Chase

Hey everyone! I'm a stay at home mom and I read short stories across every app there is. I'm not a phenomenal writer but I find it very soothing. Hope you guys enjoy!

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Funny and erotic

I'm enjoying this novel. It's pretty funny in some spots and very sexual. Keep the chapters coming 😁

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Good story!

The story is entertaining and funny in some parts! It's what captured my interest. The only thing I would caution the writer about is the language they initially spoke. In the last chapter she changed alot of words from "ye" to "your". Basically they went from speaking what seemed Irish to plain ole English. I like the characters better when they spoke in their barbaric ways lol

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A MUSTTTTT READ!

Omh this was a good read! I mean dammmmm.......I dont even know what to say......sighhhhhhhhhh yup I like this freedom writer.....my heart lol I felt all of this!

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Hummmm.....

So many grammatical errors. The story has potential. I was trying to figure out if Odysseus was of the recent century or medieval because the way he spoke was of modern times. Idk. This book needs to be polished up a bit. It was scenes in the story that were unbelievable like meeting her biological father. Anyways....its alright considering

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Can't wait to see where it goes

Very interesting story. Ares is cruel but you see moments where his soft side tries to come thru for Skylar. I'm curious to see how he falls madly in love with her because right now.....he is just mean. The vampires are a new touch. Im eager to see they're role too. Maybe their introduction will help Ares move closer to accepting Skylar. He hasn't rejected her so somewhere in his head, he wants her. PATIENTLY WAITING FOR UPDATE!!! LOL

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Pretty cool story

Nice story. Funny on some parts. Few Grammer errors but nothing hard to to figure out.

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