This review is for the Prologue only.
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Good writing style. You definitely have talent. I was drawn in your story of humanoid dragons. You gave great detail in their descriptions. I wonder how they would look like in a movie. Very interesting, I’d imagine.
I also enjoyed your descriptions about the floating rock island. In fact I liked it so much I wish you have written more about it, the way you did with the dragons. For example do rocks ever crumble off it and fall into the sea? (How picturesque, though I suppose it would also be dangerous to those on the sea or ground) Is there a strong sense of magic there? A feeling that can encourage fear and maybe excitement at the same time? Is it a scary place? A welcoming place? See what I mean? I crave more details about your fascinating island.
Also, I noticed you call your dragonoids, ‘dragons’. The only problem with that is that I would often get confused. Each time I read the word ‘dragon’ my brain immediately shifts to the big lizard non-talking kind. Not the very unique type of creatures you’ve created for your story. Maybe you could call them dragonoids or something else unique. This is just my opinion. Other readers may not have the same identifying problems I had.
Grammar was very good. I couldn’t find any errors. That’s often not the case on Inkitt, so kudos to you.
Overall good story. Well written. Keep up the good work.