Cindy Castle

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good story

This was a different and very interesting storyline. sad about the little boy, I hate his mother and she was a crazy lady for sure.

I was really mad when his wife walked up to them in the restaurant. I thought oh boy another cheater, then we find out he loved Kara then I realized maybe he is a good guy after all.

The plot was scary, leading up to what was going to happen, I couldn't imagine being in that dark space not knowing what was up a head in the dark. then when the child touched her, oooh shivers lol.

All and all I felt it was a good story, I am kinda disappointed it ended without knowing if the couple lived happily ever after, but it ended on a sweet note after all so I did enjoy it...

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