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I LOVED this!!!!

This story was absolutely adorable and put the biggest smile on my face all the way through! I love Team Rocket and always thought Jessie and James would make a great couple, and this little story was perfect!
Your plot was so clever with the mysterious Pokémon and I really liked how everything was paced! I also especially liked that Meowth came back in the story, I was missing him!!
I also really liked that you included the “twerps”, and without even saying their actual names. It was very Team Rocket :)
The way you had them leave the team and still decide to chase Ash around at the end was just sooooo adorable I love love love it!!
Thank you for writing such an adorable story!!! :)

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