Charlotte Brown

Overall Rating
Writing Style
Grammar & Punctuation

A Great Start

The plot is very intriguing and I am curious as to where this is going. There is some real creativity here and the writing style is fairly advanced. A lot of detail to go off as well. Readers do well with a good hook and bite-sized chunks; they're more likely to consume more multiple small chapters as opposed to really long ones.

Only a few minor spelling and punctuation errors. I recommend a Grammarly extension! Helps loads with finding all the little, overlooked mistakes :)

Wonderful job so far!

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