Cierra

Always room for improvement but still amazing

I think there is always room for improvement such as grammar and such and the shaping of the tale end of the story but it was amazing all in all thank you for your work

Loved it up to the end

Alight I absolutely loved it. I enjoyed the style of writing and the way that he was slowly conditioning her. Even the twist that her sister was IN ON IT???!!!! BUT I have to say the last chapter was a let down. The way she back talked him, not making her eat from her bowls on the floor, agreeing to take the nipple rings off when i just put them there against her will. Yea I didn’t like that part. I would have loved to have seen him to continue in the way he was treating her. Punishment for her outburst, he could have fed her by hand if not by bowls that is is still degrading. I am hoping that is isn’t the end of it, or that maybe there is a sequel in the works. I hope that my constructive criticism is well received becauseI really truly enjoyed it.