Clemence Smith

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It really catches you from the beginning :)

I really liked this writing style! I really felt the voice of the narrator come through, and I think you did a good job elaborating who she is and her character without it seeming preachy. The one thing I would be careful for, is that there are tons of shifts in tense that don't sound very logical, and as well, many times the wrong word or conjugation is used. It just needs a good read through and edit, and that doesn't take away from the overall flow of the story, so I still think it's done really well!

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