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So far this is really good! I can't wait to read more, but more importantly, I really hate her father, he has no respect for her opinions or decisions in her own life, and it is just so frustrating.

Hopefully she will get to marry Andrew and finally be happy, and her father won't stop her from doing what she loves or marrying whomever she loves (severely hoping it's gonna be Andrew, and not gonna get super complicated later) but other than her father being a total douchebag, this is an amazing book, and I can't wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜

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This is good, but Marley's family makes me so p-ed off. ๐Ÿคฌ

Marley shouldn't have to endure her OWN FAMILY calling her names and crap like that, telling her to go kill herself. When Valarie said that I actually yelled out (pretty close to, minus a couple curse words of course, and also, mind you it is like 2:00 in the morning, so yeah, probably woke someone up, lol) "b**** what the h*** do you think you f***ing saying?! She your f***ing sister for crying out loud, what the h*** is wrong with you to want to do that to YOUR OWN F***ING SISTER?!?!!" I thought worse than that as well, especially after when her aunt and grandmother left, and she got beat with a cord. But that's not the point, the point is, no one should be treated like that, and it seriously p-ed me off when Valarie started talking crap like that. ๐Ÿคฌ

Ok, rant over. Besides that, which I guess you are supposed to feel when reading the story (like feel the main characters emotions, as well as the others, and of course your own about the situation.) But because you do feel that, it's what makes this a great story, Andi can't wait to read what happens next, because I'm really really hoping, that we get to 'see' Valarie (and her parents of course) get b**** slapped by karma, and well, actually just b**** slapped lol.๐Ÿ˜‚

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I'm loving this book so far! I can't wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I'm kinda disappointed in Blayze and how he didn't trust Astrid to not betray him, I mean, wow can you not just jump to conclusions? And because of him doing that, she lost the baby, and Blayze is off the tracks, and Astrid is going to kill Tim Parker, but she'll never be the same, the image of killing someone will always stick with her, whether she wants it to or not. Blayze is looking for Astrid, and Astrid is going through a master plan to not only get her revenge, but to get back to Blayze, I just hope everything goes well. Everything became extremely complicated the moment, and I mean the very moment that Rex accepted Tim's offer and joined him, because Astrid was alone, and then dragged j to the crap that Rex had specifically tried to keep her out of by joining Tim, so yeah, hoping that they can all finally be happy, and be a somewhat normal and happy family. I love this book, and I can't wait to read more, and find out what happens next between the plan, and then not to mention Blayze and Astrid's relationship.

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I am loving this so far! I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

I am really hoping that Ezra and Zander can be together, and that Mark and his son Alex, will be gone for good, and out of their lives. ๐Ÿ˜ It would be amazing if Ezra and Zander can be a family, and have know dad together. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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I love this so far! I can't wait to read more!

Why do I have a feeling that there other two ''trainee's'' aren't actually trainee's, but are already agents, and are doing a secret mission thing, I don't know, because she said she saw concern flash through Josh's eyes, when she was asking about how they are that good, so, honestly I think they are already in some sort of agency, but are lying so they can get close to some of the people were Madelyn is. Or it's all to train her, so she does what they want. These are just weird half thought out theories, but whatever. I live this book, and I can't wait to read more, and find out Drew's past, and I also have a stinking suspicion, that Drew is dating Joan, but that would most definitely suck, for Madelyn.

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This is amazing, and I can't wait to read more!

Loving this so far! I can't wait to see what the boys and Harper are all mixed up in, should be funny, because I have a feeling that whoever those men were, are going o threaten her friends and she is going to do that creepy mad thing, and freak them out, while also kicking the absolute crap outta them. Can't wait to read more, and I love it so far. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more!

At first this was sooo confusing, parts still are, but I am sure it will stop being as confusing as the story goes on, this is absolutely amazing, and I can't wait to find out what the plan is for Mika and her mates. Crap! That has to be so confusing! Having three mates!!! Oof, that can't be easy, and Mika has like zero emotions, so if she's teasing showing affection or anything, how will they know? Hmmm, I feel kinda bad for the boys.

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This is amazing! Amazing I can't wait to see what happens next, and did am so happy, really really happy, that her and Landon are having a kid together, they will be parents!

I can't wait to see if the baby's a girl or boy, I love this so so much! It's amazing, and I am so happy that her and Landon can be happy together, they are going to be happy happy PARENTS! Yah!! OK but seriously I love this, it is really good.

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This is amazing!! I can't wait to read more!

I love this and I can't wait to read more, I am also very curious to see what happens between Noah and Sarah, can't wait to read more it's so good!

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I love this book! I can't wait to read more!!๐Ÿ˜†

I'm wondering when she's going to tell Harrison that she can see and talk to her sister Nora, but I really really hope, that he doesn't call her crazy. And that she isn't crazy, because that would just suck if she was. But either way I love this book, and I can't wait to see what happens.

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I just gotta say this now. Colin. Is. An. Idiot. He needs to MAN UP, and tell Alexia how he feels about her. I love the story so far though.๐Ÿ˜†

I haven't finished reading it all the way yet, but I can tell you this, Colin surely is either really stupid, or just really really confused. But nice love this story a lot.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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This is so, so good! Please update it soon!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I love this, it is really good, I love her sass, and that she takes no sh** from anyone.๐Ÿ˜† I love this a lot though, it is really amazing. Can't wait to read more, update soon please!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is extremely good, Jace better not hurt Sabine, and I mean it, I will be severely p-ed off if he messes up and hurts her.

This is good though, so I am not going to complain, but I do wanna know, is there a second one? I saw something that sounded a lot like this title, and I haven't finished reading this yet so I don't know how it ends.

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I love this story so much! Much I know the comment down below is long, sorry, I had a lot to say. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

I love this story and I can't wait to read more! I hope Abby and Xavier mate soon, and I hope we find out what happened to elijah, I also wanna know is he a vampire? I have like 0 doubt that he is indeed a vampire but, crap, he is her protector! Why isn't he there, near by, trying to protect her? Also I really hope that Abby's mom wasn't planning on just leaving her father alone while also efficiently taking Abby away as well, because if Abby has to take care of her mom, she won't leave her mom alone unprotected, and will be stuck wherever Abby's mom tells Abby to go. I also hope the baby (Abby's little brother or sister) survives the crash and whatever is about to happen, cause I know some crap is about to go down. OK I super can't wait to read more, this is so interesting, and yes I have a question are Xavier's eyes blue or brown I thought they were blue but it said brown once or twice and I was wondering if it was just a mix up or some of the changes you said your working on. Sorry if it is annoying but I just like having a visual of the characters sorry. Either way I love the story soo much! Really truly can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Shuab better fix this with Shalifa real frickin' quick cause she doesn't deserve to get treated that way.

I love the book by the way it is very amazing, but Shuab better fix stuff with Shalifa, and soon. I can't wait to read more it's soo good!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

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Rider better find her soon and save her along with chase.

Rider better find Fawn and Chase then save them, while successfully getting rid of the stalker. Wondering how the state
kernel even knew about her hmm, wonder if we will find out about how he saw or met her and became obsessed with her and starting stalking her, hmmmm. Would be cool side chapter if not already a chapter.

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I hope prince Balan and Sora can trust each other and notice their feelings towards each other cause they are obviously there.

Really hoping they see the other halves of each other and start to realize their feelings cause their was obviously something there.

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I love this! I can't wait to read more! Aurora and Breaker are a perfect match! โค๏ธ

Can't wait to find out about Breakers past, and see Aurora and his relationship progress ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Oh my goodness... Legit fricking crying, because she keeps going through all this difficult crappy stuff, and it's not ok ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Why can't Eli just see that no matter if he leaves her or not, SHE'S GONNA GET HURT ANYWAY! I hope that something happens where all this screwed up crap is fixed, and she can finally be happy again, with the people she loves, and that love her back.

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This is extremely good! Can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

The story is a bit confusing (the story line itself, and what's happening I mean) other than it being slightly confusing, it's pretty good so far. I just for to the end of a chapter, and the last words were "someone's stabbed the alpha, Einer is hurt" all I can think is "Oh my gersh, what's gonna happen now!" And a while bunch of other questions relating to what'll happen, lol. Overall this is a great book, and I can't wait to read more and see what happens next ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon

I'm about to read chapter 13 but after that, there aren't anymore, but so far, I'm really loving this. I have read Lydia's song, and Cruel Max already, and I thought that, cause I liked your (the author) other books so much, I would probably enjoy this one too. I wasn't disappointed, and I love it, just wondering when you (the author) might be updating this again?

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next with the rouge's ๐Ÿ˜

Hopefully Lydia and Colt will be able to get rid of the rouge's trying to uproot their life and be a happy family together with their unborn twins and adopted pup. Maybe Colt can accept the adopted pup as one of his own one day, it would be amazing if he could, because that pup has no one, and is gonna need some support for the struggles ahead.

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So far, this is pretty interesting. But I'm only read two chapters, so I don't know what's going to happen next.

I've seen this only had 10 chapters, and I've already read right up until chapter 3 (haven't read chapter 3 yet, but am about to) so far I really like it, and was wondering if you (the author) were going to update more.

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I love this!

I'm so happy things worked out between max and Megan! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Ooohh! Destan all grown up now!! This is gonna be fun ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚

Can't wait to read more and find our more on how Destan finding his mate will be like ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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I love this!! I can't wait to read more! I am really looking forward to that stupid crappy law to be gone, it's not right that they are telling them they can't mate with certain wolves, I mean, WHO CARES THAT THEY ARE A LITTLE SMALLER?!

The only differences there are, which I don't even see as differences is, that the runts are smaller and have a smaller lifespan unless mated. I mean, Mira was on the edge of death, and was saved because she was marked, what other proof do you need, that things can be changed?!? And that you don't have to let the runts die, they aren't even runts, seriously, they are just a smaller, and honestly, that's not that bad, being smaller has its disadvantages and advantages, but so does being bigger. So there should be absolutely NO ISSUES WHAT-SO-EVER about runts mating to other wolves.

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This is really good! Can't wait to read more!

This is amazing, it's a really amazing book so far, and the plot is really cool. Half of the stuff that's happened I wasn't expecting at all, so I can't wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜

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This is amazing! Can't wait to read more!

So far I'm only a little of the ways through Coda's, and so far, I LOVE IT! It's awesome, not only is it funny how the situation is, but it fits perfectly with he other parts of the other books. Like it flawlessly fits together, and it's awesome! Can't wait to read more, please update soon!

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I love this so far! I can't wait to read more!

Hopefully that gang doesn't cause trouble for Vanessa and Marcus, they really don't need anymore crap in their lives right now.

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more, and find out what happens next! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

So far, their relationship,it's going great! Hopefully it will continue that way, but also, I'm liking this new Asa, and Levi, *lowly whistles* well, let's just say, that man, is a beast. Though so far this is really really good, and I can't wait to read more!

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So far, this is amazing. I honestly can't wait to read more, and when reading this, it's like you ARE the character, that's how into it you get and how good it is.

Hopefully she will survive the transition, it be pretty horrible if she didn't. I'm also hoping she can figure out who her mate is, it seemed like at first Charles, but know it's confusing, and might be Damien. I don't know for sure what's going to happen next, but really in honestly, I just can't wait to see what happens with the storyline, it's very complicated, in the sense of what the character feels, but very easy and simple to understand, so you aren't sitting there for however long, deciphering one paragraph of info.

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I love this! I can't wait to read more. ๐Ÿ˜Š

I hope Max and Spring can move forward and away from the past. They deserve to be happier together, and actually be a proper family. Can't wait to read more, and I hope they catch D.S, because he/she is in super stalker mode, and extremely creepy.

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

This is actually really I retesting, and really good. Can't wait to see what happens next. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more!

Now all I can think about is Elizabeth's past, this is really really good, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

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This is really really good, I can't wait to read more!

Honestly, this is just amazing, I don't know what else to say about this other than that. Great job on this, and I can't wait to read more, because it's awesome, and I love it! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โ™ฅ๏ธ

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This is really good,and I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜

This is really interesting, and it's got a good plot, I can't wait to read more and see what happens next! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! Really hoping that Zion and Savannah can actually get along and be happily mated. ๐Ÿ˜

Can't wait to read more! This is actually really really good, and I am looking forward to reading more and seeing how Zion's and Savannah's relationship progresses. Hopefully those two can be together and accept each other. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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I can't wait to read more! This is amazing!

I'm really really happy that Amelia proved her mom wrong, but I am extremely disappointed that she forgot about that letter. I mean, how in the world, do you just forget about a letter addressed to you, for FOUR YEARS, that's weird, unless she was purposely pushing it from her mind until she forgot about it completely. Hm, could have been like that, I didn't think of that, till just now. It definitely makes sense though, why should she have to remember something painful, that'll only distract her further, and stop her from proving her mother wrong? I'm really loving this book so far, and I can't wait to read more, it's really interesting, and it's just amazing. ๐Ÿ˜โ™ฅ๏ธ

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This is a really really good book, I'm hoping Amelia gets saved and things go well between her and Ethan. ๐Ÿ™‚

Hopefully Amelia will be ok, and can make it out of Gabe's clutches before something really terrible happens. Can't wait to read more, and I'm hoping everything pans out and turns out ok in the end.

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So far this is really good! I can't wait to read more and find out what's going to happen next. ๐Ÿ˜

First off, I love this book so far, and I genuinely want to and can't wait, to read more, and find out what happens next. Second, what Prince Elijah did, was unforgivable, he humiliated her, in front of so many people, for just protecting and doing what she thought was right. How she didn't punch him, when he had the audacity to ask her to go somewhere with him, in a way that is usually a friendly and a "nothing's wrong at all" thing, is just ridiculous. If I were her, I wouldn't have trusted him, and would have made him work for that trust to be EARNED back, I mean, come on! HE LITERALLY HAD YOU BEAT, BY A GUARD, BECAUSE YOU DID THE RIGHT THING, IN FRONT OF EVERYONE! AND THEN HAD THE AUDACITY TO ACT LIKE IT DIDN'T EVEN HAPPEN, AND YOUR SUPPOSED TO GO BACK TO NORMAL!! NO! That is most definitely NOT how it works. Oh, and Third, what was up with absolutely NO ONE stepping in, as she was being beaten, for doing something that was right!? NOT OKAY.

Ok, other than those points, in which some characters are being well and truly complete Jack***es, I love everything about this book. Obviously the characters being this way, are that way, for a reason, it falls into the story, and how Cloud feels, to being ashamed of herself, humiliated about the events, to then, having the feeling of complete sorrow, and betrayal from people she thought she could trust, to not put her into that situation. Then, they went ahead, with what they were doing anyways, knowing how she would most likely feel, and that the next actioms they took, were going to burn the bridge that they might have possibly started to form, and there was a possibility, that the bridge, like the saying of extending the olive branch, that bridge was the olive branch, and it would stay burned, and even with this, they did it anyways, and hurt her, knowing what it would do. This is an amazing book, and I can't wait to read more, but I love the detail, emotions, and the overall storyline, it really gives you a sense of what the characters are feeling, and I can't wait to read more. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜Š

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I feel horrible for the way that Ari is being treated.

I'm actually crying right now, because she doesn't deserve this life, no one does. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ญ I really was hoping that she would be able to go away with Max and be happy, or go with James. I haven't finished this yet, bit I'm hoping the end of this, is a happy one. She doesn't deserve to get abused, in fact, no one deserves being abused in any which way or form, it literally makes me so sad, that this is happening to her, it isn't right. Also all I can say is that a have a few choice words I could describe her father with, and non of them are nice, happy, or able to be said out loud right now ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ I'm really hoping that something extremely bad happens to that dad, like really bad. That's probably not something you should hope for, but he deserves so much worse than just dying. He has put Ari through so much ๐Ÿคฌ...*clears throat* Too much stuff, for way to long without any consequences, and it isn't okay, and he needs to pay for what he has done to not only her but the multiple deaths on his hands, of not only friends and neighbors, but also family (countless almost killings with Ari). He seriously needs to be locked up,.and go through 10 times worse, what he put Ari through, he deserves worse than that. That piece of absolute ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ. *Huff's* ok, rant over, you get my point, karma needs to to B**** slap him, and extremely, and I mean extremely, hard. But I mainly feel really sad for Ari,.she doesn't deserve this life, at all. ๐Ÿ˜ข

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This is really really good! I can't wait to read more!

I'm loving this, but I can't believe that after her and Robert shared that kiss, he invited a bunch of girls over, man, you just ruined that whole chance you might have possibly of had with her! I mean you just don't do that, you don't invite a bunch of girls into your suite AFTER YOU JUST KISSED A GIRL, THAT YOU APPARENTLY REALLY LIKE, IF NOT LOVE! Not cool, he really messed up this time. ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜” He's an idiot, he probably just hurt her, so much more, than he ever thought possible... ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜  Actually this really makes me mad, URG! How is it that men can do that to a girl and think it's perfectly frickin fine, but the MOMENT a girl is alone with a guy AS A FRIEND, they get defensive, jealous, and angry?!?! Men are so complicated, it's unbelievable, and I love how they think we are so complicated, Pft, Please! news flash men! Your more complicated than we will ever be! Or maybe both genders are equally complicated to both sides, hm. Weird to think about... Ok whatever, back on topic, I really love this and I can't wait to read more, and I hope that Angela give him heck for what he pulled! Lol can't wait to read that, lol.

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This is really good, and u can't wait to read more!

I think that Alexandria is Sean's mate, but Sean can't tell because of that scent masking spray, and I really can't wait to see what happens next between those two! I mean he keeps thinking to himself, that, he would believe her to be female based on her face, and the rotation of her hips, when she was swaying, but kept saying to himself, that she was a non-shifter, and they are late bloomers, and that her chest was flat, so she couldn't be female, and she's a male, or so Sean thinks. When in all reality, Alex, is a female, and most likely his mate. This is going to be a good book, and I can't wait to read more and find out what happens? ๐Ÿ˜

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This is actually really really good!

I love this so far, it's really interesting, especially the blurb at the begining, I mean you start reading that blurb and it seems like the typical, good girl meets bad boy, and they fall in love, she has perfect life, and he doesn't, she fixes him, and he breaks her. But it's not after you read like the last 3 parts of it, you realize, it's more complicated than you thought, and it gets you hooked. I seriously am hooked, and I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. ๐Ÿ˜

I do however have, with a very strong passion, wish and hopefullness, that Courtney and Riley and Christie's parents totally get what they deserve. Like hard core, karma hitting them right where it hurts, is what I'm hoping for. Probably not the best that I would cheer out loud, if something seriously bad happened to them, but hey, they deserve it, and probably much worse, so whatever. ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

I can't wait to read more, and find out the rest of their story, hopefully it ends well for Kenzie, Toni, Christie, Riley, Gia, and Noah, I mean they deserve some happiness in their lives, not some psychotic, crappy, and self-centered, pieces of crap parents, that try to kill them, and hate their guts, for no reason at all, other than, just because they can. So hopefully it pans out for them, and their parents along with Courtney, gets slapped upside the face, with a huge scoop, of karma. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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I'm really really loving this so far! I can't wait to read more!

I really admire Crystal for being able to go through with so many bad and sensitive moments like that, and I also admire her because even after all of those things that happened, she can still find it in her, to go out, and date Hunter, it's awesome, and u totally ship those two, and Evan and Jeremy as well along with Scarlett and James all are shipped ๐Ÿ˜ (I'm not sure if it mixed the twin's names up with he wrong people, but if so, really wasn't on purpose, they have similar names โ˜บ๏ธ.) But I love this a lot and I can't wait to read more!

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more!

Can't wait to learn Sage's backstory, and read what will happen now. This is really good, and I can't wait to read more. Hopefully in the end, things will be okay for them. But from the little that I know now, I can tell that Sage, one, is very good at what she does, and two, she has an entire plan that probably goes beyond what most of them could even possibly imagine, and it will all most likely happen, just how she planned (at least most of it though, because what's a story without something going differently than what the character planned?) Either way, I'm loving this right now, and I can't wait to read more. ๐Ÿ˜

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This is really really good, I can't wait to read more!

Everything is going so well for Claire, and I hope that she continues to have it going good. I am actually extremely mad about her dad leaving though... It's just not right to leave that way, I mean, he wouldn't have cheated in the first place for starters, and then, on top of that he called.his daughter horrible things, and didn't care what happened to her! Not cool, and another thing, what the heck was her mother thinking?! You don't continue to let someone live with you, and beg them to stay, if they have been continuously cheating on you, and on top of that, got another woman PREGNANT!! Sorry, but her mom's a bit of an idiot, just saying. Either way, j love the story, hope James and Logan are stopped, and I hope that Claire's life will continue to get better, and stay happy for once.

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This is really really good! Ix can't wait to read more!

I love the concept where they all know they have Supernatural backgrounds, it's actually really cool ๐Ÿ˜ and I'm definitely loving the plot so far, I'm hoping that things go well for Sasha, and she doesn't get killed or hurt really bad. Can't wait to read more, and I can say with a very happy mood, I'm extremely glad that I added this to my library, it's amazing! ๐Ÿ˜

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I love this so far and I can't wait to read more! I can't wait to see who this mystery man is, I also can't wait to see who the second unknown number person is. ๐Ÿ˜

Super happy that West and Hope are going to be parents! But I seriously can't wait to find out who unknown texter number one and unknown texter number two are, I mean, who are they? Whom did supposedly meet when she was a kid, that's been keeping track of her throughout the years, and is kinda being a bit stalker-ish?? And who is the second unknown texter, that texted that they were coming for her? Sorry creepy from both, right? Extremely excited to find out what happens next though, I am really loving it, and really, very much so hoping, that both West and Hope make it through this ok, and also including, of course their unborn baby too, but I can't wait to read more, and I'm loving this book so much! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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So far I am loving this story, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

I really can't wait to find out who she falls for, if not both or neither of them, lol. I am seriously loving this so far, it's really interesting, and it's not a super, obvious and often used, story line, I mean who thinks that two different rival gangs, would make a bet about a girl, especially also with the fact that the girl isn't your normal, shy, plain, and small fragile girl, she's a tough fighter. So yeah, really enjoying this so far, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

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So far I am loving this! I can't wait to see if Stephano and Samara fall for each other, and if so, what'll happen. ๐Ÿ˜

Can't wait to read more, and I totally ship Samara and Stephano ๐Ÿ˜.

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I can't wait to see what happens next! I love this, and I really hope Kelly and Marc can be happy, they both deserve it. ๐Ÿ˜

I really want to know who got shot, and what exactly is going to happen, I mean Kelly and Marc have been through way to much, and I really hope they can be happy together. The only thing I have an issue with, is that Marc, he doesn't understand that Kelly didn't willingly get pregnant, and is making her feel like absolute crap about it, I mean, you can't blame her, when she had no choice. Also what's up with him saying he doesn't want to realise another man's child? NEWS FLASH BUDDY! YOU ALREADY DO! AND HER NAME IS DANI! I mean if he can think of Dani as his daughter, when it's actually, it's not it's Leo's and leo also isn't his dad, Raymond is! So he technically is going to have, two kids, that aren't his, but one of them, he won't love, even though it's technically his sister, but he'll love another man's child, UG! He seriously needs to get his priorities straight. Both of those kids are going to have one rough childhood, just saying. I feel horrible for those kids if Marc keeps up with the whole, "I'm not going to love/take care of another man's child!" I really really hope he stays to see things from Kelly's perspective, and stops hating get about it so frickin much. Either way I love this book, and I can't wait to read what happens next. ๐Ÿ˜

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I love this so far! I can't wait to read more, and see where this leads!

I am so frickin happy that Kelly's uncle is dead, you have no idea, I can't wait to see what happens next, I really really, hope that Marc's dad pays for what he did to Kelly, because honestly, anyone who does that to anyone else, just doesn't deserve to be happy, I'm sorry, but they don't, at least if it was of their own free will, and they chose to do that, then no they don't deserve to be happy, unless you are forced to do that to someone, or it was honest to God mistake, and both people understand it, unless that is the situation, you don't deserve happiness, at all. Sorry rant over, I just don't like people who take advantage of others, and it's really sad, and disappointing when you think, people like that, actually exist, and I sucks. Can't wait to see what happens next though, and I live this book. ๐Ÿ˜

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So far I am loving this book a lot. ๐Ÿ˜

I can't wait to read more, and find out more about Lydia's past, I feel horrible for what happened to her, at least the parts I know of, and honestly if she were my daughter, well one, that crap wouldn't of happened, but still, if she were like I just newly adopted her, I would feel so proud of her, I mean come on, she basically went through H-double hockey sticks, and back, that's amazing for her to go through all of that, an did don't even know the full story yet! Either way, I love this book, and I can't wait to read more, and find out more! ๐Ÿ˜

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This is really good so far, I can't wait to read more, and find out more info on their past's! ๐Ÿ˜

I can't wait to figure out why Josh is so scared of fire, I mean, it's not that scary, unless something traumatic happened, involving fire. But I also wanna know, what is up with Lissy's dad? What all did he do, that she wishes that her mom and dad would just get divorced? Really loving the book so far, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

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So what I wasn't expecting for the second book, oh my gosh, ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Really wasn't expecting those two to get together, but you now what, they fit better than when Theo and Winter were together, and that's saying something. I mean she told Hunter things that she didn't even tell Theo, whom of which she says she loves, but if she did, why did she trust Hunter more with things than she did with Theo? I think obviously that Hunter loves her, but doesn't know how to tell her, without making her feel obligated to love him back, so she is either going to realise that she loves him, but not say anything and then Hunter will admit to her that he loves her and then she will tell him how she feels, um at least that's what I'm hoping for because I honestly don't know what other way they would tell each other their feelings for each other.

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So far I'm loving this, and I can't wait to read more, and find out what happens next. ๐Ÿ˜

Really hoping that Winter and Theo can be together happily and that Dimitri will just go away and leave them be, and why do I have a feeling that this Aaron guy is one of Dimitri's men? I mean it wouldn't exactly make sense but it kinda does at the same time. Dimitri is looking for her, and so what better way than to get someone in the inside to get to know her, truck her, and then betray her. Aaron did say he had been gone for a while, so like, what could he have been doing that took that many weeks, I mean it's been what a month since she met him, and she hasn't seen him since meeting u m the first time, so yeah, suspicious much? But either way so far u am loving this, and I can't wait to find out more and read more.

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So far tuis is really good, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜

I really can't wait to learn more about Esmeralda's past, I can't wait to know Brett's as well. I mean what actually happened that she doesn't even know where her own brother is, and how exactly did her parents die? Who did she trust that ruined things? What happened to make her believe that she is the cause of their deaths? So many questions! I can't wait to read more, and find out about both of their past's I'm also wondering, why are Brett's eyes green, but the rest of his brothers eyes are blue, from what I can tell at least. So yeah, can't wait to find be out the answers to my questions, and read what happens next.

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Oh my goodness! Can't wait to read more of this, and I hope that her baby has a better life than she did. ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ

I feel so bad for Angelica because now she is pregnant and the baby is a product of rape, that just sucks, I hope Angelica and Gunner can have a family together and be happy one day, I also hope that Gunner will be able to accept that she is pregnant with what I'm assuming is Cane's baby, mainly because he was the last one to do that to her, and there was no mention of any sort of protection, so yeah. Really hoping she can have a happy and good life after this though, she definitely deserves it.๐Ÿ˜”

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Loving the story so far! Can't wait to read more!

Really hoping that Mari and Hunter can get together, and be a happy family with Gemma and maybe sometime in the future, their own kids together, although Gemma would still be their kid, even though Hunter isn't her dad by blood, he pretty much is her dad. Cant wait to read more, and I hope you make more books, about the others in this MC. ๐Ÿ˜

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Love this so far! Can't wait to read more!

It's kinda sad, that she thinks that she can't ask Tom what it is he is keeping secrets from her. I think the big secret is that he loves her, but doesn't know how to tell her, since they haven't known each other for long. Hoping she doesn't go and mess it up, by talking to Patrick, and trying to find out what he's hiding, without talking to him first. But I love the book so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. ๐Ÿ˜

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Can't wait to read more! I love these books!

Sitka had better be able to be happy, I'm hoping that, eventually Sitka won't be lonely and actually have a mate, and that mate being Winter. Either way love the books, and I'm happy I read them, after this book, I'll be done reading hem, and be probably thoroughly satisfied with the ending, I hope. Can't wait to read more. ๐Ÿ˜

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Can't wait to see when Sabine tells Jace about the baby! And I can't wait to read more! It's absolutely amazing!

Love this so far, and I really really can't wait to read more! It is also a little weird, why exactly are they doing this traveling around thing? Is it to mess with their parents, for leaving all the time after Mercy's death? Or what? I feel bad for Jace because he doesn't know that he's going to be a dad, but I feel extremely happy for the bother of them, because they will be a mother and father soon! Super excited to see what happens next! ๐Ÿ˜

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more!

I can't believe Shane left like that, it's not okay, I mean how would he feel if he was in her position? He would've done the same thing, it's scary admitting your feelings to someone, but it's even scarier admitting your fears and flaws to someone because, there are thousands of ways someone could judge, hurt, and exploit said fears and flaws. It's not easy to trust people in the kind of world we live in, and crap he acted like she did it on purpose to hurt him, NEWS FLASH BUDDY, SHE DIDN'T!!! Crap this is hard when even as this is going on she still has to deal with her schizophrenia AND the depression, I mean it seems to me like Cooper left as well, and her dad isn't home much, due to work, and because Isabelle also works and she isn't that close to her, she basically has NO ONE TO TALK TO AND IT SUCKS. I now what it feels like to not know whether you can talk to someone about that certain thing thats botherjng you or just simply NOT having anyone you trust enough with that stuff, to be able to talk, it sucks a crap ton, because it'll start taking its toll and you won't realize it till, you actually really look at yourself, and I don't mean just a small little reflection, I mean like think about everything going on, and keep thinking about it for MONTHS. Some stuff is harder to talk about than other things, but even talking to yourself is better than no one, learned from experience, and I honestly hope that in the end, Shane and her can be happy, her and Cooper can be like brother and sister, and Isabelle will become the mother figure that she didn't really have. I can't wait to read more, and I hope that this ends happily. ๐Ÿ˜†

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I didn't think I would like this when I was reading and realized it wasn't a girl and a guy, but might decided to keep reading, and I sure am glad that I did, it absolutely amazing! ๐Ÿ˜€

I can't wait to see what happens between Draven and Damien I mean both love each other but, hey, not everyone is ready to put it out there their feelings for someone. Hopefully Draven hasn't gone and done something stupid to get himself hurt, because i dont think Damien will survive that. But I won't know till I keep reading, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Honestly love this so much and I wasn't expecting the tungsten that have happened to happen. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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This is great! Lately I have been getting more into the MC type books, and I love them. I can't wait to read more!

I rally hope that this is a series and that there is more books to it, I would love to know what happens between Hunter and Mari, but I also feel like for some reason there is something with Runner and Gemma, she may be little, but crap. She trusted him as Asa two year old when he literally just said he was a weapons specialist and yeah, obviously Mari and Hunter have something going, so what's Runners place in all this? And do we get to see some of the other Riders get their women? Or we'll in better words FINA their women?

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This is amazing! I love this and I can't wait to red more!

I totally 'ship' Rye and Thera, but honestly how did she not see Maple and Graham as a total 'shiped' relationship? No idea how she didn't see it in the way they both talked and acted, but whatever, and Christie and and Trevor, YES completely perfect! Barbie and need Giovanni, for sure deserve each other. Rayna andndndnd Ian seem perfect! And if Thera and Ian can be friends again, well that would be awsome, but I 'ship' Ian and Rayna.

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more!

I really want to know what's or who is attacking the vampyres and shadow wolves. At first I was thinking that it might have been the one girl who 'loved' Daoris but, he killed her, so I don't even know anymore. It might be an old enemy from after what happened to is mom, which I haven't finished reading all of what's updated on here, so I might be missing some pieces, but I have a feeling it something from his past, witches, or both. Either way, this is amazing, and I can't wait to read more, and find out what happens next. ๐Ÿ˜†

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I love this! I can't wait to read the rest, and find out what happens next! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

This is amazing and I can't wait to read more! I hope the crap with Bradley is solved, and I hope that all of the newly mated lycans, will be able to create family's and be happy. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Oh. My. Gosh... this is a very good, and powerful story...

I wasn't expecting her to be so young when she was being beaten, how old was she when it started? It had to be a whole long time, and she had to be really young to believe that what he was doing to her was proper 'punishment'. I just can't believe it, who would purposefully do that to their own child!? Let alone any child or person for that matter! This is a really good book, and I can't wait to read more, and I hope that Will and Bailey will start dating officially and that Bailey can put all of this behind, granted it's not going to be easy, but with help she will pull through.

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This is amazing! I really wasn't expecting that Enzo had meant what he said...

I was really caught off guard when in Enzo went through with his thought, I mean he seriously just thought that he had wanted to rip out Andersons heart, and I was like, oh, that expression expressing his anger... BUT THEN HE ACTUALLY RIPPED THIS DUDES WHOLE HEART OUT!!! I searched I must have read that line, and stared like a whole dumb person, for a good 10 minutes... I mean I love this book very much and yes I would prefer if the main character was a little older say 19 or 20 ish, but I get why she is that young, needed to represent the naivety of her personality and how much different and more dangerous Enzo really is from her. But I really wasn't expecting THAT dangerous, still think he's pretty awsome though, lol. Nothing can change facts, he may be dangerous, but everyone has a different side to them, whether it be good or bad. Either way though, I love the book, and can't wait to keep reading! Please update soon!

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I love this and I can't wait to read more!

So far it's really good, but I wanna know, in the future will she either end up being mated to that Rouge guy, and feel more of a pull towards him? Is that why she doesn't feel as strong a pull to jason? Because her true mate is that Lyman rouge? Urg! You know it's a good book if you are kept on edge and have little hints or things that seem like hints pointed out, making you want to find out and read more. This is really good, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜†

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This is great! I can't wait to read more! Sounds like the 1/4 of the city they don't ya know own/monitor and is part of another gangs, seems like it's River/Noah's, it's actually funny that all he kept saying was "katy?" Like yes dude, it is that katy, quit saying her name or you'll wear it out.

I love this so far, and I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see if those two gangs join together, or they fight, it would be pretty cool if they joined because then it's the whole town/city and they can get it done better and easier. And who is this Jace character? Why is she only now scared and it's 3 years since she has been scared? Is he blackmailing her? Is he someone who has and will hurt the people in her life she cares about?

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This is amazing, but sooo sad! I really wish Kai was still alive, or could be reborn. He didn't deserve to die, and I feel for Leah and Alec, Leah just got her life together perfectly, things were behind them, and then her favorite and best child was killed, because of Alec's past, and the war. Kai either better come back, or Crow better die!

Honestly I hope that Kai comes back AND CROW DIES! Kai didn't deserve to die, and Leah alec and their family plus the pack didn't deserve to lose him either. Hope Jade is okay too, and I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜†

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Oh my goodness, she needs to read that letter, and give Josh another chance, I am literally crying, he can't say to her what he feels, and she doesn't know that he actually really loves her, and has from the begining.

I hope she gives Josh another chance, reads the letter, and I wish Josh could tell her how he feels. I am crying because in his perpesctive, we know what he is trying to tell her, and what he feels for her and about the situation. So we now that it is just a misunderstanding, but then we see her perspective and it just makes it harder. Crap, I really hope she gives him another chance, he deserves to get to tell her exactly how he feels.

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The is really good! I can't wait to read more!

What is the second vial she is hising? What did the original vials do? Will Aiden tell her that they are mates? What happened with her that she has scarred skin on her neck down the left shoulder side, and on her legs? I can't wait to know what happened! This is amazing, and just can't wait to read more!

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This is really good, I can't wait to read more!

I hope that my assumption is correct, and Dominic and Felicity, will get married and start a family together. I have a feeling that Felicity is pregnant, because she keeps getting nauseous at certain smells, and is throwing things up a lot, but she doesn't have a fever.

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Wow, this is really good! I hope they can save Rose before something happens.

I can't believe her adoptive father, and boyfriend did those things to her, it's just not right, and no one, and I mean absolutely no one should ever have to go through that in their lives. what happened to her would never be ok, under any circumstances. I just hope Theo and Emma can make it to Rose on time, before she gets hurt further than she already is.

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It's short, but really good.

It doesn't seem like it's skimpy and details are missing, and it also doesn't feel like the chapters are to long. It is good though, I don't think I have read a story where, the girl was the maid and was like 17, and had to be there at the guys hoise, it's cool, something a little different but the general first hate turns to love, story. Also I am going to be p****d off if Ryder is cheating on Summer, I have a feeling he is though, he didn't answer till her third call, and was panting when he did answer, and stuttered like crazy, before saying he was jogging. After saying that he just plainly and quickly told her that he wouldn't see her for study session and hung up, so I have a feeling he is cheating, but I will still be pretty. I hate people who cheat on their girlfriend/boyfriend or husband/wife, makes no sense, if you didn't like them in the first place, why date/marry them?

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I love this book! It's truly amazing and I am really happy that these chapters are long!

I'm only about halfway through this, and that is because the chapters are really long, and extremely good! I started reading this a day ago at like 4 pm and kept reading till 2 am stopping to eat of course. I have currently been reading since 9 pm and I am probably going to keep reading till about 1-2 am. I can't wait to see if Madison will be able to successfully have her baby, while also living. And I can't wait to see if they find Mortimer and kill him for good, I mean why didn't they stake him, cut off his head, AND THEN put him in the lead coffin, actually if they had chopped him up and put him in seperated coffins, THEN AND ONLY THEN, would they for sure know he was ACTUALLY DEAD. His is a truly a,along book though, and I can't wait to read more. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is amazong! Amazing I can't wait to read more!

Finley is such a darn idiot! He accused her of lying to him, without even giving her a chance to explain! It's not cool, and I really hope that he can pull his crap together long enough to at least make things right between them, and I hope he keeps it together longer than that, I mean he obviously likes her, and I believe she likes him, but if he doesn't go and fix what he has done, he is gonna lose her before he even gets the chance to get her.

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Isa and Roy, had better get together, and I am thinking Dorian and Divi should get together as well, that would be so funny! I honestly just don't now about Lance so yeah, he's on his own. But either way I love this story, and I can't wait to read the rest!

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This is amazing! I love this so much!

I hope that Max and her can be happy as mates, and have a family together. I can't wait to read more it's really good.

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I love this book! I can't wait to read more! Honestly I am on Zac's side.

I am on Zac's side, sure Nathaniel is perfect, he's nice and kind but honestly, I don't like him, I mean anyone you meet could be nice and kind, but only want you for something else, so it's hard for me to trust him, and the fact that he already knows he loves her, well that don't sit well with me, it takes a while for you to even realize that you are starting to have feeling for someone, but then it takes even longer to actually admit to yourself that you love that person, then there is the casually admitting to that person that you love them. Honestly Zac is still in the admitting to himself he loves her, and that's more believable than the perfect Nathaniel. It's also the fact that in really most any stories I find I like the demon/bad boys, more than I do the angel/goody-to-shoes. So yeah, naturally, I am on Zac's side. Either way, I love this story whole bunch, and I can't wait to read more!

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His is amazing! I love this, and I can't wait to read the rest!

I am almost at the end, but I can't wait to read the rest! It's so amazing, and I can't believe William is cool about Gemma meeting up with Declan. I was expecting him to get mad, and move away, and when she asked if he would Ave let her go if she had taken him, I wasn't expecting him to say, 'yes' so casually. I mean I would've been so awkward, and a bit sad, especially since that person didn't think I would, or that they didn't tell me till afterwards, I mean, what if something happened? Nothing was really probably going to happen, but still, you don't know what the future holds. Ok either way, I absolutely LOVE this book, and I can't wait to read the rest!

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OH MY GOODNESS! I just read the part where she found out that Jacob and Veronica are actually related to Jake, oh my goodness!

That means that my assumption, of Jenny being Jake's REAL mother, are completely TRUE! I think. That means that Mr.Carter cheated on his wife with...wait a minute! He cheated on his wife with the MAID, THE FREAKIN MAID!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜  What in the world is wrong with him?! Not cool, not cool at all. Crap, ok rant over.

I love the book, and I can't wait to read more! It's really amazing, and I hope things progress between Elena and Jake.๐Ÿ˜†

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This is amazing! Amazing I can't wait to read more!

I honestly wasn't so ready for Sloane to totally slice and dice Claire, I know it seems horrible, but that certain person that I can't exactly call a certain name, definitely deserves it. I can't edit till Claire is gone. Ok over with rant, I love this book, and I can't wait to see what happens. ๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really really good! Please update soon! I am about to read the 6th chapter, and I love this story so far, I can't wait to read more!

I keep sitting here wondering when the shadow man will be back and I'm like oh my goodness! It's him! And then I wonder, but WHY is he back? Either way I love this story and I can't wait to read more!!

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This is an amazing book! And I can't wait to read more! ๐Ÿ˜†

I am really hoping that Aurora isn't killed when the spikes disappear, and that her and Cirrus can actually be together without any problems, and like get married, and be somewhat normal.

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more!

I can't wait to see what happens next, and I have so many questions. How does Daniel know Parker? What's wrong with Liam? Did Scott actually cheat on Abby? Did Falon cheat on Anne with Becca? Is Anne pregnant? Is that why she is marrying Falon? What's going on with Parker? Did Liam and Daniel have a relationship going on? Is that why Liam was so messed up around the time it was decided that Daniel's plug would be pulled? I have thousands of questions! And I can't wait to read more and get the answers to those questions. I honestly love this book a lot!๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really good! good and I can't wait to read more!

I wasn't expecting this good being that there is only a couple chapters, but this is really good! I love it!๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really good! I can't wait to see what happens next will Zach find out what's happening? Will Lena get the help she needs to escape her brother and father? Crap so many questions, and this is really truly an amazing book.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

I love the book so far, and I can't wait to read more! I have so many questions, but I don't wanna spoil the book. I love the details and it's got a good story line, at least so far with what I have read, I am on the chapter right after Lena and Zach left her grandparents, so I can't wait to see if we get to see part of the story from Zach'a point of view. Love the book a lot, and can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is amazing! I don't know why Rhett doesn't want a mate, but apparently he just doesn't.

I mean why doesn't he want a mate, it seems like every other Lyman that I've heard about, WANTS a mate, and it's not a burden, I mean crap, yeah they take the girls without permission, well in this case it was a willing offer. But whatever, still, what's Rhett's reasoning for not wanting a mate? Because it honestly doesn't make any sense.

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This is really really good! On the little blurb at the beginning of the book, it said "Book 1 of 12" does that mean you have the other 11 books posted? Because honestly this is a great book.

I am really hoping that Carina learns to love Diego, I mean yes she was taken against her will, but he obviously cares, and he didn't just take her right there where he found her, he healed her, gave her eater, and is bringing her somewhere to rest, which I doubt they will actually be resting but, whatever. It's an amazing book, and I can't wait to read the rest, and if you have the other ones up, I would love to read them.

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I love this book! I can't wait to read more, and I honestly am so happy that Ryleigh stuck up for herself. She definitely needed to.

I am so happy that Ryleigh stuck up for herself to her family, I mean she is right, family shouldn't make you feel like an outcast, unwanted, ugly, fat, or anything other than beautiful/handsome, and an overall good person, you know unless you actually a terrible person. But still, her family KNEW that she was kind, and beautiful, and yet they kept making her feel like an outcast and unwanted IN HER OWN FAMILY. It should not have happened at all, but know it's solved, and I surely hope that Axel and Ryleigh can patch things up between them, and that they will hopefully one day, get married and have kids of their own.

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I love this book! And I can't wait to read more!

I'm really hoping Violet opens up more to Derek, I mean, they both obviously love each other, even if they won't admit it. They should just get in with it already! I mean just ask her out Derek, and Violet obviously just needs to stop thinking about her "No-Dating" rule, it's no longer even a thought or rule, I mean come on, you went on a date with him, and did 'stuff' with him.

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This is good, but it needs more detail, and definitely a little better story line.

Three needs to be something that hooks the reader, it could use some more details, and it needs some work in a couple other areas. I mean I only have like 2-3 questions and it isn't like huge questions, I am reading because I enjoy books like these, but, honestly it's gonna need some work if you want this published as an actual book. I like the overall plot, but it needs more details and better consistency with what's happening, I mean I honestly don't understand, at all, what types of supernatural creatures there are, and why Dastan is so comanding, but ends up sobbing when she becomes submissive, it doesn't make sense. Oo, I am going to hope some questions are answered, and that this gets worked on to improve on the story.

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I love this book, and I can't wait to read more!

OK, there might be some spoilers in this review, so if you don't want any, don't read this review.

Ok, so I am following Antiopes thought process and I believe she is thinking that maybe, after Magnus had attacked and supposedly slaughtered the whole rogue village, some of the kids/babies survived, and grew up as rogues, you know since it was a rogue village. But I think that the wolves that had attacked Antiope were those survivors, and that the village still has rogues living there. I mean, they didn't check the bodies they just left them to rot. I really hope that Magnus and Antiope, are blessed with many children, and that those two don't get seperated or killed before they have a chance to live together as mates should.

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Wow... I was thinking that something had happened and she might have a kid, but I wasn't actually expecting to be true... really really hope that things work out between those two.

I love this book and I can't wait to read kmre! I honestly wasn't expecting her to blurt out "I have a five year old daughter!" Like at all, and I wish she had said something before hand, because he definitely deserved to know. And now all I can think about is, are they going to stay together? I am hoping they do, they belong together.

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Dude! I can't wait to read more, I mean not like super into the gay stuff, but, yeah this is Stig's story, and I wanna know what happens.

I love these bokks, and I hope you update soon, I am I think on chapter 8 or 9, man, why did Tor have to call and interrupt are that precise moment?!?! I mean, like I said jot super into those types of relationships, I am not against them either tho. But they were about to get somewhere, and not just heated thoughts and stares, crap... Stig also needs to take a chance, honestly and he needs to stop being a chicken about the fact that he is gay, and that the riders won't judge him.

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I love this book, are you making a seventh one? I would love to read a book about Tor, Stig, Vince, and the other riders' stories. Please make more books, these are amazing and I honestly can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Please, please, put a seventh book out! I love these books, and I can't wait to read more. Of course that is if you put out more books. I loved the details, and the story lines of each of your books, and if you post more books, I am sure I will read them! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Ironhand seriously needs to up his self-esteem, and tell her how he feels. Crap he is being such a total d***.

Ironhand needs to seriously handle this crap, and he needs to do it fast. I love these books, and I can't wait to read more. I can't wait to read the 6th one, if there is going to be a 6th one that is. If there are going to be more than just these 5 books, I hope that one of them is Tor's, because man, does that man, need a women, and not one of the rotters, an actual Valkrie. Can't wait to read more, and these are so good!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

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This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! I hope Magdalene and Runner will get together and Magdalene will become Runner Valkrie.

I love this book so much, and I can't wait to read more! I honestley can wait to read what happens between Runner and Magdalene, I really really hope that Magdalene become especially Runners Valkrie, it would be awsome, and they both deserve it. Man I can not wait to read more! It's and extremely amazing book!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜

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This This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! And I hope to read more with Lysa kicking Vik's a**.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I love these books, and I can't wait to read morw, and I can't wait till Vik cleans up his act, and gets to now Lysa. I also want to know what's the deal with Lysa having only one friend and not wanting to think about her, I mean what happened that she can't think about her only feiend, and man-o-man can I not wait to see how this story pans out.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

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This is a amazing! I can't wait to read more! And wow, this story is just, wow...

I love this story, I mean I wasn't expecting the next book to be about Rage, but it is, and yeah, I love how they just laughed after Rage realized it was her first time, and he didn't hurt her. Lol I died right there, because he thought the worst had happened, and then it didn't.๐Ÿ˜† can't wait to read the last couple chapters, and then I am gonna start the 3rd book. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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I love this story! I can't wait to read more, and the other ones you have posted!

This is really good, and I really hope, that Ava moves in with Bjorn because I would kinda be a little miffed if she didnt, I mean crap your looking for a house, you love the man that is offering you to stay with him, and his house doesn't sound all to shabby if you ask me. OK also I hope Ava doesn't get urticaria and that Bjorn doesn't get hurt either, neither one of them need to lose anyone else in their lives.

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Um... I just started reading this, it sounded amazing, why don't you have the whole story posted?

I really would like to read this but you don't have the whole story posted, why? It looks like you did have it at one point, but looks like you made actual copies and are selling them, I don't know, but I would like to read the full story, would you be able to have the full book on here?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ž

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This is really really good! I can't wait to read more!

Why do I have a feeling that what the elder guy is saying is correct? Like I feel like Amelia did briefly die, and that allowed Ana's soul to go into Amelia's biddy, but since Amelia's ego, and personality is stronger and bigger, that was the one that stuck. Also I like Amelia's personality better than what the description of Ana's is. Hope that those two mate soon though, and that they find whoever crashed them, and that person who crashed them, gets the punishment they deserve.

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This is really good! I don't know what in Cafe's life was so dark that he had to reject scarlet, but he should know, she wouldn't have judged.

I can't wait to see if Cade and Scarlett actually end up mating and ya know becoming good mates to each other, I mean I also wouldn't exactly mind if Scarlett and Kaden mated though, Cade totally deserves to not have Scarlett in his life. But at the same time ever I want Cade of be happy, I mean if something was so bad he thought he had to reject his own mate? Well then it has to be really bad, or he is just really stupid.

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This is good, I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

I really hope Zariyah gets the happy ending she deserves, I would cry again if she ends up losing more of the people she cares about.

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I love this story so far, can't wait to read more. Love the details, and the twin thing is really cool, wonder how and if that actually happens to some pairs of twins, hmm. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ž

I love this story, it's great! Can't wait to read more, I also wanna see if Aaron and Zariyah (no idea if I spelled it right at all, sorry...) Well I wanna see if they end up together. Would be awesomely amazing! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜€

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This is really really good, update soon please!๐Ÿ˜†

I love this so far, and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon, I am super close to finishing what chapters are posted, and I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is good! I can't wait to read more.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Only have 3 or 4 chapters left to read, but update soon, this is really good and I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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This is really good, when are you updating again?

I am on chapter 14 ish, and it is really good, but I saw you haven't updated in 2 months. When do you usually update? And when are you going to next? Because this is an amazing story so far. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I love this book! I can't wait to read more!!๐Ÿ˜†

I seriously can't wait till they can be together, and I hope it's soon. Man I also really hope Freya's father doesn't think Falcon is the one who kidnapped her. Urg, I gotta read more it is really good.๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really good! Good I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†

I love ethics story so far! Far I really can't wait to read more! I think Jim am on chapter 17 not sure, I am not good with Roman numerals, but hey, I love rhetoric book so far!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† it is really amazing and I really hope that Sebastian actually doesn't break her heart. It would be incredibly sad if he ended up divorcing her anyways, and you can tell she cares for him a little, and it grows day by day. Really can't wait to read more thoug!๐Ÿ˜Š

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more, and see what happens next!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I am really curious about hunters story, and I can't wait to read more of this. Crap thpugh what happened to Lindsay is horrible, but I do want to know, who called the police? Who saved her? And who is charlie? And was that Jay in that cell looking at the picture? URG!! So many questions! *sigh* well I really can't wait to find out the rest and read more, it is really good.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is amazing! Amazing I amazing I am only on chapter 10, and I love it already!!! I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I really can't wait to red what happens next, this is just an amazing story.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š I love it soo much, I mean I wasn't expecting the werecats part but crap, that is a good story you have going there, I really seriously can't wait to read more! I am gonna go finish read the rest of what you have updated, but please update more soon!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† it really is truly amazing.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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This is good so far, I can't wait to read more!

I hope Livia tells them about her having Luekemia soon, I mean they kinda gotta be prepared to deal with her death, no matter how fast or slow it is coming upon them. I really hope she gets cured of cancer (highly unlikely but whatever) and her and Jemima get together, and stay together.

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more.๐Ÿ˜†

I was thinking Kiara was going to fall in love with Jasper, but she might still, I don't know I haven't finished reading it fully, she literally just pulled lever and man, I was seriously hoping she wouldn't, I mean he is going to find her and he is going to punish her, I just don't know how yet. I just hope things work out ok for them.

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This is really good! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I really like this so far, update soon please! Like I seriously don't know how to review it, it is really good, I like the detail, and the emotions, and I can't wait to see what happens next!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really good, I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I haven't finished reading this all the way, but so far I really love this a lot! Great job! Wow I just don't know own what to say, lol it is truly amazing thpugh! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I love this! This I can't wait to read more, you are a great writer I love the detail and it is just, wow I love it!๐Ÿ˜

I really truly love this it has amazing details, and is really good, I can't wait to read what happens next!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Crap, I can't wait to read mor! This is too good! Good I good I poverty it soo much!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I love this and I can't wait to read more! I mean Johnathon and Rosalie are obviously perfect for each other and I just can't wait till they find out who tried to hurt Rosalie, I also am hoping so bad that Johnathon asks her to marry him, crap it would be perfect. Well, I am going to read more now, I love this though!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I can't wait to read, more crap this is so good!

Chris and Christie need to work that crap put, that's for sure. Can't wait to read more, and I can wait till Alec and Isabelle mate soon. I keep sitting here wondering "what was that flower that was in Miranda's house? And why was she so adamant about getting Isabelle out of there after Isabelle saw the flower?" I mean you gotta think the last time that Isabelle saw Miranda was after she was kicked out of Miranda's house after finding that strange flower, so could Miranda's disappearance be connected to whoever that flower meant? ARGH! I can't wait to read more, and I have only a couple chapters left till I finish what is here ( like what was posted for chapters, since not all the chapters have been uploaded.) *sigh* I hope things work out well for the mated and soon to mated, like Alec and Isabelle, Chris and Christie, Xena and Alice (raising Noah and him not turning out bad), Mark (yet to find his mate,) Rem and Grace (tyring to have children, even though they both want them, a very low chance for Grace to be able to conceive.) Really sorry if there are spoilers on this, just has a lot to think about and commment about.

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I love this, but I cried so hard when Leah died.๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

Wow, I thought that she would live after it, not die... wow I just almost completely sobbed over here, crap that is so sad.

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I love this, and I can't wait to read more!

This is really good, hope they get married one day, glad Sebastian is gone though. Really can't wait to read more!

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This is really good, hmm I wasn't expecting this at all.

I hope Jaxon isn't stuck in a wheelchair the rest of his life, that would suck. Also Scott and Brenda are perfect for each other, and I can't wait to see if they get together. I also hope that Jaxon will give Salma a chance and date her. Delilah needs to get rid of Wyatt though and start dating Clive I mean, crap they obviously like each other, and Wyatt honestly gives me the creeps.

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I think I have an idea who the people who did this could be... Hmmm...

I think it was either Helen or Catherine, that did that to Jill. There is like no other explanation for it, I don't know who else it could be. Wow I love the story though!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Wow, I just found out there was a second book to death saved me, I kept waiting for it to be updated again!

Lol I am an idiot I started reading death saved me about 2 months ago and like the stupid person I am after finishing it might was just waiting for an update, instead of looking to see if it was complete and whether or not there was a second boom to it. Either way I love this book, and I can't wait to read more!

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Hmmm... Wonder when Drew's going to tell Harvey about home likening her, and when Harvey is going to tell Drew about liking him.

I am not trying to spoil, I am just curious. I mean, what's going to happen between those two and will Harvey tell Drew what's going on in her lofe? Will Drew tell Harvey what's going on in his? Crap I gotta be vague so I am not spoiling in case people look to reviews of the book, instead of you know, actually reading part of it to see. But whatever I get it, but still lol being vague is hard.

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I love this, wow I just love the details, I mean how much detail you put into the Christianity part, just wow... it's a real eye opener.

Wow, this is really good, I just can't wait to read the rest, I really love the detail you put into this especially about the Christianity I mean, that really was an eye opener, I never thought about it that way and I am a Christian! Like I am sitting here reading and I am thinking about it and I am just like "wow... this makes a bunch of sense, why didn't I see it this way before?" I love the book though, it is truly amazing.๐Ÿ˜Š

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Please update soon, I love this story so much it's AMAZING! I love it!

Again, update soon, I love this story sooo frickin' much it's unbelievable! I thought at first the threatening texts were River but it's not obviously because we'll she got one when they attacked and he was there so he's out of the question, then I thought it was Christian then she got attacked, yet again. Now I think it might be her dad. I mean he was over possessive of her, and each time she got a text he wasn't there, if it isn't her dad it's Alpha Black, but what I'd don't understand is why he would call Olivia HIS if he never met her and she never met him, I mean as far as I am aware. Also Dante and Olivia better be together not River and Olivia or Christian and Olivia, because only Dante and Olivia are right together, I do think though that River is her actual protecter and Christian is her normal best friend, why do I have I have a feeling Christian will get involved and have to know about the werewolf thing anyways? OK this is a long comment I know, but crap this is just so good and I can't wait to read more, there is also the fact that it is currently 11:45 p.m. and I am tired so I am ranting, either way so far I love the story! Please update soon, can't wait to read more!

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I love this so much so far, I can't wait to read more!

I love this a lot, I really hope they get to keep their art store. Things would be amazing if Nico didn't take the job interview at that architects place in New York and just stayed with Zoey. I honestly can't wait to read more though! It is just so amazing!

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This story is so good so far, I love it!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I really can't wait to read more, I keep wondering what Reign is thinking and if he thinks Skylar is jealous, not just annoyed. Hope Reign breaks up with Karley though, she is just way too annoying for my likings.

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I love this story, it is so good!

I seriously can't wait to read more, it is really good. I honestley don't get why most of the comments are judgy I mean this story is great, yes gra,,AR is off but other than that it is fantastic! So I honestley don't understand why when there are a couple mistakes someone points them out so harshly, I mean everyone and I mean everyone makes mistakes, a couple errors here and there on a story that was probably something that was just what the author wanted to do and write about, no reason to get all micro-mistake finder on the story.

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love the story, I can't wait to read more! I really hope that Rina can get rid of her father.

Again I say I hope Rina can get rid of her father, and for good. I mean it wouldn't be a nice life to always have to worry about it, and to wonder if your children are safe. That stuff would just suck, I mean can you imagine 24/7 constantly wondering and worrying, if your own father, was coming that day to kill you and your cubs/children? Would not enjoy it one bit, I would probably just end up getting extremely stressed out and freak out at the littlest of things.

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I love the story so far.โ˜บ

I am actually hoping that Bell breaks it off with Lex and that she starts to have a relationship with Mr. Vasciliscur (I don't even know if I spelled that right,sorry.) But anyways I really hope those 2 get together, they would be a perfect match.

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I love this so far, great job!

It is really really good so far, I can't wait to see if she ends up liking him again, it would be awsome. Hopefully he isn't as much of a butthole as he seem to be at first.

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I love this story so far, can't wait to read more!

I love the story so far but I have a question. Why is it written in all italicized letters? Also I can't wait to see if they end up actually liking each other to where they aren't uncomfortable with each other.

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I love this story so much I can't wait to read more, dang it's really really good.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you for writing this it is sooo amazing I love it alot! I can't wait to read what happens next I also can't wait to see whether or not Hope and Blaze will have kids and when they will mate it will be awsome if they have kids I hope they do!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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I love this story, I can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I love this sooooo much!!! I can't wait to read more, it's amazing!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I love this book, I can't wait to read more about it.

I love this story it can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Trever and Violet need to make ends up fast, and they better solve the issue involving their fathers and Carlos.

I really hope that Trever and Violet get together and make up, along with figuring out all the crap involving their fathers and Carlos. Cause if they don't, I will be mad they both deserve to have a happy ending after all this crap that's going down.

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I can't wait till Eva and Adarlic mate soon and that they keep those kids and adopt them themselvea.

I seriously can't wait till Eva and Adarlic are mated, I really hope though that Eva and Adarlic just adopt the other kids I mean wouldn't it be much easier and then no one would have anxiety separation issues because of it. I am also hoping that they have their own kids too like actually theirs not adopted I mean I get that the other kids are still their kids but yeah... Eva having a kid and being pregnant would be funny and just plain out awsome.

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It isn't bad but I think it needs a lot more detail it is a very fast paced and not really detailed sentences but other than that I like it.

It is really good just need a bit more details other than that it is perfect, you could actually just use these that you already wrote has guidelines for an even better version. Great job though.๐Ÿ˜Š

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I love this story so Fricki'n much and I can't wait till daimians mother's secret is found out and Damian can date and love Ellie

I love this so much and I really really can't wait to see the need of it, I really hope Damian and Ellie end up getting married and having kids to gather has well has Olivia and Ellison getting married and having kids together, I also hope that Damians mother's secret is found out and she quits cheating on her husband and that Ellie doesn't see or hear from Henry again, I actually think Henry is the one damians mom is cheating on damians dad with. Just saying. It makes sense why Damian wouldn't lime the guy and why Fred wouldn't either they know somethings wrong with the guy but don't know that's it is actually damians mom is cheating on damians dad with henry. I also severely hope that Damian and Ellie end up having a relationship without complications from anyone else it would be perfect ending.

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I love this story it's amazing!๐Ÿ˜Š

I really really hope that Celia finds her mom and catches the Haley girl, and I really hope her and Reece are the halves of each other, the only ones for each other, and no one else. It would be just fantastic if they were because they totally belong together.

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Rose and Ryder better be together alive by the end of this.

Rose doesn't deserve to have to marry Caleb, yes he could someday become a close friend but never roses one and only love, only Ryder will ever be there like that for her. And he better find her and rescue/come to her aid and they better get married and live happily without any more interruptions from her father. I also really hope she gets to strangle her father like she wants because if she doesn't soon she'll go crazy.

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Love this story classic teenage romance dream. It's really good ๐Ÿ˜†

I really really hope Apollo asks Iridessa out to be his girlfriend and that things work out between them.

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I love this story, can't wait till Gideon comes to Layla's rescue and kills Helen

This story is just Amazing I love it so much, I really can't wait to see Gideon tear Helen to shreds and save his beautiful erasthi (I don't even know if I spelled that right.) It's going to be nice seeing if those two have kids.

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I love this so much I really hope Sierra finds the others 2/3's of the heart and then she gets to live happily with Seth and Dante with Elvan.

Dante better realize that Abby is using him to get to Seth and Sierra and that he finds Elvan and Sierra finds the other 2/3's of the heart and that she lives happily with Seth it would be amazing and this is an amazing story I love the plot twists.

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Tiberious better tell her it all completely and fully, as well as Crystal understanding and telling him how she feels.

I really hope soon Crystal finds out the rest of the story. I also hope she tells Tiberious how she feels and then they will both be able to shift freely AND get to mate.

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Hades and persephone need to get married and actually be completely happy together in the underworld. Maybe even start a family.

I really love this book and I hope Hades finds Persephone soon, I also hope after he finds her they get married and start a family I also hope that Demeter will except Hades and the fact that he actually loves Persephone and Persephone loves him just as much back.

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Aspen better beat the crap outta Theodore cause he sure as heck deserves it.

I really like this story and I really really am rooting for Aspen to beat the crap outta Theodore and also really really rooting for Landon and Aspen to get together after all this and be happy has a family.

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I hope Syn and Terrine can become mates and Terrine needs to realize Syn IS his mate whether he likes it or not.

I hope Terrine and Syn find happiness together as mates and that Terrine finds out what happened to Syn and that Syn doesn't have another option.

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Hacota better become Lohan again and man up and tell Cleo how he feels, seriously.

Hakota needs to tell Cleo he messed up and regain his rightful place as the alpha male and Cleo by his side as the alpha female, I really hope he quits the tantrums soon too though and realizes he just needs to tell her he made a mistake honestley because if he doesn't he will never be the same and neither will she. I also hope they have pups after all this is solved and that Sitka finds his mate and they all end up at least happy, I have a feeling that Sebastian will die and then that will be the only way that Cleo and Hakota will end up together and happy. And Hakota best realize his mistakes mighty fast or by the time he does it will be far too late.

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Really good so far can't wait to read more!๐Ÿ˜†

I hope ember backs off soon she is so annoying and I know that if I had courage at all I would have slapped that stupid smirk right off her face. No joke, but seeing as I am a wimp and also it is a story I can't though I would've liked to, I honestley hate girls like that who think they are all that and have a right to act like that. It really irks me.

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This is really good I hope cleon accepts him has her mate.

I hope Cleo will realize her feelings for Hacota, and accept it and become his mate while being happy.

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I love this story so much. It is so amazing!๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

I really like the detail in this, I love it soo much it is awsome!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I really love this story so far! It is amazing!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I really hope that she accepts him has her mate and they grow old together, married, mated and in every other way possible. It would be perfect ending after all the crazy crap goes down.

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OH MY GOODNESS! Amazing, I can't believe she's shifting!

I have a feeling she is gonna live through the shift but still difficult and I hope she either dates Reece or Jacob cause for Reece I think it is just blood luster of HER blood but you never know, I actually think Jacob and Sam would be better than Reece because I can't tell if Reece just has the blood luster for her or actual feelings. Wow I really can't believe she started to shift in the middle of a conversation with rece, just when it was getting heated! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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That is so sad, I can't believe Angelina's dad passed.๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜”

I am really trying not to cry and I hope Angie and Addie can make up and find out the truth. I am also hoping Addie tells Shane everything and I hope he tells her that she is beautiful just the way she is and he likes her like that. Man super hard not crying about Angie's dad dying, has to be so flippin' difficult for her to cope with it.

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I love this story so much!๐Ÿ˜†

This is an amazing story, I can't believe Eric did that to Cecilia it just isn't right and I feel really bad for her. I am really hoping though over time Layla and Cecilia will go back to complete normal along with Eric and Cecilia going back to dating and even possibly in the near future marriage!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I love this story sooo much!๐Ÿ˜†

I really can't wait to find out what Thirteen wants with Emma watts and why he called her his "Queen" it just kinda creepy, OK I mean you don't even know who she is and yet your calling her your queen? Creepy indeed.

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I love this story it is a beautiful story.

Beautiful, I love it! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† This is honestley an amazing story cause who would expect because of a coin things turned out beautiful, so far. Can't wait to read more!

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I can't believe Elis is dead ๐Ÿ˜ข

I am seriously holding back tears right now, 1st she loses Elia after falling in love with him and tries to kill herself multiple times because of it then falls for Elis and has to watch him die. Her life is so complicated and sad, I hope she finds it in her to keep going.

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I love this story so freakin' much!

This was amazing I can't believe the twists and turns, it turned out absolutely amazing and beautiful I just LOVE it. For sure one of the best stories I have ever read, no joke it was really really good.

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I love this so much so far, it is amazing!๐Ÿ˜€

I really love this and I hope Zane proposes to Ava and if he does she says yes it would be amazing.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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This is really good I hope that things get solved really fast.

I really hope that it is not jack doing all of this, I suspect Aron and Paul to be the killers/schemer's because both of them act differently with her and are kinda creepy I am more leaning towards Paul doing killing and Aron doing the scheming cause 1. Paul is super creepy and hates Riley 2. Aron tries to get on Riley good side so he can find out more about her and scheme away. It only makes sense and I am really hoping it isn't jack doing the killing.

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This is great! I love it, 8 never thought the story would start out that way. Good job!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

I really was expecting the usual they had a crush on the bad boy and he fell in love with them, you put a whole new perspective on this story. Great job it is a fantastic story.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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I love this story amazing job๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

So far this is great and honestly I have only really seen like maybe a couple grammar errors and it's really amazing because usually I see a lot and it makes it harder to read the story but your story is fairly easy to read, I love it a lot. Great job with writing it.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is amazing!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ

You wrote this amazingly so far, I love it so much!

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Love this soon much right now.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I just can't believe that Ben is Jessica's father but I have a feeling that Helen cheated on her husband while Ben was cheating has well and then had Reece and when Helen had Reece and Jess's mom had jess they thought they were related except for Helen who knew she cheated, I hope that is the case. Otherwise it would be weird cause you know they just got married so if they were half brothers and half sister it would be gross for sure.

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I really love this story so much!๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜†

I really love this story it is perfect, and I can't wait to see if they start a family together it would be amazing no doubt.

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I really really like this a lot!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I can't wait to see how things will work out between Stephano and Kara, I am really hoping that they sort things out and become a real couple it would be amazing.

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This is really really good so far.

I really like this story alot, good job!๐Ÿ˜† I am really excited to see if the others (lorrenzo's friends) bet him to sleep with Zara it will be funny.

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Ok really really good so far.

Really hope I understand the chapters soon cause that was confusing, I mean one minute she's Ivana not remembering crap then she perfectly remembers everything and it's is just hard to figure out but I really like it a lot.

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I really like this a lot! ๐Ÿ˜†

Really amazing job not that many errors and I really really am enjoying the story so far, I also really hope they actually fall for each other and stop fighting and being stupid about their feelings.

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This is good so far.๐Ÿ˜†

Will there be a second book? If there already is or is going to be, what's the name of it? I really liked this one, and I can't wait to see what happens next!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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This is really amazing!๐Ÿ˜†

I really really hope that if Kelly has bone marrow cancer that she can get cured or even better not even have it!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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I really like this so far.

Good job I wasn't expecting a second one not has action packed has the last one but that makes sense, also I really hope Ian and Remi get together.

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This is really great! I love it!

I am rreeeeaaally really hoping they open up to each other and that I can find out soon what all happened to Greer's parents, and what's up with Kaleb's dad leaving or going away and where is his mom hhmmmmm? I just can't wait to read more, amazing story!๐Ÿ˜†

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This is sooooo amazing!

I love this story so much I really hope Jaxon and Ariel get together and that her family accepts him when she gets free.

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This is sooooo amazing!

I really can't wait to see what happens between them, like will she have to go through heat ever or will she get marked and then they live kinda normal lives together happy? I don't know but I can't wait, you are an amazing writer and you only have minimal grammatical errors so you are doing pretty good.

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Sounds interesting so far.

You gotta update though because I wanna know if this is gonna go somewhere great or not so great.

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This is a really great story so far.

This is an amazing story I love how portrayed lupita's feeling towards Brett and how malachi and Brett are growing on her.โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Š I really like it a lot, good job.

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Really great so far.

You give many details on how the characters are feeling and what they are doing its great, good job. I hope the stuff with Ronnie and Sebastian get cleared up so that Becca and Sebastian can be together normally in front of others.

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Really good so far.

I really like the story so far, good job. I am hoping Mason and Isabella can both get through this, more towards the together than alone though. Good job so far though.

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Really great story.

I really really hope that Nova accepts Elias has her mate and they become fully mated soon, it would be great.

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Really good story I love it so much!๐Ÿ˜†

This story is amazing I mean who would expect a girl accused of something she didn't do to fall in love with the baddest guy in the prison? It's really good hope Seth gets out and then Daisy and him can be together or at least Daisy can visit, maybe.

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Really amazing.

I can't wait to see if she picks Ricardo or James I have a feeling either neither of them or Ricardo he may be a jerk but you can tell he loves her.

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Really good so far

Wasn't expecting Talia to marry him freely and do that wow I was expecting running away on wedding day. Still amazing story though

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Amazing story

I love this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next, I am hoping really hard that Celest will forgive them completely and that her and Zeke will start to actually realize their feelings for each other and just accept it already.

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Good so far.

Waiting to see what happens between Harriet and Tyler hopefully something good โ˜บ

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Very good story, good job. โ˜บ

Really good so far, I am hoping soon Neferet finds out who's sending the flowers. I have a feeling it's argos but you never know, plot twists remember? Still a very good story though so good work.

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Very good so far I like the plot you did well conveying to the readers what the characters are feeling.

This is really good so far and I am looking forward to seeing how it ends and whether malachi's death vision comes true, or not. You never know he could die or live, personally I hope he lives and Ariella doesn't have to go through the pain of losing her mate. It would be sad, I still can't wait to see want happens though.

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Really amazing story! I love it ๐Ÿ˜†

This is a great story so far and I know by the end I will feel like I am actually part of it, that's when you can tell it's good. When you start getting drawn deeper and deeper into the story it makes you appreciate another's ability to write and you have certainly got that ability. Very well done.

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Really good so for it like it, good job โ˜บ

I like the plot a lot coming up with the females not being able to transform till having mates. I was also amazed at how well you portrayed the emotions of Cordelia it was amazing I can barely express my own feeling much less someone else's. I like what you have so far.

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I love this story so Fricki'n much!!! Can't wait to read more!!

I can't wait to read more! This is so good, I love it. I really don't know what else to say because, well... I love it! Simple fact! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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