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Sweet

It was very well written. Sweet and sad and happy. Loved the way you moved the story along creating a beautiful love story among two people so different. Creating a strong female character and an a jerk soon to alpha male. Story ending suddenly. Wanted more. :) but very well written. Job well done.

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Beautiful

WOW

Well written and absolutely beautiful. I love the conflict between the two Alpha's over an innocent girl. It is sad that the mother has to be such a spiteful person but it makes the story all come together. I hope that this story continues. She needs to find out who she truly is and choose between the two alpha's which ever one will bring her happiness. This story kept one guessing as what could happen next. I love how the second Alpha is also her mate. He seems much stronger and caring than the first. HIs mother has such a hold on him. He definitely is going to have to grow a backbone if he wants to win her heart. The story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the sequel.

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Hooked

Wow, loved this story. Well, written. A love hate relationship with the Alpha but this only made the story better. Always enjoy a strong woman in any story. Lots of excitement, danger, and death, but also romance, and births. Kept one wanting to see what happens next. The characters all come together in the end. The Alpha grew into a much better person and definitely loved growing with him. Well done. Looking forward to more.

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awesome tale

Loved the plot and the characters. The way they were presented was amazing. It made it easy to see what kind of person they were. This story made me laugh, cry and cringe in horror. I loved how their love slowly emerged and OMG the part with Michael was heart breaking. The story was well presented. The only problem is the continuous misuse of words and please run spell check as well. The story was wonderful and has so much potential but the misused words is in some cases hilarious and in others down right disturbing. I think you are a very capable writing and becoming one of my favorites for originality and making one feel the character's pain and joy through out the story. Just please work on your word usage and spelling. Great Read

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NICELY DONE

The story had a quite a few typographical errors throughout the book but that I overlooked because of the content of the story was so well presented. A sad, exciting story. Kept me wanting more. Can't wait to read what happens next. If you love horror, romance and the supernatural this is a must read. I certainly enjoyed the story and crave more. Looking for the second book now.. Can't wait to see where it leads.

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Keep smiling

This was a great story. I loved it. WOW Well written with lots of details. Definitely could picture every detail as if I were watching a scary movie. Could feel the presence of the evil and hear the noises in the attic. Feel the fear in the children as they dreamed. I simply love this story and this writers abilities. I did find a few misused or misspelled words a simple fix but necessarily fixed with a spell checker. MIchael J P Manus is becoming one of my favorite writers. Great Job.

keeeeeep up the good work.

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Amazing Collection

I can say nothing but good things. An amazing collection of stories. Brilliantly written. Each story creatively done providing a new dilemma, a new supernatural force to face. At the same time intertwining the previous character's personal history and connection to the situation, building the characters along the way. Each story is filled with chills, fears, love, hate. disgust.... . An excellent job. Definitely worth the read. I am expecting more great work from a brilliant story teller. If you haven't read these tales - then you definitely should.

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Good story

I really tired to understand and follow the story but it is difficult to follow. I liked the plot and way you built the characters. The idea was great and the characters were strong, but the story was just to difficult to follow. I think it has lots of potential. It just needs some work in grammar and punctuation. I liked the build up to the end but then felt like that there were so many unanswered questions and unresolved issues that it was kind of a let down. I know this story with a little help could be an excellent story but as written it falls short of it's full potential. Still great effort and just get someone to help you with the grammar and run on sentences. This would make the story much easier to follow. Thanks I did enjoy it.

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sweet and funny

This story is definitely cute and funny. Love the ending LMAO. I really enjoyed this short story. Wish it were a bit longer but it was a very sweet and interesting read. Over all very entertaining and well worth the read. Definitely a fun story to read especially for a young reader.

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AWE lovely story

This story was well written with a lot of thought. Even though there was some drama along the way, nothing that became a major problem. People change and accept new ways. She was a strong character and adjusted to changes quickly and well. It was a very sweet story with a struggle here and there. The story honestly depicts the way normal people behave in that the older generation doesn't want to move with the times but eventually does for the most part. The story had a very nice plot which was easy to follow and left me smiling so many times from laughter or just that get warm feeling when something special happens. Looking forward to reading more great work from this author. Very well done.

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wow

I found this story very original and one of those books that I simply can't stop reading until it is finished. Like the child who the story was being told to I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. I couldn't wait for the ending but I also hated to see it end. It was quite the fairy tale. I think a new name for the book is in order. Riverside just doesn't seem to fit the story nor does it grab the reader. I read the book based on the writer's introduction. The story just flowed. Never knowing what to expect next. Always wondering how it was going to end. Wonderful story filled with love, sorrow and magjc. Definitely worth the read.

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suspenseful

Very well written. Made me angry so many times. You could feel the sorry and pain suffered by the innocent children. In a way I thought it would have been cute if she had hooked up with cop but this story wasn't meant to be cute. It is better that they didn't hook up. Loved how she became a stronger person and fighter as the story progressed. Yet in the end she had to rely on other's to do what she couldn't do alone. It certainly was filled with suspense and horror. Loved it. :)

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Intriguing

Very well written. Definitely kept you wondering for sure who the killer was though I had my suspicions all along. Good in that there was never enough evidence to proof my suspicions until the end. Loved the doubts and fears between the two main characters. Beautiful love story mixed in with a murder mystery.

May have been a few typo errors but nothing that was extreme. Over all I definitely enjoyed the story. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read it. Good job. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your works.

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Needs work

The story line was cute but a bit repetitious. There were several errors in punctuation and grammar. I really struggled just to finish the story. I think the writer needs to spend more time on building up her characters and what happened to them and work on merging them together. The things that happened were like a repetition of what happened before. With both girls needing their voice back and both going into a coma shortly afterwards. There was very little detail or drama between the characters. I think if the writer would spend more time in details and stop rewriting the story in both character's view. Simply, spend more time building the characters and elaborating on the story line then it could become a better story. Like showing how she was mistreated at school and giving details about her interaction with her bullies. Even showing how her dad struggled and why he felt anger towards her from his point of view. Show some excitement for when she gains her voice back. Provide some daily details as to what she felt as she was being cured. Fill in what happened between her siblings and her father while she was gone. Show how her mate struggled while she was undergoing the cure for her voice and later when she was in a coma. There is potential here just needs some major work.

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Heartbreaking

I certainly enjoyed this story. It was very well written. A bit confusing at times. A few minor spelling errors. Trying to follow the time changes and characters names. I loved the story itself though it was a sad and yet beautiful story. Only It ended quite abruptly. Hope to read more stories from this author.

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Amazing

Wow!!! an amazing story. Well written. Scary, funny, sad ... so many emotions. Loved it from start to finish. Worth the read and i may just read it again. Leaves you feeling content.

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Wow great job

This was well written story. Simply loved the story line. The characters are very well described and full of. life and love, joy and sadness. I simply couldn't put the story down. I laughed and cried. I was angry and sad and happy. So so many emotions. I really enjoyed the banter between the characters. The way her life history unfolded. There were a few errors which a quick reread and fix would eliminate. Over all it was a lovely story definitely worth the read.

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wow specatular

Wow this story was fast paced. Full of drama.. Moments of joy and sadness. Easy to follow. Love the characters and how they all interacted and intertwined. Great job. Left me happy but also in tears.

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wow

Very well written. Sad and scary and crazy all at the same time. Hated and loved the characters. Sometimes I just wanted to stop reading it because of the violence. Very strong female character. So much happened for her to overcome. Definitely worth the read. Full of tears and happiness. She was definitely a survivor, to endure all that she did from her parents betrayal to all the other betrayals that she had to overcome. As I said well written.

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So sweet

Loved this story from start to finish.

It kept me smiling. I think the Alfa King was a little condescending and hated his attitude regarding what his expectations of what his queen should be. I believe more depth into why he believed this would have helped. Maybe more detail into why her parents were so in debt to them that she had to work over four years to pay them back. More details about all the characters involved. the story was well written. However, it was short and could have been more satisfying to the reader if there were a few more details provided. It was a very cute story only I have read so many lately where the slave becomes the queen. I wish someone could come up with something a little bit more original. No offense.

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Charming

The story was well written and the characters all fit in nicely. Sad that her so called family were such poor examples of parents but so thankful that she found a better family in her relationship with her "uncle". Love the story within the story regarding the bones and the love story within. The story was great and the birth of the twins and the old souls within will make a great sequel to this lovely story.

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Content

I love the way you write. How you build the characters so quickly making it easy for me to love or hate them. It was a sad story but also she made a not so perfect heroine. The story was filled with laughter and tears. So much covered in so few a chapters. Perfect read for the times when you want to read but just don't have the time to read a long story. I like have smoothly the story transgressed. The need to resolve her innocents. Simply well written. A few minor errors but a well developed story. If you haven't read it .. well you should.

great job.

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Awe touching

Very well written. Still sad about a certain non-person's death but hopefully he actually survived and will reappear in the next story. The story was well written. It was easy to follow. It was filled with lots of emotions fun, sorry, sadness and love being based on the assumption that one already knew the abilities of vampires and werewolves. I think providing a little more detail would be beneficial in clarifying why they hate each other and want to ruin each other's lives. More detail into Rune's life before becoming a pirate. The story is filled with action and adventure. I just want to be able to feel what is happening and that takes providing more details in describing what is going on around them and in how the character feels. I truly enjoyed the story from start to finish.

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WOW

The story had a bit of a rough start but the more I read the more that the story improved. There are a few errors and a fix situations that don't quit match up but overall the story well worth the read. I hope that I can find and read the second book. I enjoyed the story tremendously. It was well worth the read.

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Intriguing

I truly enjoyed this story. It was one of those I can't put the book down to see what may happen next. The mixture of supernaturals and her unknown abilities make the story even more intriguing. Loved how the story played out. So much drama and sadness in her short life. Can't wait to see what happens from her. Well done. Even though there was a few typographical errors along the way I don't feel that there were enough to worry about. A simple fix by rereading of the story. Good Job. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

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well written

Very well written. loved the story. Very strong female character. Need more time with her mate. Ended way to soon. Seem like I had only read the first chapter and the story had already ended. Very nice combining all the supernaturals together. Can't wait to read more. Need answers and more details. Only found a few errors in spelling otherwise no problem.

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adorable

loved this story. Enjoyed it immensely. The story followed the plot line and filled in any holes along the way for the most part. Could have been a bit longer but all and all a good read.

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WOW

This story was well written. Kept me wondering what was going to happen next. Loved how the story came together towards the end clearing up all the signs along the way. The story was easy to follow. Parts were sad and disturbing but also understandable in order for her to reach her full potential. Always, enjoy the strong woman character. Such a terrible life she led but such a strong woman in the end. Even liked the ending which typically I do not like when things are left hanging. But knowing that she is a strong character I know she can handle whatever is thrown her way. Can not wait to see what unfolds for her the near future.. hint hint .. Great job. Like your style.

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Very Cute

The story was very cute. There were some errors here and there along the way. A simple heartfelt story. I enjoyed reading it. Ending was sweet, but honestly I think a little more excitement would make the story a more satisfying read. Started out well but problems were too easily solved with little friction. The problems and the resolve to solve them make a great story. To me this was a simple love story wouldn't matter if they were wolves or humans. Has potential just needs a little work.

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well written

Loved the story line. Well written. The details about the individual characters and how their lives all fit together. The horror and the hint of romance between the characters. I liked that it was not filled with sex and sex and more sex like lots of teen wolf books seem to do . I only found a few errors or misuse of words or using the wrong spelling of words here and there that spell check won't fix but rereading would. I am sure that the sequel will be just as exciting to read as this one. Thanks. Continue your creative path. Enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks

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Awesome story

Very sweet story. Well written. Love the way it all fits together and the way the creatures are described. The flow of the story was perfect. Always leading up to the next solution/problem. Love happy endings as well. Very well told. well written enjoyed the tale. can't wait for a continuation.

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well written

I loved this story from start to finish. So much detail and turmoil. It was one of those you can't wait to see what happens next. Very creative. I loved the concept of the powerful human yet non human guys in her life. Her ability to stay true to herself. A strong female character. His love for her and need to keep her safe . I loved the story right up until the end which left me quit confused and unsatisfied. I truly didn't like the end at all. I know that it was to entice one to read a sequel I am hopeful but to me there is still too much story to be told with the first couple without trying to create a bond between the next two. There is still the fact that he is the leader and she is now the queen, the children that she promised her mom that she would see. Future fights and conflicts between the two of them. How it all unfolds her new life with him I just don't feel that the first story was complete not in my mind and now it seems a different story is about to unfold. Thanks for an on the edge read, filled with near death experiences as an amazing tale unfolds. Just need to work on that ending.

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well written

From the beginning to the end I was deeply wrapped up into this story. Very well, written. Easy to read. The overall story was intriguing. The situation surrounding each character pulled you deeper into the story making one want more and yet fear where the story was leading. Each character had their strengths and weaknesses. There was a strong bond as well between the characters. So much love among so many lies yet the desire to protect. Can't wait to read the next story and hopefully get much needed answers like... who were her real parents? How did a human her mother become her caregiver and mother? Why hide her true identity? What and who the darkness really is? Who is the real hero? Is there a love triangle?

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Lovely story

I must say that the story had a nice plot and kept me wanting to read the story, however, the errors in grammar and spelling were quit atrocious. Needs to spell check and have someone who is well versed in English to correct your errors. I did not like the husband at all in this story. He was a jerk who she should have never forgiven his atrocious behaviors. Though it was a lovely love story and of course needed a good ending. More detail should have been provided with confronting his girlfriend and her deceitful lies and ways. Overall I enjoyed the story. Well worth the read.

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Great JOB

Loved the story from the start. All the twist and turns. the story was very creative and kept me wanting more. I couldn't stop reading until the end. Kept me on the edge until it was solved. Hated what happened to Cole. Sad. But the ending was UGH... I understand why but can't just one story have a potential happy ending. LOL

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With a smile

Wow this story though filled with death and missing girls kept me smiling in between. Loved the banter between the detective and his girlfriend. Well, written with no holes in the plot. Liked the twist in who was to blame for the missing girls. So sad, yet the results was great. The story read smoothly with no flaws. Great job. Hope to read more writings from this author. Definitely worth the read. Truly enjoyed it and the ending was hilarious. :)

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Nicely told

The story is well written, keeps one guess what really happened. A few more personal details would be nice at the beginning of the story. Perhaps just small inserts as to their childhood showing good times and bad times that they shared together. How their love grew for each other and how little brother always tagged along. Also, how can she forgive Dexter knowing that he is the reason that her first love went to prison and eventually died. I would think that she would be angry at least at first. Overall, a great read just needs a bit more detail. Clearly, I enjoyed it and will recommend it to others.

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Beautiful Story

The story was well written minus a few errors that can be easily fixed. Honestly when I read something I don't really notice spelling etc as the story itself is what I am engrossed in. This story was sad and beautiful. Everyone has a history and it seem all of theirs was heartbreaking. The twist and turns in the story were well thought out and made it all come together at the end. This is what I love as well as happy endings of course.

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Well done

Granted there were some errors here and there. The story was easy to follow and definitely worth the read. The plot was well played out even optional endings were provided. I prefer a story with a happy ending but horror stories tend to end with the idea of the horror repeating itself. This type of ending is typical.

The time jumps were okay but left some gaps in her life that would have helped build her character better. The fact that she is so timid and scared of other kids and yet she does not seem to be afraid of ghost needs some explanation. Though it is not a love story it was never clear as to why the conflict between the two boys were mentioned if nothing came of it. Guys just don't bow down that easily especially with the conflict is over a sister or a potential girlfriend.

Obviously, the story needs a little work, but I still enjoyed reading it and think in the end it was very entertaining and worth the read. Well, done

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Horrifying and disturbing

Well written. Definitely keeps one wondering what is going to take place next. He knew how to play the game and she was an innocent woman with no experience especially in deviants like him. The story was horrifying in all the hell that she went through and for him to just keep coming after her with no remorse or compassion for her. Disturbing in the things that he put her through and that to be so alone and under his control. I understand why so many committed suicide. This story was so well written it made me uncomfortable for her and her family. Great job.

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Well done

Your story was quit a horror story. I hate that a child is ever put into such a dreary situation. To be deserted by family like that is simply unforgivable. Her mother deserved ending the way she did. I loved the story and the mixture of love hate and fear. Her acceptance of what she can't change. Such a sad situation for such a young brave child. Very well done. Too bad she couldn't be saved but that never happens in horror stories. Well written. Enjoyed it tremendously. Can't wait to read the next one. Starting it next. Keep up the good work.

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awesome

This story was well written, I was captivated from the start. but I was also disappointed in the ending. It simply ending too soon with too may unanswered questions. Seems like I was just drawn into the story and it abruptly ends leaving one sad and angry. I will say that the story in itself was well written and everything fell into place. I just think that there was so much more to be told. It was like watching a promotional view of a newly released movie and leaving you wanting more to see where it leads. Only this isn't a short review of the book to get you interested but the full book. If a sequel then it is a great book but without it I am afraid it is a story without a clear ending.

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Beautiful

Such a beautiful story full of tears, fears, love, sadness and eternal happiness. Very well written. Didn't care much for her boyfriend but her time with Steven was quit entertaining. Loved the way their relationship developed. The decisions they both had to make to grow. The description of the cabin and the dangers surrounding it. Left me in tears. My only regret is it ended to soon. :) Keep up the good work. Simply a beautiful story. well written.

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Unique

Wow such a beautiful read. even with the timeline jumps it was a breeze to follow. So hope that there is a continuation. It was a n amazing read. Leaving one wanting more and needing more answers. Anxiously hoping that there will be a next chapter to this story. The writer knows how to keep you interested in the story. So original and intriguing. I certainly recommend reading it. Make sure you have your snacks and plenty of time as you won't want to put it down once you start. ENJOY I DID

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Nicely done

The plot was great. It was heart wrenching and disturbing in as it all could really happen with the way the system is today. Lily was a strong child even though she was presented as a meek weak child. I enjoyed the story right up until the end. I understand why the ending was left the way it was but I would have preferred her just finally finding the happiness that she so earned and deserved. The writing style was great and I didn't see any major errors. Good job.

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Thrilling

Loved this sequel. I certainly hope that there will be a third book. There are still so many unanswered questions. This story is amazing. I was never sure what was going to happen next until it had happened and then it was like wow did he go there. The plot and characters are so unique and I certainly have enjoyed watching them come to life. I know there has to be a third book and I can't wait to read it. If you haven't read these two you certainly should they are definitely worth the read. The author is quit tallented. Loved it!!!

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Hooked

Basically I must admit that getting into the story was a bit slow for me ( no reflection on the writer as the start gave you a good description of the main character and his demeanor) but once I did I was hooked I could not stop reading the story. It was quite a thrilling read. Loved the mixture of reality with the supernatural and how the Texas Ranger nonchalantly tracked down the vampire while constantly thinking of his new girl. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Beautiful

This book was lovely. It was a mix of sadness, love and horror. It was well written though at one point I was struggling as to what was going on as there was a time jump but once I realized that it went very smoothly. It was such a love hate situation filled with tears and heartbreak. The story was well written and the ending was fitting for what had transpired. Your writing skills are quite good. I saw only a few errors but overall it was a well written book and if in print the corners would be worn from rereading. this story. Really enjoyed this story. :) Thanks

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Well worth the read

WOW.. A roller coaster ride. I was either smiling or crying. This story was well written. Loved the plot. The story kept you wondering what was going to happen next. Full of tears and fears but you also could feel the love between her and Nick and of course James. Only a minimal amount of typo's which can be easily fixed. Keep up the good work.

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great read

Loved this story and the characters. The way it all fell into play. The whole idea is a new concept ... Mere-mutts. Very cute but the character's are strong and and love the changes within them. I honestly didn't see any errors. The plot was great and I honestly wasn't ready for it to end. :/

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quite entertaining

I must say the story was well written with only a few minor errors. Job well done in explaining why things happened the way they did. Either I skipped a part or it was never told as to when and how her so called parents escaped the dungeon.. Obviously, her real father was a sadistic jerk but no clarification as to why. I love the interaction between the Luna and the Alpha. Though to not know about werewolves and to not know that she was one herself she didn't seem to have much of a conflict in believing or accepting her role as the Luna. To have been abused all her life she stood up quickly to Alice I think was her name . Why the interaction in the bathroom was never clarified either. Just correct the age situation was she 17 or 19. Watch your time line. Over all I certainly enjoyed the story. Thanks for making it available to read.

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Quite creepy

Very well written. Creepy and entertaining. Sad that things always end up this way the innocent paying the price for the rich and not so innocent. It certainly kept you on your toes as to what was going to happen next and to who. All I can say well written and certainly look forward to more stories from you. Keep up the good work.

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Absolutely Amazing

Loved this story from start to finish. The story keeps you on edge. Love the relationship between the Bo and her. Cute, funny, scary... so many emotions. Have nothing to say but good things. The writing style makes you want to read and read and read. Never wanted it to end but couldn't wait to see what was happening next. I certainly will be looking into some of this writers other stories. Thanks for providing such a combination of emotions. May all your stories be as successful as this one. Please continue to write.

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Intriguing

A very well written book. Can't wait to read the next two. The story moved quickly. I was hooked after the first chapter. Great job capturing your readers interest. Love the mix of supernatural beings and the girls kick butt attitudes. Wasn't ready for the cliff hanger ending but over all loved the story. All I can say keep up the good work. I am ready to start the second one. Truly a magical story.

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Great Read

I liked the way the story moved quickly but left you wondering about so many things. How sweet and innocent the child appeared to be. The plot and everything in between just fell into place. There were a few errors along the way that can be quickly fixed. I must say there were no boring moments and the ending was perfect. It would be nice to see you continue story line with the child being raised by foster parents. So dark and well written. Great job!

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Great plot

Over all I loved the story. It was a bit repetitive at the beginning which can make a reader loose interest. . I don't know, perhaps merging some chapters eliminate that issue . Having read some of your other books I knew that it would be a good story and it definitely was. I personally didn't like Elizabeth's character. She seemed quit immature for her age and her eating habits were unrealistic but I did enjoy the jokes, teasing and banner between her and the boys for the most part. I do believe that her parents would have been more concerned about her where about's than simply accepting that everything is okay with her. Maybe showing this somewhere in the mix would make it seem more believable. The only other thing I would add would be maybe showing a mix of emotions between Ryder and Elizabeth. Perhaps some inclination that he likes her without her being aware of it. The story overall was quite cute and I enjoyed it. . I do believe with a little critiquing the story would be amazing like the other's I have read. Over all a good job.

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Exciting

Quite a roller coaster ride. Loved the plot and characters. Lots of emotions ... anger, tears.. happiness.. sorrow.. Definitely kept one wondering what was going to happen next. Not your typical romance story. Lots of love granted but adventure as well. Love how the story proceeded helping both to be a better person in the end. Only a few misspelled words but a quick spell check will fix most and some a simple reread. Love this author's writing. Would love to see more chapters. Overall I would read it again and again.

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Well Done

The story was well written and just enough information was provided to keep you guessing as to who killed her grandmother. It all came together at the end. Even though we don't really know for sure who her grandfather is enough information was provided to make you feel sure that you know the answer. I love how smoothly the story flowed. Once he captured her at the library I couldn't stop reading. I loved this from the beginning to the end. There was no long drug out boring moments. I saw very little if any errors in grammar or punctuation. It still needs a title. I certainly look forward to reading more of your writing. Well done.

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Intriguing

Absolutely love this story. I simply can not wait to read the next one. The story was well written. I saw very few errors. The plot thickened. Great job in keeping everything in line meshing the story line with each character. Ended way to soon for my taste though. Just left the reader longing for more. Excellent job. Loved the characters. Such a sweet couple they made. Looking forward to a continuation. :) Soon I hope.

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WOW

A must read story. I loved the plot from beginning to end. A strong woman with a hidden past. So many secrets to be told with a love story in the mix. Well written with only a few errors that can be easily fixed. I truly hope that there is a continuation to this story. Very well written and no sex scenes. Just a simply love story with a twist. LOVE IT LOVE IT. I can not say enough how much I enjoyed the plot and the characters.

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Good Read

I have really enjoyed this story so far. Very well written. Quite intriguing. Hope they find her friend soon and that she gets to see both her mom and dad again. It is rather creepy that the alien's randomly picks a girl to be their bride. Hopefully when he becomes king he can find a better way to find a bride than kidnapping them. Yes, I have noticed a few errors here and there but nothing that a good spell check and a few quick touches wouldn't fix. As this is an on going story I don't expect perfection. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see where this adventure is going to take our little Princess Bride.

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Great story

Very well written. Kept on on edge as to what was going to happen next. Love the characters. I think a little more history about the mob. More detail would be nice. It moved really fast. I think more time needs to b e spent on the building of the characters. She accepted being his sex slave to easily. As strong of a personality that she had I think she would have been a bit more hesitant in choosing that life style. And to love their child neither of them seemed to take Julia into consideration whenever they left to save the other one. I realize that their love was supposed to be a strong bond but what about the love of their daughter. Chase being told about her being pregnant after she left the first. This should have been explored a bit more. More detail on his trying to find her. Also, if her knew where she was why did he wait until after the baby was born to come and get her. Don't get me wrong I loved the plot and the characters. I just think the story moved to quickly and lots of details were not included. I really enjoyed reading the story and loved the plot all the way to the end.

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Heartbreaking reality

I love the characters. All with their own personal issues intertwined. The moments of joy inbetween the horror and tears. How the characters through pain and hard ship developed a dependence upon each other. Hoping there will be a book about the invasion as these characters grow and mature. Loved the story line.

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Still smiling

Loved this story. The characters are amazing. So much love , amongst a diverse group of characters. An amazing story line. Could not stop until i was at the end. Murder, mystery, physic abilities.(the string. ... unique idea) love.. babies and happiness... all without even one sex scene. So refreshing. Loved the ending. No loose ends. Thank you for sharing. A must read. I am very pleased with the outcome.. still smiling.

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Well Done

This story kept you on edge from the start. There were a few errors here and there but over all it was a lovely story with a bit of a twist. There are lots of unanswered questions but that simply leaves an opening for the next story.
Personally, I think that she fell to quickly in love and accepted the wolves with out to much resistance. I am not saying that the story isn't good but more details would help. Also, I think he needed to convince her to give them a chance instead of her just accepting things as they were.
Her healing quickly was never explained. It was a good opening to making her a wolf as well but the author never went there. Only that she had always healed quickly leaving the reader wondering if there was a reason for her ability.

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Intriguing

The story definitely keeps you on edge as to what is going to happen next. It hurts to see Aria going through so much in such a short time. Both of her love interest Jakko and Dastan can be both good and bad characters which makes it difficult to decide which one she should be with. I am not impressed with her parents even though they claim to care for Aria they have done nothing to get close to her.

Please clarify as to why they sent her away in the first place, and why they hate Dastan so much as well as to why Jakko was chosen in the first place to be her husband. Explain why Dastan is an outcast and what really happened to his face. The story is well written with only a few minor errors. The story moved fluently and made perfect sense as it keeps you on edge wondering what terrible thing is going to happen to Aria next. Hoping a second book will explain Dastan and Jakko and the parents sending her away and what happens to her from now. Will she stay with Jakko or find a way home to Dastan? Will she be able to speak again? Will we ever know why she was sent away in the first place? Impatiently awaiting an update.

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