Chloe Brodkin

Calgary, Alberta

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The New Start

I love the connection between these two lovers. It shows the power struggle that they have undergone in The New Start. How they both accept each other even though society fights against them. I love the photography element and how she keeps the photos. I love how they grow together. I put the part in that it would be their last forever chance because that made it more suspenseful and they can rebuild their life and finally live together in peace. This is one of my best works.

Author: Chloe Brodkin

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Black Alice

This is a very intriguing story about Kate in wonderland. It makes me curious, I think Kate might be Alice's sister. She somehow sleeps away her life in wonderland, dreaming, and wakes up an old woman. The doctor says she doesn't have much time so she must be hurt of suffering from a disease.

Thanks for the great read

Chloe

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Are you Alice

I like how this story uses poetry and plot at the same time. It incorporates all the elements of wonderland in a simple poem. It keeps us in suspense when it says the story's not over and it makes us wonder what the next chapter will be. Is this meant to be horror? My parody of Alice in Wonderland is Alice's Tragic World about children going to military school and focuses on mental illnesses, anxiety, and abuse.

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"Catalyst Moon: Incursion"

We all took the same oath. That's what I get for speaking my mind. I enjoy those parts in Chapter 1. Honour, service, sacrifice. I enjoy your use of the word snickered in that sentence. Stonewall is a strange name, what made you choose it? There could be another word instead of idiots and boring. There is no perfect synonym but one that has more image displayed.

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