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Wow!

This story is really well written and I love the description. Hayden has a personality that draws attention very quickly and adds so much value to the story! I can't wait for more updates :)

Love the writing style!

I absolutely love this. I can vividly imagine everything going on and the story plot in itself is so captivating. the author does an AMAZING job at portraying the events. There are a few very minor gramatical errors(I think you forgot to put a . in a place and a few spelling errors thought the chapter) but overall it's a great read :) I am excited for the updates for sure! Great Job!!!

Good so far

I really like this idea of the story. I like how you made a list of the characters so it's a bit easier going into the story because I already know a few important things. I do suggest paying a little more attention to some grammar and punctuation. This is mainly because some of the sentences are pretty long and they get hard to follow without a comma or something there. but that's more of a personal preference. Overall I think you're doing a great job so far!

Love it

I absolutely love this. I read this the other day and reread it again today before reviewing it. I can't wait for the updates and I think you are doing an amazing job so far! Ill be waiting for those updates!!

Interesting

I like your attention to detail throughout the chapter. This is a bit harder for me to review because I have never read one of these genres. However, I think you are a great author. I do see a few minor spelling areas throughout the story. But this is definitely good!

Absolutely love this

Very intriguing and I haven't even gotten super dat into it! Loved to attention to detail as well. Also, the author did not rush the first chapter like many do (including myself.. oops) and I fell in love while just on the first chapter. Very nice job so far, I can not wait for more chapters!

Loving it so far!

I am not very far in this book however I love it so far! It has definitely grabbed my attention from the start and I can't wait to continue reading more. I love your writing style as well. Great job and keep writing on! I know I'll be waiting for the updates

I like it so far

I like it so far, it's only 1 chapter so I know as the sorry continues I'll be even more into the plot. A few errors for spelling I believe but Overall I enjoyed the introduction.. excited to see how the summary gets intertwined with the story plot! Sounds amazing, will definitely be following for more updates!

Engaging, mysterious read! Plot twists everywhere

I really enjoy reading this story. mostly bc this is a mysterious book by far. I like the details written throughout the story, mostly the explanation behind Autumns name. I think this story starts off with quite a few grammatical and spelling errors so I am not sure if you want to read the first couple chapters and edit those. However the further I read into the story the less errors I spotted. even thought a few spelling errors, I was still very into this story. Great job so far and keep it up!

Pretty Good So Far

So I do really like this story. I think it grabs the readers attention pretty well. however some of the sentences make the story seem very slow paced. However thats more of a personal preference. Overall I like how this story is turning out and I want to read more. :)

Great job so far

I really like these poems. I think they are relatable to others who have depression and to me they are symbolic as well. The author is doing a great job on these even though there are only 3 poems so far. Great job and I hope to see more updates!

Good!!

I absolutely love the plot and the detail within the story. I also feel like a lot of people that enjoy many different genres could really enjoy this book also. I personally can't wait for more updates! Great job so far!

Love the detail so far

I think the author does a good job expressing the struggle of losing a loved one. even though they were not married long, the feelings were valid. I love how it expresses that (at least in my opinion). Great job with the detailed descriptions and truly having the reader intrigued in the plot and setting. Great job so far!

Really nice

the author has a way with words to really describe what each poem is about. I think they are very well written as well. Great job!

Love this

I personally grew up loving the hobbit world. This is really good so far and I really enjoyed reading it! I hope I see more updates! It makes me feel like a nerd because I love it so much! Hope to see more updates!

Really Good

I write poetry myself and I really enjoy reading it. I think the author as started this collection off very well and opens up to the world. I can't wait for more updates to come, you're doing so good!

Really Good so far!

I think this story is off to a great start! I love all the little details thrown in! I like this plot so far as well it is keeping my attention drawn in. Great start and I can't wait for more updates!

Love this

This book grabbed my attention from the start. I love your writing style and techniques to pull people in. Very intriguing and I absolutely love it! Hope to see more from you!

Really enjoying this so far

I really love this so far! I have not finished it however I am excited to keep reading! Grabbed my attention from the start and kept it! Great job so far!

The Things Our Parents Taught Us

So far it's only 1 chapter long, but I'll definitely be following along for more! I love you're writing techniques and skills. The story sounds professionally written in my opinion. This first chapter was intriguing as well. Love how you describe everything, very well written. I am really excited for more updates! Great job so far!