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Hello..sir

The story kind of takes off at a fast pace, try and slow down a bit. Some people might not know a lot about your theme, give them time to chew on things. I like Rey, even though Im not a huge fan of Daddy/Little kink/lifestyle. But I do like erotica and BDSM. I think you’ll do good, you’ve got a good theme/story, keep writing and following your dream. I’m also a first time writer, and it’s damn exiting. My mind tends to go in over drive, I’m not anywhere near finished and already have ideas for two more books. I think somehow your mind might be in overdrive as well, take your time. The words will come to you. Good luck. Will follow you.

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When it will Rayne, it will pour

This was one of the best books I’ve read. Would’ve liked more storyline on Ash and Damian, what eventually happened to them, would’ve liked Rayne to take out Ash. Would’ve liked the wedding to take place and what did Gauge go and do, a bit mysterious... But overall a very good story, finally a strong female character with back bone...

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