Experimented Heart

Writing in fantasy genre specifically Medieval theme. My inspiration comes from the tudors era. Check out my book and add to your reading list as I will be posting every Wednesday! Stay tuned!

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Intense!

I love the story, can’t wait for you to continue. The descriptiveness adds an amazing eerie feel to it that I’m dying over!

My only man tip to offer is your story could really benefit from reading out loud before posting. I found myself re reading or filling in where words should be. It’s a good habit because your mind fills in the blanks when your that invested in your book.

Many writers would kill to have your writing talents, most novels never give me a true atmospheric feel as I read.

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WOW!

This story literally had me clued to the end. Even when there was no "cliffhanger" my mind was screaming at me do discover move about these characters. The pace is excellent as character development grows and you become attached to the vulnerabilities of characters who appear invisible. The plot eases you in with mystery and question. A need to read story!

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Has character

Honestly the first chapter is a bit overwhelming. It takes a bit to process all of the fast information, Maybe slowing the pace down in the beginning with detail. But seriously once you get passed the first chapter its perfect! Amazing pace and at first I didn't think I would fall for Magnus then BAM Ezra comes in and there is come depth and dynamic! both characters I can almost visualize. As for shamgore I seem to have a hard time picturing him... at first that bothered me and then when I learned about him a little I kind of really liked that he was difficult to picture, it added a true element to the story in real life for me. Very interesting though, the plot and characters have me hooked.

For anyone who sees this review, if you struggle with the first chapter please keep reading, it will be worth it. Very unique in my opinion!

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Catchy and Dark

Read the first chapter, never been one for stories about siblings but this story has a realistic dynamic between the siblings. A few comments made had me chuckling about the fact that I can totally relate to behaving in similar ways. I had some sorrow music playing in the background and it just gave an intensity to the eerie descriptiveness of this chapter. I'm definitely adding this to my reading list and finding time to finish it!

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