cndelo

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

Hey guys! I'm Lo. My WIP story, Spin, is a psychological thriller/coming-of-age romance rolled into one! Read it on Wattpad!

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I loved all of the movement the poem conveyed. To me, the lovers were in a constant push and pull battle of love, hate, worship, consumption. The imagery was beautiful. I loved the part where you said 'one silhouette gives way to two'. It felt filled with immense pleasure and immense pain at the same time. I don't know much about poetry so I can't comment on the technical side. Very intriguing poem, and full of movement. The poem in itself was a dance.

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