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Gripping read

This is a story that will grab you right from the start! Very detailed and exciting to read.. I can not wait to read the rest of it. I would change the lay out a bit and make paragraphs instead of separating them so much and work a bit on punctuation but there again this is a first draft so all that can come later!! Great Job!

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