RoseArt_618

Chicago, IL

"The only impossible journey is the one you never begin" -Tony Robbins........ You didn't come this far, to only come this far

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Really like this so far

I personally really enjoyed this. I love how the story the mother told intertwined with how the chapter ends. I also love how it ends in a way that makes readers want another chapter. I think this is great so far! Excellent job explaining the history with the God's!

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Love the way things are described!

I love the details and the way you describe things! I have not finished the book yet but I like it very much! Ill be waiting for more updates!

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Wow!

This story is really well written and I love the description. Hayden has a personality that draws attention very quickly and adds so much value to the story! I can't wait for more updates :)

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Love the writing style!

I absolutely love this. I can vividly imagine everything going on and the story plot in itself is so captivating. the author does an AMAZING job at portraying the events. There are a few very minor gramatical errors(I think you forgot to put a . in a place and a few spelling errors thought the chapter) but overall it's a great read :) I am excited for the updates for sure! Great Job!!!

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Good so far

I really like this idea of the story. I like how you made a list of the characters so it's a bit easier going into the story because I already know a few important things. I do suggest paying a little more attention to some grammar and punctuation. This is mainly because some of the sentences are pretty long and they get hard to follow without a comma or something there. but that's more of a personal preference. Overall I think you're doing a great job so far!

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Love it

I absolutely love this. I read this the other day and reread it again today before reviewing it. I can't wait for the updates and I think you are doing an amazing job so far! Ill be waiting for those updates!!

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Interesting

I like your attention to detail throughout the chapter. This is a bit harder for me to review because I have never read one of these genres. However, I think you are a great author. I do see a few minor spelling areas throughout the story. But this is definitely good!

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Outstanding

I absolutely admire your writing style. Your introduction alone grabbed my attention from the start, and never let me look away from the words you perfectly wrote. I look forward to the updates, great job so far!

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Absolutely love this

Very intriguing and I haven't even gotten super dat into it! Loved to attention to detail as well. Also, the author did not rush the first chapter like many do (including myself.. oops) and I fell in love while just on the first chapter. Very nice job so far, I can not wait for more chapters!

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Loving it so far!

I am not very far in this book however I love it so far! It has definitely grabbed my attention from the start and I can't wait to continue reading more. I love your writing style as well. Great job and keep writing on! I know I'll be waiting for the updates

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I like it so far

I like it so far, it's only 1 chapter so I know as the sorry continues I'll be even more into the plot. A few errors for spelling I believe but Overall I enjoyed the introduction.. excited to see how the summary gets intertwined with the story plot! Sounds amazing, will definitely be following for more updates!

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Engaging, mysterious read! Plot twists everywhere

I really enjoy reading this story. mostly bc this is a mysterious book by far. I like the details written throughout the story, mostly the explanation behind Autumns name. I think this story starts off with quite a few grammatical and spelling errors so I am not sure if you want to read the first couple chapters and edit those. However the further I read into the story the less errors I spotted. even thought a few spelling errors, I was still very into this story. Great job so far and keep it up!

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Pretty Good So Far

So I do really like this story. I think it grabs the readers attention pretty well. however some of the sentences make the story seem very slow paced. However thats more of a personal preference. Overall I like how this story is turning out and I want to read more. :)

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A lot of Potential

I honestly really enjoyed reading this. I gave the story stars across because I see a lot of Potential. I think this story can go in so many directions and I can't wait to see where the author takes it. Great detail, you can vividly imagine the scenes as they are being described. Some longer chapters and some shorter as well. Definitely worth the read๐Ÿ‘ Great job!

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Lighthearted

I personally love the amount of detail put into the story. It creates a very lighthearted feeling that has a lot of meaning to it. I also have to add that thought the story you'll realize it has this artistry to it that really makes it difficult to explain. Really well done to the author๐Ÿ‘

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Good so far!

I love the plot and the amount of detail and thought that has hone into this story. I find the plot to be really enjoyable!

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Great job so far

I really like these poems. I think they are relatable to others who have depression and to me they are symbolic as well. The author is doing a great job on these even though there are only 3 poems so far. Great job and I hope to see more updates!

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Good!!

I absolutely love the plot and the detail within the story. I also feel like a lot of people that enjoy many different genres could really enjoy this book also. I personally can't wait for more updates! Great job so far!

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I like these

I really enjoy how these poems each tell a story, even the really short poems. Each story takes you to something new and different. I really like these so far and hope to see more updates

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Love the detail so far

I think the author does a good job expressing the struggle of losing a loved one. even though they were not married long, the feelings were valid. I love how it expresses that (at least in my opinion). Great job with the detailed descriptions and truly having the reader intrigued in the plot and setting. Great job so far!

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Love the mental health aspect

So far I am only a few chapters in, and I honestly really appreciate the mental health aspect of the story. As someone who has similar issues, due to different reasons, I truly respect this story for what it is. I think you are doing amazing work with this and I can not wait to finish reading the remaining chapters and hopefully even more! I also really enjoy the plot of the story. I personally think this is a story that could have a million awful plots but you wrote a great one. Great job so far!

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Really nice

the author has a way with words to really describe what each poem is about. I think they are very well written as well. Great job!

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Love this

I personally grew up loving the hobbit world. This is really good so far and I really enjoyed reading it! I hope I see more updates! It makes me feel like a nerd because I love it so much! Hope to see more updates!

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Really Good

I write poetry myself and I really enjoy reading it. I think the author as started this collection off very well and opens up to the world. I can't wait for more updates to come, you're doing so good!

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Really Good so far!

I think this story is off to a great start! I love all the little details thrown in! I like this plot so far as well it is keeping my attention drawn in. Great start and I can't wait for more updates!

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Intriguing

I am not very far into your story, and I will update this as I go along, so far I love it. It grabs your attention from the start and pulls you into the story. I really like how this is going. also love the details. I can not wait to continue reading the rest of this book and the series!

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Love this

This book grabbed my attention from the start. I love your writing style and techniques to pull people in. Very intriguing and I absolutely love it! Hope to see more from you!

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Really enjoying this so far

I really love this so far! I have not finished it however I am excited to keep reading! Grabbed my attention from the start and kept it! Great job so far!

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really like this!

I really enjoyed the plot and how you really showed the two having special moments. it was very cute and I loved it! Loved the ending as well. The only thing is a few errors with grammar but I make those all the time! Great job!

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Very Good!

I think this story has amazing potential, so far I'm only in the middle of the second chapter but I love it so far. Love the detail in the writing. Also, i personally have to thank you for warning your readers in the summary, I very much appreciate the heads up for personal reasons, so thank you! I can't wait to finish reading this story.

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The Things Our Parents Taught Us

So far it's only 1 chapter long, but I'll definitely be following along for more! I love you're writing techniques and skills. The story sounds professionally written in my opinion. This first chapter was intriguing as well. Love how you describe everything, very well written. I am really excited for more updates! Great job so far!

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