Carol Tan

I started writing erotic poetry when I was younger and was inspired a few years back to write a novel. Working on my first series showcasing the life and loves of Valentina Perotti. Enjoy!

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Walls of Fire

I am captured with this chemistry that is building. Work on the grammar and dialogue a bit. Add more show of the scene too. Keep writing!!!

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Secret Feelings

This ability to capture poetry you have is a gift. Please write more!!!

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Bindweed

I love the uniqueness in which the author sets the scene. Reminds me of when I was young and my friends and I would talk through our play we per about to stage. Well done! Love!!!

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You captured this audience

The author has my attention which is tough to do with horror. Excited to read further.

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Llewellyn

The first chapter was nice and polished. The author writes good scenes but needs more character development. Let’s if interesting characters but more unfolding of who they are would be great. I like the storyline and plot and am enjoying the book so far.

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Thief!

As always! You steel my attention!!! I so enjoy your storytelling. Write more, please!!

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The Rage

This is a great start and the writer is a good storyteller. There is just a lot of grammar issues. But all in all there is talent here.

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Be My Last

Really enjoying the characters. Excited for more.

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Fighting For Hope

Loved the plot of the book and characters! Usually not my genre but it captivated me immediately!

Well done!!! Keep writing 🙏🏽🙏🏽

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One Last Dance

I am excited to read more. You are really good. Keep writing! Awaiting eagerly...

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Intriguing and Captivating

I thoroughly enjoy your storytelling and all you fantastical word.

Keep them coming!!!

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The Lost

Really great story and imaginative. Just needs work on grammar and writing style. Read as much as possible so you can get a sense of rhythm and flow. But I am invested as excited for more!

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Reborn

This was sexy. Very tasteful. Looking forward to more from the author.

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Quentin

Intriguing. I look forward to more.

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Time To Play Book 2

I really enjoyed the first book of shirts. This second is even better. Both your use of words and writing styles have improved. You are writing sex as if you just experience these scene first hand. Well done. On to book 3 for me!

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Time To Play Book 1

HOT 🥵 🔥!!!

This author writes sex very well. It’s not easy to put penis to paper and well...you must read for yourself!!!

Excited for book 2!!

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Intrigued

I am enjoying the chemistry of the characters. The spot on moments are well written. The story flows. Just polish the spelling and grammar and show us more of what the character is seeing around them, layout the scenery a bit more. Great skeleton put more meat on the bones. I am excited for your next chapters. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

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Stolen Moon

This book moves at a fabulous pace. The author did a great job to show not just tell. Great simple intriguing plot. Could use a good edit. Otherwise great. Very happy I read it.

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