scorpio/libra cusp. twelve years old.

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Creepy in a good way

I don't know what you were aiming for, but this is really good. Especially the suspense. It comes out slowly and I was creeped out but in a good way. I liked it, I really do, and it had an interesting plot/style and everything. It was very well organized, and the part about the single eye was especially scary. The last sentence is mesmerizing, too. I hope you write more like this!

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