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I sleep so I can see You (Chapter 1)
The flow of the story is good and interesting. There was one point in the chapter where the main character, Jeremiah, grieved his relationship with Nicole at one point. We also see the relationship from Nicole's point of view. We see the characters feel safe in the relationship, even if it's potentially unhealthy on Nicole's side of the relationship.
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