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Becoming Sophia

A coming of age story about a girl named Sophia, trying ro find her place in the world.
Good story, however the writing needs a bit of work to remove the stiffness: grammar, use of work and most importantly, sentence structure.
Good job on the story.

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Want more...

I'm a fan of the drama K2, and I was very eager to read this story, to see what the author would do with the characters. I will say it was a good story, following along the lines of the original plot. But, it felt translated.
There was this separation,almost like a wall that wouldn't let me completely engage with the story, to sink into it. I think maybe it's because the author couldn't make the story completely her own because it's fanfic.
But good story. Well done.

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I would change one thing...

The story was interesting and well written but I would be lying if I said I wasn't tempted to stop reading a few times in the beginning.
The first few chapters were just too over sexualized considering the setting. The attraction she felt should have been more subtle considering her brother was laying on the floor bleeding.
Kayden made me want to punch him in the face a few times too.
Overall, a good read.

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Okay read but needs work

The story has merit but the writing is too mechanical. There's a lot of 'telling' and not 'showing', it makes the book hard to read.
A good editor would take this story to the next level.

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Good plot, writing needs some work

The book had a good plot but a bit lacking. It lacked the emotion and the writing wasn't well done. Needs a good editor.

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Lobed it

I loved this book. It was so good and easy to read. It just flowed, kept my attention from beginning to end.

Is there a part 2?

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Too much going on

Too much going on. Focus. The dtory is eveywhere.

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Great build up

I liked the suspenseful build up of the book. The writing could use some work but good job.

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Another great one

Nice read. Looking forward to more

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Movie please!

Besides the wrong word use in some chapters, this was a great book that would make a great movie. Definitely looking forward to more books by this author.

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Would be better with an editor

The story was good and I have a feeling that it's linked to more of her books, but it's sad, the writing style and technique just wasn't up to par. I couldn't finish the book as interesting as the story seemed.
Please find an editor or beta reader to help coz i would really love to read your stories. Goodreads is a great source for free services.

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Good read

I enjoyed it but it annoyed me how she punished her mate for their parents sins. There was no compromise, she wanted life her way and he had no choice but to accept it. I get all her trauma and all that, but half the time, she wasn't very likeable.

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Loved it

I loved this book. I'll be reading the entire series.

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Wonderful read!

I enjoyed this story immensely! Will be ready the entire series

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Nice and easy read

This was a nice and easy read. The story flowed well but there was a part where it seemed the author had put a note to add content and forgot to read it. As for the technique it flowed well with barely noticeable mistakes but towards the ending the grammar, tenses and word use were like speed bumps.
Either way, I'll be reading the rest of the story.

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