
Very Good
That was very well written. Mysterious, suspenseful and captured a psychopaths mind. Excellent job with past to present. That is hard for a lot of people to capture without confusion. Thanks author!
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Story is a good read. Great writing and descriptions. Just can’t do any more. It is so bad. I would like to h*** the main character. Like your story author but geez, too much for me. Good writing. Take care!
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