worked, it was an interesting take in werewolves!

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A very unique twist on an isekai. I love the idea and the world building seems really in and in depth!

There are a few parts that need a touch of polish such as the odd tense skew and a bit of a reliance to tell rather than show, but this story has really good bones and I look forward to reading more!

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Cat

The author has a lovely way with words which makes this story very easy to want more.

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