Carla Barnes

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The lycand msid

I love the funny lines in this.d.j. is a hoot.keep it going. What I love about you is that you don't have to wait forever for a update

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The hunters chance

I enjoyed this book so much1, the way the characters developed and the end. It had a smile on my face the entire ladt chapter......I have enjoyed each of her books..

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Bait 2

Stories were good , plot lines good. It was just missing relationships with a pack. How was the pack run and so forth. Alot that is being considered in the new books you read, the authors take these things into consideration so as to not have what to me feels like is missing. Maybe just by adding a couple of chapters would bring it together. Maybe some more closure. This is only my opinion and I certainly don't have the skill or fortitude to do this so for what it is and the gaps that bother me are again only my opinion. The books overall were great with what was included.

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Imperial

I hate claudette

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Blackstone 3

Want did you stop writing! 2 1 did nothing? Would stop writing????

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The kings mate

Take us right to the end and then say that its miving?? I know you've said it was before, but this is to close to not end it up or set up for a sequel

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A potential husband

Just once I'd like to see him and her work together to bring the bi--ch down, and grow together even more. It's always the same thing the ex that hates the wife, the wife that gets her old boyfriend involved, the husband that won't talk. They separate then get back together or not at all..please let them be special and stick together.

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A feeling of alignment

As long as it ends good...I am so over sequels that just break your love of reading

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The sentinels maid

Hurry up!!!!! I cant wait...please keep going with the whole family and then some, say a never ending storyline...I enjoy them so much

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Genius

To sad I read to life is depressing enough. I love Layla and I read everything I've found of hers. This was way to dark for me. Many people would love it, I just like sunshine and lollipops....

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Washed up

I like the plot, sort of a judaic park kind of thing but with a story line to keep you interested.

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Heart of stone 3

Loved all 3 books can't wait for more of the family.

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Golden prophesy

Love all your books...

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Skyheart ranch

I like it...I am not looking forward to the husband' I know it has to happen' but still.....

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Broken alpha

I have to say I am hooked...I try to wait until one is complete and started this one before I realized. I think it's going to be one of my favorites...I love the dialog and the development of the characters. You brought so much more into this, with the silly antics of Raven and the personality of Dimitri. You made him a real mand man with her, from the gentleness to the dominant. I could go on but I don't do these reviews to often. Get is up some more quick ok?

Thank you.

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Heart of stone 2

Great story.. the dynamic between characters is what holds you.

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Blackstone 1 shots

What!!! Preston cheated on daisy...

Oh no!!!! I wish I had never read this. It totally destroyed my emotions , the in love beauty of his and Daisy's total love and devotion was what I fell in love with..

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The beast

I don't think I would have been able to bring myself to read your books in the future, if that had been the ending. Not saying to be harsh just honest. I read to take me away from the harsh reality of so many things. I can go through the fights, the crazy stuff, but I am sucker for a happy ending. Thanks for not doing that.

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Jaxon and julirtte

Well I hate when I am really enjoying & then I have to wait for the update, or in this case continuation. Lol...get to writing girl

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Jaxon and julirtte

Well I hate when I am really enjoying & then I have to wait for the update, or in this case continuation. Lol...get to writing girl

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Emma an alex

Love it and the 1 liners...reminds me of Janet evanovich.

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Cassie and Garrett

Love it

need to complete it

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Liam and celeste

It's an interesting storyline. I am enjoying.

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Autum

I am enjoying the read.

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Not sure

Am enjoying the atiry

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The twins

Very different, but am enjoying

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Maizie

Am enjoying the read

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Thomas and haily

Just want to get to reading the rest, caught up in the story

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Grayson

Is there any chance of getting some updates faster

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Ash

Just want to read

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Natiatli

Great read ready to go on

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Colin

Just want to keep reading

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White wolf

I am having problems with inkitt.it keeps jumping pages. But I like the white wolf plot.

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Haily

I am enjoying the read

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Marrying the ceo

I am really enjoying the read.

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Alpa

Good so far. Didn't give much time before asking

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Wild kinda awful thinking how horrible cause this could be true.

A different kind of read for me.

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Sammy

She went through an awful lot. Sad

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Shattered princess

Liking it I am enjoying the plot and wondering where its leadjng

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Sam

I really want to know what he is going to day

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Marcus paradise

I just want an update quickly!!!

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Marcus and char

Am really enjoying trying to figure who did what to who.

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Chase and Jack

Fun little story

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Cyrus and Isabella

Great, I am really enjoying it so far

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Stars are not the fault

Loving it, a good escape

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Hope it's not a fatal attraction

Interesting looking for joy

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Its complicated

I was different than what I imagined it would be. Refreshing, after all the ones I normally read on here.

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Don't know

Just not sure, it's more erotica then actual storyline.

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So far holding my interest

I like the story ..really the friendship that these two have

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Dsln

A lot of fun and interaction

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It was a good read

Enjoying the read....its fast paced I like that...

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Great enjoyable read.

Great relaxing read. Enjoying the personality of all the characters.

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All kinds of family

I am having a hard time with the app. It's very touchy. So far the story is just starting.....setting all characters up. Interesting enough to keep your attention.

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Soulmate

It's a great relaxing read, not stringing all the past out but getting to it to deal with

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Don't know

It's a good read. I like that it dosen't take forever to learn the problems and past to set up the story.

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A little erotic for my taste but a good story.

The story line is definitely different from anything I've read...I want to finish it.

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