Cait The Writer

Panama City Beach

Just an average girl with a passion for writing ✍🏼 Made in the USA 🇺🇸 Engaged to my best friend 💍 Animal mom 🐶🐱 Obsessed with autumn 🍂🎃

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HOOKED RIGHT AWAY

OKAYYYY GIRL YOU ARE NOT MESSING AROUND.

I love when plots can hook a ready right away, and this one DEFINITELY does. I was immediately intrigued by the King & Queen’s relationship and how he’d react to having a girl. Not to mention, what comes immediately following and how you switch last and present. I’m so curious to continue!

I know I’m just at the beginning BUT I have no doubts that this story will be straight 🔥. Nice work!

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TROP MIGNON

Cette histoire est très bonne! Je parle un peu de français, donc j'apprécie l'aspect français. This story is well done and enticing... I look forward to seeing how it plays out. I hope a love triangle forms; those are always the best stories!

I'd love some more background on Adrian and Cher, which I'm sure will come in the upcoming chapters, and little more backstory on Cher, but again I'm sure it's in the story I haven't gotten to yet.

Please let me know how I can further support you and assist you in making your story successful!

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COOL IDEA

For English not being your first language, I'm really impressed! The plot of the story is still building but it seems really good so far! I'm excited to see where you take this story. :)

This idea is really cool. The idea of anything mafia-related is sexy and taboo, so it's really intriguing!

Great work... Let me know how I can help or support you at all during your writing process!!

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A MASTERPIECE

I'm not usually super into supernatural beings or witches, but IT'S OCTOBER BITCHES so hell yeah I'm down. I'm also trying to branch out from my normal tastes, and this was PERFECT to do so!

You writing is so immaculate! And I love how there was immediately a hook that caught my attention and kept it. I love your graphics, they add a lot of character, and I LOVE where you're taking this story. I honestly can't wait to read more!! EEK keep up the great work girl!! You're going to do amazing things!

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SO COOL AND UNIQUE

I love that we don't know Isabella's past, yet we know it's morbid. We don't know much yet... other than Isabella seems to be a tortured soul and is being forced into killing people (presumably). I wonder if she ends up being like an assassin... I'M EXCITED! Crime is my THANG.

Anyway! Great work, and I can't wait to read more!

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Kinda Funny!

I didn’t mean to laugh as hard as I did, but I can just imagine a kid like this and it IS kind of funny.

To be honest, I think this would make a good children’s book! This would be a good moral and lesson for kids.

All things said, it was well-written. There were some misspelled words here and there as well as some punctuation error, but aside from that, you did a good job! Nice work!

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FLAWLESS + UNIQUE

I haven't read much of it so far but I LOVE what I have read! This is a very unique plot with characters that you wouldn't expect. This is truly a great piece of work and I can't wait to read more!

If you're looking to read something a little different from the normal genre, THIS is the book!

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PURE PERFECTION

OKAY. So this story - while I haven't finished it - is AMAZING. The author is so passionate about Greek mythology and it SHOWS. She clearly knows her stuff and sheds light on myths and legends that people like myself would otherwise have no idea about.

Not to mention her taking the time to embed photos and videos into her work, making it an extremely pleasing and wholesome experience. I recommend using the black mode, it looks so cool!

I have nothing but GOOD things to say about this story and its author. HIGHLY RECOMMEND - A MUST-READ. It's pure 🔥.

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INTRIGUING

HEY GIRL.
First of all, this story is SO unique! I love that it isn't a traditional beginning and that the main character has some tragedy in her life... excellent work! Your descriptions are really great, and I'm SO curious about what will happen in this story. EXCELLENT WORK. I'm excited to see what you do with this.

If you're looking for a NON-TRADITIONAL story, THIS IS THE ONE! I recommend it!

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Greek Mythology is MY FAVE

I love this so far!!! I am a huge fan of Greek mythology; always have been. I've read several different Greek myth stories but nothing ever lives up to my expectations. This, though, seems SO promising. The first couple chapters were strong and I can't wait to read more. HIGHLY RECOMMEND. A MUST-READ.

Honestly seems as promising as Percy Jackson. Treat yourself and read this story!!

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AWESOME

When I was younger I used to read a lot of mermaid books - I used to think they were super fun. It's great to see another great story at a more age-appropriate level.

Also, I have 3 brothers so I can relate to that well. We're all adults now so I rarely see them so the family aspect makes me feel right at home. Your writing style is impeccable, and the story hooked me right away. A must-read!

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EXCELLENT IDEA

I love the idea of this story! It's a great, fun way to provide historic information to readers. As mentioned in the other reviews, there is some info dumping but it didn't impact the story negatively. :) It felt like more of a backstory to the plot. I like where this is headed - great job!

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Fantastic Coming-Of-Age!!

Oh to be that age again! This is a great coming-of-age story of being young, awkward, and filled with hormones... can't wait to see where this heads! Good job. :) Will keep tabs on this story!!!!

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GREAT STORY

I love anything crime related, and I love that this story has details about the crimes from the unsub's perspective - it's unique, fresh. I can't wait to read more!

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