Chloe K

Tasmania

Hey! I am new to writing stories that others read so, please feel free to leave a review or even some comments or feedback! :) happy reading! :)

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I Like it!

I love how you have been descriptive right at the start of your story, you have created a decent first chapter, I definitely want to read more!
You started it strong and ended the chapter strong!
look forward to seeing how this goes :)

Would love it if you could check out my stories and see what you think also :)

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Interesting

I really like how you have started your story, I will admit I did get confused through out the Chapter as it was so mixed with speech I had no idea who was actually talking especially the last part, I had to read it a few time for it to make sense, and I hope I am right that 'Will' is her friend?
I feel like you have a good start and will end up being a great read as you get more chapters out, I am adding it to my library so I can continue to read and see where this goes! :)
Nice work!

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Absolutely Amazing

I'm actually so in love with this book I can't wait for more chapters!
It's so well written, a couple Gramma errors but easy fixes.
You have literally mind blown me with each chapter leaving me hanging for more.
Great job!

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LOVE IT!!

This is such a great start!
The intro made me want to keep reading more, I can actually picture in my head what I think might happen in this story as it could go so many ways!
It is so great how you have started this, especially when it is an unusual start, with them having a child out of being fated mates!
I love the name of the name Pearl as well!
You have a great plot line by what you have started I can not wait to read more!
Great Job!

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WORTH THE READ!

Wow!
So descriptive! I love it!
The way you just went all in from the start to now! Wow!
I am so hooked right now I honestly can not wait to read more!
Great job in keeping me wanting more!! 😊

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Amazing

Wow, this is intense!
The frist chapter drags you in like you are actually there, I had to continue reading each chapters!
Your descriptions are great they give you a complete feel of everything your telling.
Your story line is so capturing as well, you have done a great job so far I can't wait to see how this ends up!

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Interesting :)

I like what you have written so far, I would love to see where this goes, my mind has started giving me theory's of how this will plan out.
It's given me an intenseness to know more of what is to happen!
Looking forward to when you add more 🙂

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