Carlton B Reid III

Woodbridge

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The strongest poems

I feel that the strongest poems was the first and last one. The first one was simple yet complex.

The last one had a great ending. I really liked how you wrote that the sweater will always be yours.

One thing I would have like to see more of was thought regarding the structure of each poem. I couldn’t see any meaning in the structure, but at the same time, there doesn’t need to be structure, unless you want to elevate the poem to a new level.

Anyway, I liked your poems.

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Nice tone

I thought that the latter half of your poem was the strongest part. I really enjoyed the last line too. Nice, but you could benefit from a bit of proofreading at times.

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