Enjoyed most thoroughly!
Towards the end I felt like character developments didn't go as deeply as it could. The investigator seems to let the sexy cougar off the hook too quickly without looking at her as a suspect. His tendency to feel sorry for people or think of them as victims just because they had not been directly involved in the crimes seems out of character for a police detective. I love the premise of the supernatural and felt like there could have been a reappearance somewhere at the end. I also feel like a little more time might have been spent building the relationship between the detective and Kelly. I guess the end just felt a bit rushed and threw out there were some issues with verb tense and the occasional missed word or added word where there shouldn't be. Overall a very good read. I enjoyed it thoroughly!!
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