Absolute page turner
I just wanted to keep reading.
Read the story now
So far this was a fantastic read. It feels well thought out and planned. the author knows where they want to take you with the story as it develops.
Minor things with the main character and her immaturity but I'm guessing the author has intended for that to be from the abuse.
I would like to see more character development from her. It does get abit tedious when she has inner powers to understand others feelings. Recommendations (if not already planned): acknowledgement of her own feelings and progressing past the submissive "woe is me" crying when confronted, held accountable etc, and being taught the difference between being attacked and being asked hard questions through her developing friendships etc.
Additional time with the brother as the time line jumps weeks in-between for training maybe abit more detail about their interactions and progressive separation from each other.