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Stitch well done
Well done; a few things that could be improved upon; like you wouldn't relocate a dislocated shoulder ;) Put back into place; pop it back into place etc. That's really the only bit that really stood out to me that was largely wrong.
You weave a nice tale that draws the reader in. You capture the time and place of where your story takes place. Predictable twist with the master; but still well done.
Would be interesting to see more of this character.
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