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Paranoia

The first chapter was quite simple and it really impacted the following chapter(in a positive way of course). The back story was definitely a great idea and the words of regret and ignorance in the first chapter were another good idea. The descriptions of both terrors, setting and feelings of the protagonist are well written. Spine-chilling story, to say the least!!!

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Stepbrothers

The plot is definitely interesting. There are some errors in grammar and quite a few words are missing in some sentences. These can all be fixed as the story progresses. This review was written with only 2 chapters up and I hope the following chapters will be great.

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Amazing!!!

This book is just something else. The descriptions and wording are brilliant. The story pulls the reader in and is just so mysterious. The information was quite a lot but I understand why because I don't think that the story would still be the same without it. The thrill is amazing and I really enjoyed reading the story. Book 2?

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Bound to live

Lovely story. Rose is a really relatable protagonist and Alec is unique, mysterious and confident maybe a little too much. Rose seems to have PTSD and I love how Alec handled it when she had a panic attack. There are quite a few errors in grammar and sentence construction, mostly in chapter one where Rose's name is written as rose instead of starting with a capital R, the use of does where do is needed and 'I and my Mum' instead of 'my mum and I'. Hope these errors can be fixed as the story progresses. I am, however, glad that the errors don't disrupt the plot and can be fixed easily. Overall, I love your wording and descriptions. Great job!!!!

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Mysterious!!

From the first line to the last, the chapter's language contained sort of a formal tone, which I liked. The language and descriptions are on point and the way the writing is structured to give an aura of mystery truelly evokes a sense of curiosity. The flow is perfect and the chapter as a whole is perfectly paragraphed. I am intrigued by Luna's brother and the story of his demise, I hope there will be a chapter that narrates the ordeal. I can't wait to follow this story to the end because I am a lover of mystery and thriller. This book is, according to me, a must read.

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Sunset Scar!

I really love this story. It's really unique and it's something new. I love descriptions and characters' personalities, especially Lukas' wolf. I also likes Thanatos and Natures' story, it was quite heartwarming and their separation and forbidden love was really sad. There are a few errors in grammar but I don't blame the author, I just suggest that they revise their chapters whenever they can. A very good read.

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Imperfectly Beautiful

This story is simply beautiful. It was quite saddening and emotion provoking when she looked down on herself or when that disrespectful man disregarded her feelings and ambitions. Glad she got out of that situation is way more free now. I hope there won't be any problems caused by her mom in regards to her and JJ's developing relationship but we'll just have to wait and see. I saw very little errors in grammar and overall, the story is a great read. I will definitely stick around to see what happens next. Amazing work!!!

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A Love That Was Never Meant to Be

I really enjoyed reading the story. It has fairly short and interesting chapters, a feature that I particularly loved. The book's main character is quite unique and the sacrifices made are just truly unbelievable. The crazy twists are certainly well executed and surprising. The ending was quite unexpected and I never would've guessed that that's how the whole story would end. I'm glad that previous chapters did not hint on anything that would happen in the end, which is why the story was a joy to read. There are quite a few errors in grammar and structure, which can easily be edited as time goes on, but I'm glad that they do not completely obscure the overall plot of the story and are quite easy to understand. This book is definitely different from most books that I've read, which is a great quality for people looking for 'outside the box' story lines. Great read!!!

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