carolin

@carolin81

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Must read

This is one of those delicious slow burn romance stories. Just perfect.

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Betrayal’s journey to peace

The depth of betrayal is a battle of the heart to overcome and fine one’s self worth. This is a story of patience and the perfect ending.

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Just what the heart longs for

Beautifully written story of second chances. Narcissist ex’s to finding true acceptance and peace found in adult love. Perfect ending that was found through a painful price. 🥰

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Compelling plot

This a story with all the emotions living on a roller coaster. Fear and pain driving our young protagonist into a life of desperation. Obsession gone off the rails, in the end all accounts settled. Hard fought happy ending.

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Young love, how sweet it is

It is hard to love and keep a playboy. The old saying once a player always a player ... in this story it is not the case. It would be fun to read a sequel.

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Hmmm

Story telling can be an amazing thing. This is one of those. I enjoyed the journey of this story. Our protagonist seeking mental health care so he can love her properly... The author is showing us readers that control is something that needs guidance in understanding and finding the answers of our own motivation for our actions. It is not always doable without professional help. Seeking professional help is not weakness. Happy ending is worth the effort.

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Pride goes before the fall

Interesting story about pride and the damage it can cause in the lives of many. It takes work and honesty to build a life of forgiveness and understanding. They have their happy ending.

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Wow

Love of a predator, devotion of a Don. Crazy sister, revenge done cold

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Happiness from betrayal

If only life was like this story. It would be wonderful if out of betrayal you can find the love you deserved. Nicely written short story.

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Another fun read

Not disappointed, looking forward to more from this author

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