Catherine Lenderi

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Great start

This is a great start. Karmilla seems a very interesting character from the beginning. There is a slight word repetition that I would like to see improved, but nothing that will destroy the pleasure of the readers. I am looking forward to reading more of Karmilla's story. I hope there is more of the dragon too. :)

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Good one!

It was a pleasant read and I agree with the writer that we must try to overcome our fears. The ending was a bit funny as well. I found no issues with the author's writing skills either and I liked the artwork used as well. I perhaps would like it to be a little longer but even so it was a good read.

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