Cayla Watts

Writer of funny, steamy, romance/chicklit stories with relatable and flawed characters that'll sometimes drive you crazy😉 IG cay_cay27 Wattpad CaY--cAy

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A MUST READ!!!!!!

This book has made me laugh, cry, get angry, sad, scream at my phone and love every damn character except one for obvious reasons but you'll need to read the book to find out. I absolutely loved everything about this hot, steamy mafia romance that draws you in from chapter 1. Martina is a whirlwind of a character that's filled with the world of confidence. I enjoyed every aspect and I didn't want to stop reading this page turner that draws you in with complex characters.

It may be a mafia story but the amazing Natalia doesn't make it her characters entire personalities. There's more to depth to them like any real person and I love, love, love Martina! She would do anything to protect the people she loves! She's a complete, ruthless badass, but SHE'S AMAZING!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story to a point I delayed reading the last two chapters because I didn't want it to end. Natalia's writing style is unique and I loved how she hinted at certain things that you need to pay careful attention to, if you don't you might just miss it. The character development is out of this world and I enjoyed getting to see Martina and Alessio grow. Alessio learned how to love Martina the way she deserved to be loved and in return Martina managed to open her heart in ways I never thought possible.

Natalia approached a very sensitive topic with such care and respect and showed Martina's inner turmoil meticulously and her thought process that ultimately led her to some tough decisions she needed to make. Some themes in this book isn't for everyone and some may disagree with it but that's the beauty of literature. Not everyone will agree but I commend Natalia for breaching this subject and writing about it. I've got mad love and respect for how she approached it and it isn't a easy topic to write about considering the controversy that comes with it but like I said, she skillfully, respectfully and carefully added it to her story.
Alessio, sweet, sweet Alessio. He's one of the sweetest men I've read in a Mafia book but don't let that fool you, he has his moments with his hilarious witty comebacks, absolute hotness, and charming personality that can charm more than your socks off.
All in all, it was one hell of an amazing read and I highly recommend YOU READ IT.
Natalia Ava is an amazing writer that brings life to her characters in such a great way that draws you in, hooks you, makes you love and hate them all at once.
I can't wait for her next adventure cause I'm hopping on and I'm never getting off❤️
Lots of love
Cayla❤️

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AMAZING MUST READ!

I don't even know where to begin when it comes to this review. It's been such an amazing journey and read. I've never read a story like this one before but this makes me want to read more stories just like this one. Saying that, I know I won't find another story like this one. It's unique, diverse, and filled with love. The author has done an amazing job thrusting me into the world of Dalia and Waleed. I've enjoyed every moment learning and expanding my knowledge on a different culture and religion and I've loved every moment. I absolutely loved this story but again, I thoroughly love every story I've read by Natalia.

From the get go, I've loved Dalia. She's relatable, sweet, funny, lovable but also an independent badass. Her personality shines through in many different shades, negative and positive, and she's complex with real life emotions which were portrayed beautifully by the author. Dalia's character feels real.
Waleed on the other hand, I love and hate him for different reasons. Like any real person, he has toxic traits and some of them I dislike. I won't mention which parts in my review as to not spoil any detail about the plot for other readers. The good far outweighs the bad when it comes to Waleed though. He's charming, charismatic, dominating, sexy, sweet, and absolutely perfect for Dalia. They balance each other out perfectly.

The chemistry between these two characters is off the charts. It can be felt through my screen from their very first encounter. Something instantly clicks between them and the chemistry only intensifies the more they get to know each other. The bond they develop and share is literally one for the books lol.

I would have loved to see more moments between Dalia and Jamie. A budding friendship began to bloom and I would've loved to see them becoming the best of friends.

There's absolutely nothing I would change about this story but I do wish I could change the relationship between Dalia and her mom. It saddens me so that her mother is the way she is but it's part of the story and it adds to Dalia's character and who she is. It really was a whirlwind of a read and a beautiful love story.

10/10 recommend!!!!!!!

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A must READ unique story

I love the uniqueness to this story. I haven't read anything quite like it yet. It's relatable and realistic. The story focuses around Cami helping people practice safe sex, divulging in their fantasies without getting hurt like she did. Through her helping people, she healed from her past, learning to trust again. The plot twists were thrilling and intriguing. I didn't see it coming. The erotic scenes were🔥 Overall, it truly is an amazing story that keeps you on the edge of your seat. I couldn't stop thinking about this story.
I would've loved to see more of Alex and discover more about him and P.
There are quite a few typos throughout the story that can easily be fixed.
But again, I can't say this enough. It was an amazing story I wouldn't mind rereading and I would definitely recommend it.

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Amazing Plot!

I'm going to get straight to it. It's hard to read at some points. Some sentences are incomplete and hard to read. The grammar could be better and for me, it interrupts the flow.

I do however, love the plot. It's unique and something I haven't come across before. The characters are relatable. The entirety of the story is amazing. Proper editing and fixing those incomplete sentences, and fixing grammar could turn any rating into a 5-star rating.

The author managed to capture my attention with one line in chapter 1 and I don't regret reading this story.
Never stop writing and creating such a unique world for us to get lost in.

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Amazing start

You've captured the downfalls of friendships perfectly when it comes to bestfriends to lovers. The awkwardness involved and surrounding the friends can be felt. I enjoyed your writing and style of writing. The story overall is enjoyable.
It does get hard to read at some stages due to grammar and incorrect spelling but it isn't a train smash. Some words and letters are swapped around instead of saying in the author will put on. Though as thought, but you can easily overlook it and enjoy this one-shot.
The author has done a really good job telling this story.

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Hot, steamy, romance, page-turner

I absolutely loved this story from the very first chapter. It's an amazing page turner that you can't put down. I didn't want to stop. It's got all the elements that make up a steamy, whirlwind book that hooks and intrigues. I love how relatable Cadence is and how the author managed to expertly place serious, real life situations into the story with great respect. The author's writing style is superb and I highly recommend giving this book a read.

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