Cait The Writer

HOOKED RIGHT AWAY

OKAYYYY GIRL YOU ARE NOT MESSING AROUND.

I love when plots can hook a ready right away, and this one DEFINITELY does. I was immediately intrigued by the King & Queen’s relationship and how he’d react to having a girl. Not to mention, what comes immediately following and how you switch last and present. I’m so curious to continue!

I know I’m just at the beginning BUT I have no doubts that this story will be straight 🔥. Nice work!

DARK COMING-OF-AGE -- MUST READ!

So... I wasn't sure what I was expecting, but I was certainly pleasantly surprised! This is a good read, a little taboo due to the age difference between the main characters, but exhilarating in its own way.

If you're looking for a darker coming-of-age novel, this is it. Charlisse has a dark past (which I'm a sucker for) and "Joshua" has a secret we have yet to find out. It's intriguing, and those early feelings when you meet someone new and exciting is reminiscent of when I was younger and in that position.

I'm impressed at the detail of the story, as I feel many authors/writers lack that (even best selling authors!), and it doesn't skimp on the sexual side of things. The only feedback I have to offer is some correction with grammar, and fixing the past/present tense that it seems to alter between, but it didn't affect my ability to read it too much. :-)

It's an ongoing work in progress and in its early stages, and I'm so excited to see how this continues!

TROP MIGNON

Cette histoire est très bonne! Je parle un peu de français, donc j'apprécie l'aspect français. This story is well done and enticing... I look forward to seeing how it plays out. I hope a love triangle forms; those are always the best stories!

I'd love some more background on Adrian and Cher, which I'm sure will come in the upcoming chapters, and little more backstory on Cher, but again I'm sure it's in the story I haven't gotten to yet.

Please let me know how I can further support you and assist you in making your story successful!

COOL IDEA

For English not being your first language, I'm really impressed! The plot of the story is still building but it seems really good so far! I'm excited to see where you take this story. :)

This idea is really cool. The idea of anything mafia-related is sexy and taboo, so it's really intriguing!

Great work... Let me know how I can help or support you at all during your writing process!!

Fantastic Coming-Of-Age!!

Oh to be that age again! This is a great coming-of-age story of being young, awkward, and filled with hormones... can't wait to see where this heads! Good job. :) Will keep tabs on this story!!!!

Great Hook -- AWESOME POTENTIAL!!

Right off the bat I'd love to say that the introduction hooked me! I love historical drama pieces and admire anyone who attempts them because of the immense about of research required to make it even a sliver of historically accurate. So kudos to you!

I think your story has really great potential. If you're open to any constructive feedback, keep reading, but if not just know that you have so much potential!!

Your story needs a little polishing but don't get discouraged! All stories do. :) I think the chapters could be a little bit shorter and it could definitely use some grammar/punctuation corrections, but all that will happen when you go back and revise. As Terry Prachett once said: "The first draft is just you telling yourself the story."

Gripping Story — MUST READ

This story is SO good! I’m not usually one for horror stories but this one gripped me right away with a compelling hook in the beginning and continues with that momentum! I’m only a few chapters in and I’m eager to read more!😱

Definitely a must read if you’re into crime / horror novels. Beautifully written with a vast array of descriptive words, making you feel like you’re right alongside the characters! A job very well done!!!🤩🤩🤩

Overall the plot is good and seems to have a clear direction! As with most stories, there are some spelling / grammatical errors as you read but it doesn’t hinder the experience of reading the story. 😊

PURE PERFECTION

OKAY. So this story - while I haven't finished it - is AMAZING. The author is so passionate about Greek mythology and it SHOWS. She clearly knows her stuff and sheds light on myths and legends that people like myself would otherwise have no idea about.

Not to mention her taking the time to embed photos and videos into her work, making it an extremely pleasing and wholesome experience. I recommend using the black mode, it looks so cool!

I have nothing but GOOD things to say about this story and its author. HIGHLY RECOMMEND - A MUST-READ. It's pure 🔥.

INTRIGUING

HEY GIRL.
First of all, this story is SO unique! I love that it isn't a traditional beginning and that the main character has some tragedy in her life... excellent work! Your descriptions are really great, and I'm SO curious about what will happen in this story. EXCELLENT WORK. I'm excited to see what you do with this.

If you're looking for a NON-TRADITIONAL story, THIS IS THE ONE! I recommend it!

Greek Mythology is MY FAVE

I love this so far!!! I am a huge fan of Greek mythology; always have been. I've read several different Greek myth stories but nothing ever lives up to my expectations. This, though, seems SO promising. The first couple chapters were strong and I can't wait to read more. HIGHLY RECOMMEND. A MUST-READ.

Honestly seems as promising as Percy Jackson. Treat yourself and read this story!!

AWESOME

When I was younger I used to read a lot of mermaid books - I used to think they were super fun. It's great to see another great story at a more age-appropriate level.

Also, I have 3 brothers so I can relate to that well. We're all adults now so I rarely see them so the family aspect makes me feel right at home. Your writing style is impeccable, and the story hooked me right away. A must-read!

GREAT STORY

I love anything crime related, and I love that this story has details about the crimes from the unsub's perspective - it's unique, fresh. I can't wait to read more!