Chantal Groenewald

Port Elizabeth

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Well done

Initially the story is very sad and one can feel the child's pain. I like the detail in how every situation is described to form a complete picture from the beginning. It ends up to be a cute story so far and I would like to see how the story and the characters evolve. Well done author, keep it up.

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Incredible!!

The story pulled me in from the first line. I couldn't stop reading!! One of the best books I have read by far!!

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Unfinished story?

The story starts off with intrigue and mystery but quickly fizzles out. Apart from grammatical errors I feel that the story has great potential! Dear writer, please elaborate on the chapters as there are so many questions hanging in the air. I will definately re-read the story when it has been completed. 💜

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Exciting

The story drew me in right from the start and kept my attention all the way through. One can easily overlook all the spelling mistakes with such a great story. Well done author.

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